This is my first poem in my series of poems. I wrote this for my grandfather who just recently died. May he RIP. My second poem is also for him.
A New Day
Though my soul is sad,
I cannot bear the pain,
I know that you are with me,
Even though your body's slain
You told me not to cry,
I'm sorry I can't follow
But I promise I will try,
Not to cry tomorrow
I'm glad I got to know you,
To hear what you had to say,
You told me to remember,
Tomorrow's a new day
How was it? Good, bad, horrible, emo-ish? Please review.