I've been reading a lot of Naruto stories and finally i have taken a crack at it
Please enjoy chapter one of my story...
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any other anime or games that i may use
"Demon Speaking"
Jutsu used
"Normal speech"
Chapter 1 - Prologue and The Meeting
In the village hidden in the leaves, also known as Konoha, one word could only describe the things that were unfolding, and it was chaotic.
Buildings were being destroyed, trees being pulled from their roots, people running away to find shelter from the attack of a demon and corpses strewn all over the ground.
The once peaceful village was thrown into disarray as the king of demons, a.k.a. Kyuubi began attacking and killing innocent civilians, Namikaze Minato who was the Hokage at the moment was reading over scrolls to find a way to stop the rampaging demon who threatens to destroy that which he worked so hard to protect
"If I don't stop this demon then a lot more of my precious people would die" the 4th thought as he pored over countless scrolls spread before him. As he was thinking of this something caught his eye and then it hit him, the only way to stop a demon that powerful is by the power of human sacrifice.
Jinchuuriki - the power of human sacrifice, allows the sealing of a great tailed beast into an infant whose chakra coils have yet to fully develop, sealing allows the vessel to use some extent of the great demon's power that is sealed inside, although after using, the caster dies as payment for the job that was done
He sadly looks unto the peacefully sleeping form of his newborn son "I'm sorry, I could not be with you when you grow up, I know you will become a fine shinobi with this that I'm going to give you, with this you are going to be hailed as the one who saved Konoha from utter destruction" the 4th said as he went away to prepare for the task at hand.
He readies the Konoha Jounin and the ANBU who were fighting with the monster and told them his plan...
They nod their assent and prepare to go all out on the demon to give their leader a clear shot as they bid their Hokage Godspeed and goodbye.
Tears would have been shed in this heart warming moment but time is of the essence and they could not afford to waste any of it.
They needed to stop that demon at all cost...
There were at least 40 ANBU and 60 more Jounin left to fight the demon as all the other ninja were either incapacitated of tasked to protect the citizens of Konoha to evacuate, which made their combined forces at least 100 and that included some other High Chuunin that volunteered to help out.
After they formed a plan of attack the ninja formed 4 groups and began attacking in unison.
One of the groups attacked at lightning speeds and threw all the jutsu in their arsenal at the crazed fox with the hope to somehow damage it's insanely powerful chakra shield for their Hokage to get a clear shot at it.
But the Kyuubi was not stupid, it knew what their plan was and activated one of its tails,
Fox Arts: Demon Dragon Fire its tail glowed with ominous red chakra for a while and then it launched a dozen gigantic black flame dragons at its would be attackers.
Some who saw the attack early enough managed to perform some defensive jutsus or just dodged out of the way, a second later, those who performed jutsus got overpowered by the sheer power of the flame and got incinerated.
Those who dodged thought they were in the clear, but imagine their surprise as the black flame dragons came after them and devoured them with flames hotter than the flames of hell itself.
The effect of the technique was instant 50 ninja got caught in the maelstrom of black fire and ceased to exist, not even ashes were left as every cell in their body was disintegrated by the demonic fire.
The fourth seeing the black fire storm, sealed it via Fuuka Houin in order to limit the destruction caused
It required a damn lot a chakra to seal as the area the fire covered covered was vast.
"Hmmm..."
"Very good human, there aren't a lot of mortals that have the skill to seal that technique, you're good."
"And for that, I will give this village a quick and painless demise." The beast said as it's voice was tinged with sick pleasure from all the destruction it caused.
"No demon, it is you who will die this day"
"Take this! Shiki Fuujin!"
As he said that, all the ninja that were left jumped up to do jutsus that could either incapacitate the demon or break its shield.
After a short while, the Shinigami finally appeared in all it's deathly glory.
The 4th Hokage stated his request and the Shinigami nodded and went to work. It stretched out its hand and slowly but surely, transferred the fox's body, mind and soul into the belly of one Uzumaki Naruto, as the process was about to be completed, the fox roared one last time, a creepy, bone breaking roar filled with hate and anger towards the villagers of Konoha.
