Peter Pan's return
Please don't be too hard, I'm fifteen and I am French, so I'm not
quite use to English, I just learn it in class that's all.
So yes, probably some grammar and stuff are not correct ! Sorry
Disclaimer : I don't owe anything of Peter Pan etc ...
Even If I wished to !!!
Chapter one : Changes
Wendy sat in the balcony, looking at the sky; trying to remember where
Neverland was.
She sighed.
There was a party in her aunt's garden she could only see people
moving, dancing .
She often spoke aloud to Peter just like if he was here. But of
course he wasn't.
"Oh Peter, everything got so bad since the year we left Neverland. Our
parents died in an accident, the lost boys were abandoned, I couldn't
do anything but watch them go with a weak reassuring smile and a
heartbreak. And then we got here with our horrible aunt. But at least
we're safe and very much alive. But at what cost ?"
Then suddenly she heard a bell rang.
"Tinkerbell ??"
Of course not, it was a guest who was coming into the domestic's
entrance.
She was wearing a ball dress, because her aunt "wanted to show her
some gentlemen , so that she could get married, so her aunt will no
longer have to deal with her, and her brothers."
Her brothers were probably asleep.
She was so alone, she had to take care of everyone, but who will take
care of her ?
Suddenly she heard a noise, a sort of a "bang". She quickly turned
back but there was nothing. She was use to it, always hearing strange
noise, which she was not paying attention before.
She went to her bed. Then what did she see ?.
She gasped.
(A/N thanks to pagepixie66 for correcting me !)
So what do you think ?? nice Huh ?? =)
Please don't be too hard, I'm fifteen and I am French, so I'm not
quite use to English, I just learn it in class that's all.
So yes, probably some grammar and stuff are not correct ! Sorry
Disclaimer : I don't owe anything of Peter Pan etc ...
Even If I wished to !!!
Chapter one : Changes
Wendy sat in the balcony, looking at the sky; trying to remember where
Neverland was.
She sighed.
There was a party in her aunt's garden she could only see people
moving, dancing .
She often spoke aloud to Peter just like if he was here. But of
course he wasn't.
"Oh Peter, everything got so bad since the year we left Neverland. Our
parents died in an accident, the lost boys were abandoned, I couldn't
do anything but watch them go with a weak reassuring smile and a
heartbreak. And then we got here with our horrible aunt. But at least
we're safe and very much alive. But at what cost ?"
Then suddenly she heard a bell rang.
"Tinkerbell ??"
Of course not, it was a guest who was coming into the domestic's
entrance.
She was wearing a ball dress, because her aunt "wanted to show her
some gentlemen , so that she could get married, so her aunt will no
longer have to deal with her, and her brothers."
Her brothers were probably asleep.
She was so alone, she had to take care of everyone, but who will take
care of her ?
Suddenly she heard a noise, a sort of a "bang". She quickly turned
back but there was nothing. She was use to it, always hearing strange
noise, which she was not paying attention before.
She went to her bed. Then what did she see ?.
She gasped.
(A/N thanks to pagepixie66 for correcting me !)
So what do you think ?? nice Huh ?? =)