Alright, this is only my 4th, so go easy on me

Can anyone tell me how you say Amity? I always say it em-it-ee. Please help.

About the year 2024, when I picture Divergent taking place.

Tris's POV


We're in my apartment in Dauntless headquarters. Tobias is sitting on my plush blue loveseat. I am curled up on his lap. He is holding the pops and the popcorn. We are watching the newest Paranormal Activity. Well, if newest means 2012, then yes, it's the newest.

"Tris, do you love me?" Tobias asks. It kind of annoys me. I have already told him this so many times.

I roll my eyes "You already know the answer. Why did you ask?" He flinches when I grab his hand. That is not like him. "Is something wrong?" Right now, I'm hoping he says no, or that he doesn't like the movie. I hope it doesn't have to do with me.

"No. No, I'm fine. Just nervous." Now he's not making any sense.

"Nervous about what?" I ask him suspiciously. "Four, is something wrong?" I know calling him Four will make him answer. I wait, but he doesn't answer. " Come on, Tobias. Just tell me before I pierce my eyes and rip out my hair!"

"Yikes." he says. " Eye-less and hairless? That's a deal breaker" Now he's just getting on my last nerve. I want to know why he's nervous, what he's nervous about, and I want to know it now.

"Tobias!" I'm yelling now, but I don't care. "Just tell me what's wrong! You're starting to creep me out! Don't think I don't know when you're hiding things, cause I do! just tell me, show me, or whatever!" He seems slightly taken aback by my anger. I don't usually yell at him. Never, actually. I automatically get up really fast, ready to head out the door when I remember that I'm in my house.

"Tris calm down," he says using the soft voice that used to scare me. " I'll show you, but you have to calm down. You already woke the Amity. Maybe the Candor, too."

"Yay. I get to see what's bothering you. Fun." I say sarcastically.

"I told you, it's not bothering me, it's making me nervous." he says with a pointed look. "Will you hand me my keys?" I didn't realize I was holding them until he asked for them. I'm about to hand them over when I think of something. A smile curls at the end of my lips.

"If you want them, you'll have to get them," I say as I hide them behind my back. Tobias walks over and reaches behind me to get them when I get up on my toes and kiss him. He tastes buttery and salty from the popcorn and I realize he's probably thinking the same thing. I don't really care, though because he tastes good any way. I drop the keys and wrap my arms around his neck at the same time as he puts his hands on my waist. I close my eyes and part my lips. He parts his lips, too. Just as he starts to deepen our kiss, Christina knocks on my door.

"Tris, are you in there?" I ignore her because I am too involved in the moment. Just as she starts to knock again, Tobias pulls away.

"Answer her, she's your best friend" he mumbles. I can't blame him, I wouldn't want Christina to hear me either if I was in his position. I lick my lips and walk up to the door.

"What?" I snap at her. I didn't mean to be rude, but I was kind of busy. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to be rude." I say with an apologetic tone.

"It's fine." she says. "I'm friends with you. I'm actually used to it." She invites herself in and stops when she sees Tobias sitting awkwardly on the couch. Realization dawns on her face. "Oh." she says. "I'm interrupting. That's why you were rude. And why you took so long to enter." She directs her gaze to Tobias. "Hey, Four. What were you guys doing? Getting cozy?" a weird look crosses Tobias's face, and she quickly corrects herself. "Sorry. This is still awkward for me."

"Nice save." I mutter. " So what did you want?"

"Oh, right. That. Can we talk somewhere else? It's not comfortable talking to you in front of your man. No offence, Four."

"None taken," he replies with a forced smile.

"I'll be back," I say with a mischievous look. He gets it and smiles back at me.

"Ookay, this isn't awkward." I instantly remember Christina standing there and lead her to my bed room. She instantly flops onto my bed. "I need you to be a girl for a minute." she says.

I squeal. "Oh my gosh! Another guy kissed you, right?" She smiles and nods. "Ahhhhhh! This is so exciting!" I scream.

"Okay. I have to get back to him, and you have Four waiting for you out there. So, bye." Christina gets up and crosses the room towards the door.

"Wait. You have a date? Already? " I think she just wants to leave. " Who's the guy?"

"No one special. Just Uriah." She is looking at the floor. My jaw drops.

"Uriah?!" he is a hunk, I'll give her that. " That is so exciting!"

"Well, I have to go now." She exits. I wait until I hear her leave for sure until I come back out.

"Ready to show me what made you nervous?" I ask Tobias.

"I thought we would finish what we started first." He says with a mischievous smile.

"Nice try. You are showing me. Right now."

"Fine" he says. He picks me up, bends down to get his keys, and walks out the door. He crosses to the elevator and heads down to floor 1. I live on floor 2. Too far away. When we step into the elevator, he puts me down. I smooth my shirt back down and steal a glance at him. He looks even more nervous. When I start to ask him what's so nerve wracking, the elevator dings and we step out. We cross to his apartment. He opens the door for me and says "Ta-da."

I look in and gasp. "Oh my gosh," I say under my breath.

"Like it?" he says.


Cliff hanger! I'll continue if you R&R!

thanks love yas