After the process was completed, there was a flash of bright light and all was quiet.
No more screaming and the roars of the great demon were gone into the night, as the great Kyuubi was sealed into the belly of one Uzumaki Naruto.
The great demon vowed its revenge and that one day, it would break free from its cell and finish what it started
"I will destroy Konoha if its the last thing I do." it said while laughing maniacally.
Time Skip
5 years later
Uzumaki Naruto: Age: 5 years old
Reality Check: Instead of the villagers respecting and trusting the sealing powers of their Fourth Hokage, they grew to scorn Naruto and see him as the demon itself biding it's time so that one day it would strike again and completely finish off the village of Konoha. Everywhere he went, Naruto was spat at and beaten by the angry villagers, the first few years of his young life was filled with pain and rejection as all of the villagers that witnessed the Kyuubi's attack either just insulted him or worse, beat him up every time they got the chance and for that Naruto grew cold, untrusting and harbored a lot of hate towards the village, he vowed to escape and one day teach those worthless people a lesson they won't ever forget. The Third Hokage who was appointed to be the substitute Hokage for the time saw Naruto and his plight and grew sympathetic of the boy. He passed a law prohibiting anyone to talk about the night of the Kyuubi attack lest be sentenced to death hoping that Naruto would have decent friends in his generation, but the villager's hate was so great that they prohibited their children from talking to the "Hellspawn" or they would be punished, when the children asked why they called Naruto that , they would just say that the boy is evil.
It was 3 in the morning Naruto woke up a tad too early but got up from his futon and went into the kitchen to prepare his food, which just consisted of instant ramen and some bread.
This would be the day that would change his life forever
As he was eating his breakfast, he heard a small voice whispering in his ear
"Hey kid" it said
"Hmm... Maybe the preservatives in the ramen I eat are causing hallucinations. Note to self: Find ramen alternative "
Then it happened again
"Oi! Are you listening?" the voice said a second time
"Arghhh... Maybe I'm just tired, its really early and my eyes feel like there are lead weights attached to them"
"Maybe I'll finish that later"
So then Naruto went back to his futon and got some more sleep, just ignoring the ramen that he prepared.
As several minutes slipped by, Naruto found himself in a dark sewer and knee deep in dark water.
"Great..."
"A sewer, how original"
"Stupid villagers, one day you'll get what's due to you "
As he looked up, he saw some red and blue pipes which were glowing, upon closer inspection, he found out that there was something running inside.
What it was, he didn't know or even care, what he wanted was to get back to his home.
As he was trudging through the dark waters, his foot hit something hard and he jumped up and down nursing the limb.
"What the hell was that?"
Upon looking closer, Naruto could see a pipe with a black substance tinged with a dark purple and red was running through it.
"Damn construction workers, putting a pipe in the water, my foot hurts"
As he continued along the way, he saw a light and followed it and arrived in a sort of chamber with a huge cage in front of him.
The creature in the cage roared and a large shockwave followed and swept Naruto off his feet.
"Hey you finally came, good work genius"
"Wow, I've been waiting here forever, where were you?"
"What are you?" Naruto said as he got his composure and sat up.
"And how the hell did I end up in here anyways?"
"First of all, I am the mighty Kyuubi that almost laid waste to that pathetic little village of yours, if not for the intervention of that man, I would have finished my job " said the creature that was in the cage while releasing a little killer intent.
"And second, I am the one who sent you here"
"I'm here to give a proposal and a nice proposal at that"
"I don't even know you, why the hell should i trust you?" Naruto spat back
"Watch that tongue boy!"
"If you don't want that arrogant tongue pulled out, it would be best to watch your language" the creature said so venomously that Naruto took an involuntary step backwards
"Yeah.. Nice threat from some guy who can't even get out a teensy tiny cage held by a piece of paper" Naruto said indigantly
"PANSY!"
"YOU LITTLE INSIGNIFICANT WORM! IF I EVER GET OUT OF HERE, I'LL MAKE SURE TO MAKE YOU DEATH AS SLOW AND PAINFUL AS POSSIBLE!" the creature said as anger was cleary evident in it's voice.
