This is for a poetry challenge on my forum, Writing Buddies (RainClan). If you would like to join a writing challenge, look for the link on my profile.

Thanks!

Sun

It shines so bright

Trust, hope, forgiveness, happiness,

Together.

The sun

You put your trust in it,

And yet it disappears every night,

Vanishes

Gone

Poof!

Did it run away?

Sun

I've never actually writtten poetry before. I hope this one was okay. Critique and praise are both appreciated. Thank you!