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BPOV
I walked swiftly through the dark street, hoping that I wouldn't have to deal with any customers I found here. I heard hoots and whistles coming from the boys down the alley as I passed. I knew these boys. They called out to me every night, but never followed through. They were the construction boys who worked on the building two blocks down. They always hung out in the alley at night. I couldn't tell if they didn't have the money, or just didn't have the balls to ask me to their rooms. They must be brave though, to be working in the Tenderloin, so I decided it was the money.
I walked into the alley and thrust my nearly bare chest out, and began swinging my hips. The hoots got louder, and the whistles got more prominent. I leaned against the brick, and asked them the question I asked every night. "You boys looking for a good time tonight?" When none of them answered, I began teasing. "What, do you not feel like it tonight?" They all laughed, but gave me the same kiss on the cheek that they did every night. They were such sweet boys for this area. They shouldn't be here this late. "You boys should go home" "I'm not a boy anymore Bella, I'm 18 now." Vince smiled proudly and a little bit drunkenly. A chorus of "Yeah"'s and "That's right"'s came from the other three.
"Oh thats's right isn't it. As of October?" Vince nodded. "Wow. you're such a man, Vince."I said sarcastically. He batted me playfully. "But still. Just because you are a year older, doesn't make it any less dangerous for you MEN to be here after dark. Did you hear about those women who set a girl on fire in the park last week?" They nodded and said a slur or "Oh man"s and "uh yeah..." I felt the need to press the matter further. "Doesn't that bother you in the least?" No response. "Ok, whatever. Just don't get your selves killed over something stupid. I'm going back to Becky's. I'll see you guys tomorrow." They all started saying things that sounded like a blend of "Ok, see you tomorrow" and "We can walk you home..." "Nah, it's ok guys. I'll make it home ok, I'm here all the time. It's you I'm worried about." They just smiled and rolled their eyes at me drunkenly. I . "ok, g'nite" I walked out of the alley and back onto the street.
I hated being in The Tenderloin at night. The Tenderloin is the most dangerous part of Sanfransisco you'll find. It's filled with murderers, drug dealers and violent crime. And of course, what I do. I'm a Prostitute. I know it's not you're average respectable job, but it's all I have right now. Maybe in the future, the very far future, I'll have more options, but it's just something you have to deal with if you grow up on the streets. You have to deal with crime. And if you want to survive at all, you have to not only acknowledge crime, but you have to work it. You can't go around being homeless, and saying to people, "can I be your lawyer? No, I don't have any experience, but I'm really good at arguing." I'm a prostitute, because I don't have any money to sell drugs, or the stomach for the blood that so often comes with street crime. I'm also only a 17 year old girl. That wouldn't work too well in the Mafia if-
Gun shot.
I heard a mangled scream of a young girl. Just keep walking. Look straight ahead. If they see you looking down, you'll look intimidated which is exactly what they want. If you look at them, they'll come for you. But who got shot? Did it matter? Everyone dies at some point any way, better not to get attatched. My tights caught on a Fire Hydrent. I didn't dare bend down to unhook them. I just kept walking and let them rip.
Well, not so interesting now, but I promise it will get better. Thank you again so much for reading and reviewing if you did review. Thanks! Also, How do you add more chapters? I'm really new at this, and couldn't tell you much more than how to exit, so any help on that is appretiated too. I know this was kinda a short chapter, but It'll get better, I promise.