"Yeah Yeah.. As if you could really get out" Naruto said haughtily
The Kyuubi calmed itself, this was the only shot it has at it's plan, if this fails, then the plan all goes up in smoke
"Listen kid, you've got spunk I'll give you that much but what I'm offering you is power in exchange for just a teensy tiny little favor"
"Don't you want power so that the villagers would stop attacking you and give a little respect? I saw your mind, it's filled with hate towards that village just like me, you want to get payback don't you?"
"I can help you there and grant you power so immense your name will be feared all throughout the world"
"It's your call..."
"If you don't want to, I'll just let you out"
"Simple as that"
Naruto seemed deep in thought...
Was he gonna accept or was he going to refuse?
He didn't know that creature so it must be just tricking him, but the power it promised was great, he could obtain it all for himself and destroy all those that have wronged him, the idea of them suffering under his hands and begging for mercy seemed like a sweet deal.
So before he could think of anything else, he already agreed to the terms
"You've just made the best decision in your life"
"Now I'll just give you instructions on how to make that frail body of yours a conditioned killing machine and you best not slack off if you know what's good for you boy"
"Hmm...I'm just curious, if we're going to be partners on this, can I at least see your face?"
"Sure, Just come closer"
"I won't bite...Yet"
Naruto sweatdropped at that last statement but came closer due to curiosity.
Imagine his surprise when he saw what was contained in the cage.
A young girl, maybe 12 years old, slender body pretty face and a nice chest and wearing a black Gothic dress and black shoes.
She had Blood Red hair and even redder eyes
"Wow... You're really pretty...Uhm... Kinda"
"I thought that you were some dirty old man asking for some twisted favors"
"Yeah.. I get that a lot, mostly cause of my voice"
"Riiiiight"
"Now that that's been taken care of... How the hell do I get out of here?"
"Before you go...I will give both of us a seal so that none of us can go back on our deal"
"Yeah...Sure...Whatever"
There was a brief flash of light and a second later a small red mark shaped life a fox coming out of the void appeared on his right chest.
"Right, I have it too"
"Wanna see?"
Naruto sweatdropped as Kyuubi let the strap on her dress hang loose.
"Nah.. I'll take a pass on that"
"Yeah.. I thought so too hahahahah"
"Soooo... Getting out? How? Today if it's not too much"
As soon as he said the last syllable of the last word he awoke from his sleep and saw that everything was the way he left it.
"That was some fucked up dream"
"I should really lay off the ramen, for now that is"
"Your training starts tomorrow, you better not be lazy or I'll make you suffer"
"Not a dream after all"
"Damn..."
"How the hell could I do what she's asking of me?"
"She already knows she can't break free from my body so I should find a suitable host and transfer her mindset into it"
"Weird and creepy.. Yet the most ideal thing to do...Hmmm..."
He thought as he brought his index finger to his chin. But he thought of more pressing matters as his stomach gave a low growl, signifying that he was in need of nourishment, he noticed the unfinished bowl of ramen and came to it.
"Nah... I'll worry about that issue later"
"Right now, it is time to eat"
"Ittadakimasu!!"
Time Skip
4 years later
Uzumaki Naruto: Age: 9
Naruto has almost finished preparing for the task ahead of him and is leaving his apartment building.
Silent and graceful as a cat, Naruto dove onto the night in pursuit of his prize: the Crissaegrim
Flashback
In the period of four and a half years Kyuubi worked Naruto hard into the ground using a harsh training regimen designed to bring out the strongest in anyone and hone them into the perfect killing machine.
It also had the knack of killing most of those that had tried it before, considering that those who had tried it before were all demons and that Naruto would be the first one who was human to try it out, the odds were not in his favor as he could die a slow and agonizing death if he lost concentration for even a split second.
This method was called the body pound.
It consisted of the fox demon channeling its strong and volatile chakra into the body of the young boy to simulate years of battle, honing the reflexes and developing the muscles.
As the chakra of the Kyuubi is very evil, it contains the essence of the souls of all those that died by its hands, and because of that, channeling it's chakra to Naruto and covering his whole body with it, the muscles gain power and flexibility and the brain gets stimulated to a point where it outperforms a super computer.
