Everything harry potter related, which is very few, is J.K Rowlings and the rest is "Tara's", the author of the hell hole that is ... My Immortal. Everything in bold are my comments. Enjoy the eyeball boiling My Immortal

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) Wow! Neverr, I'm supper "goffik" too, yeh so fuck you preps : D 2 my gf (ew not in that way) Ok, 1) Only thought it when you said it an 2) Homophobic much, raven,! bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling Curse you to hell Raven. U rok! Justin Bieber! Dancing like Justin Beiber Oooo coz we got Beiber fever oooo, u two really suit each! You know, being insane and annoying together! Genius. ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX! Oh God, save me

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Dementia? The illness that destroys brain cells, it's got you in one Ebony. Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) Err neveeerr, I thought it was because that's the only thing you can spell, and later you get confused with Enoby. with purple streaks and red tips because everyone has that naturally, yeah my hair has neon pink stripes through it, is was born that way. NOT.that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!) I should be going then, I know who it is but my brain is frying from this. I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. Yeh I wish I was related to my crush (youtuber Charlie McDonnell) because incest is a turn on, err so not! I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white I've got fangs because I'm not a fucking Mary Sue, who sucks blood with perfect teeth but I drink blood with pointy ones. I have pale white skin And you sparkle right? Please tell me you sparkle. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England Scotland where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell)I thought you were a Mary Sue actually and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there Awww, I've been picturing you in a poufy princess gown. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it Don't care and a black leather miniskirt, You know instead of goth, the look screams slut. pink fishnets Pink? Super hardcore goth and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, I thought you were pale? And sparkly black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining wow, what kinda weather are you seeing in your fucked up brain, i never knew Scotland was as fucked as you Ebony so there was no sun, Aww, we don't see your sparkles which I was very happy about. Don't be ashamed of your sparkling skin, A lot of preps stared at me Hiya Ebony, *waves happily*. I put up my middle finger at them. That's how I greet everyone, it just makes life better.

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy! Duhn Duuhhhn Duhhhh

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly. Has she ever read the books, or seen the films?

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away. OMFG! She has friends!

So that was the first chapter of MY IMMORTAL! I know it's been done before, but I have a lot of challenges to do, and this is fun and easy to do, I'm just procrastinating, so I thought, why not.

Love Rose :D

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