No Pain, no Blame

by probably-not-a-good-writer

Ok, so, this is my first fan fiction, so I probably suck at it. But basically it starts right after the first movie. Flynn comes home and sees Rapunzel knocked out on the ground. With her hair wrapped around her neck. I don't know how many chapters, we'll figure it out together! If u like it, read on. If not, give me suggestions for how to fix it. Thanks guys! Hope u like it! :)

1. Chapter 1

Tangled ~ Rapunzel and Flynn ~ No Pain, No Blame…

Chapter 1: Security doesn't last

She was cold. Real cold. Her eyes were shut, but her heart was beating; that was a good sign. What had happened while he was gone? Who ever did this to her knew what he was doing. There were no clues left of who had left her like this, on the stormiest night of the year. The amazing Flynn Rider had just returned from his championship rock-climbing tournament with a polished silver trophy under his arm, excited to show his true love his prize. He had been practicing for months, on the steep wall of Rapunzel's castle. After a late omelette breakfast made by the experienced chef, Rapunzel, Flynn left that afternoon, just as a storm was approaching. His fiancé was painting, as she always was when he left. But now, she lay cold on the floor of their tower, with her long flowing hair wrapped tightly around her neck. Someone had tried to strangle her, but had only gotten half of the job done. "Who ever did this must have heard me coming," thought Flynn. As he reflected on his arrival at the tower from just a few moments before, he recalled rustling and fast movement as he had approached. "He must have snuck out at the last moment," Flynn whispered in anger to himself. He started thinking of all the nicknames he had used on Rapunzel, like counting sheep, trying to keep himself calm and sane. Barbie (because of her old hair,) Rat-Puzzel (because it sounds like her name,) kitty (cause she was adorable with big, happy eyes,) and the name from when she had first kidnapped me and tied me up with her hair: (she was so smart and strong,) Blondie. "Aw, god, Blondie. I need you. Come back. You can do it," Flynn whispered to the unresponsive perfect body that lie in front of him. As much as he loved being tough and brave, he knew deep down that it was because of Rapunzel that he was able to keep his cool, she calmed him down. But now, Flynn had to stay strong, not for his reputation, but for Rapunzel. He had to save the best thing that had ever happened to him. Flynn carefully unwrapped the meters of hair from Rapunzel's neck, which he had kissed so many times before. After he had cut her magic golden hair to save her from her "mother," Gothel, Rapunzel had decided to grow her newly brown-coloured hair out again, since she had been used to extremely long hair for as long as she could remember. Flynn used to joke about how Rapunzel's hair could seriously hurt someone, but he never thought that someone could use un-magic hair against his beloved Rapunzel. After what seemed like forever, Rapunzel's neck was free of hair. Flynn rested his head on her chest, tearing up when he thought of how much Rapunzel would be giggling if his head were on her chest while she was awake. "Oh, shit." he thought suddenly, forgetting his happy Rapunzel flashback instantly. Her heart had stopped beating.

Thanks for reading, come back later for chapter 2 if you liked it! I don't know how many chapters this will be, I'll have to wait and see! Bye for now! (By the way, if you don't like it, can you comment and tell me how I can improve my writing? I'd love to be able to entertain you guys, so thanks!)