But there was a catch, if the body of Naruto came into contact with the demon's chakra, it would melt away due to the insane power it contained so in order to counter act that, Naruto was to channel his own chakra in his whole body to protect it and that needed precise chakra control, something Naruto still didn't have.
Due to his large chakra capacity, it would take a long time to grant him the control needed to channel chakra around his whole body.
So it began...
For half a year, Naruto not only trained his chakra control but also his body, doing 100 push-ups and 200 sit-ups every day gave him an sculpted body for just a 9 year old, he even bought some weights and attached them to his arms and legs to improve their speed, he was now putting up to 300 pounds on each of his limbs making it a total of 1200 pounds of weight that he is carrying. He practiced doing the tree climbing and water walking exercises and after 2 months, was able to master both those skills.
Before half the year is done, he could properly channel chakra to his whole body, thus began the process of the body pound.
For the next four years, Naruto did this method fourteen hours a day or until his reserves gave out.
The end result was the perfect killing machine, ready to fight, ready to kill.
"Congratulations kid, you finally made it through"
"And the first mortal to do it too, nice one"
"Just make sure you keep your end of the bargain"
"Yeah..Yeah.. A body fit enough for you to walk in blah blah blah"
"INSOLENT WHELP!"
"I was just joking sheesh cool down ya old hag.. hahahahhaha"
Flashback END
Naruto moved stealthily, wearing his sneaky clothes which consisted of a black skin tight shirt, black Jounin style pants which hid his weights, black fingerless gloves with metal plates near the knuckles for protection and red ninja zori instead of that easily noticeable orange jumpsuit really helped him blend with the foliage. Detection was out of the question, he cannot afford to be caught like this, lest they suspect that he is up to something.
"Listen kid. if you screw this up..."
"We're both done for"
"You know that right?"
"Yeah..Yeah... I already know that"
"I'm not stupid you know... Plus, you trained me so you should know what I'm capable of"
"Or does that mean you're scared?"
"CHICKEN!"
"Not this shit again...Would you cut the crap and concentrate"
"Alright Alright...Sheesh so stingy"
As both finished their conversation, Naruto neared a seemingly harmless boulder stuck to the base of a mountain. As they got nearer, Naruto channeled his chakra and in an instant he disappeared from view, not even the trained guards sensed his presence as he walked past them. He got an ink well and a scroll from his backpack and began to write the seals that would deactivate the security seals and grant him access to the shrine without a hitch.
"Ah..There you go"
"3"
"2"
"1"
"FUUIN!"
A small flash of light erupted from the scroll and burned all inscriptions on the wall, signifying an all green for Naruto to go on ahead and get what he came here for.
As he came closer to the sword, his excitement went through the roof as he imagined what this powerful sword looked like, only to have his hopes crushed as he saw a regular katana with glowing inscriptions that he cannot read written all over it.
"At least it's shiny but damn..What a let down"
"And I thought it would look kick ass"
He picked it up , put it on his backpack and prepared to leave, just then a whole platoon of ROOT ANBU came into the shrine and covered all possible exits.
"So it's the demon kid that came to steal a priceless village artifact, he wouldn't be much of a problem, Yagyu finish him"
And with that one ANBU charged at Naruto but he was put down with a lightning bolt of pure chakra that shot from the boy's outstretched middle and index fingers straight to his heart killing him, he fell to the ground still charged with the powerful electricity and convulsing.
"Raiton: Lightning Shard technique"
"Nice eh?" Naruto said
And with that display of skill an ANBU with the wolf mask spoke up "We will not let you get away with what you did demon! Your reign of terror ends here!"
"Let's kill him and parade his corpse all over Konoha. GO!!" Said another wearing a cat mask
Naruto was not one to like intimidations like this so as the ANBU were charging, he activated the lightning that had built up in the body on the dead ANBU from his first attack
"Raiton: Lightning Shard Explosion technique"
The corpse that was charged with lightning exploded magnificently in a hail of chakra powered lightning, scattering the body parts of the dead ANBU everywhere, the ninja that got caught in the explosion either was incapacitated via a strong electric shock, had missing limbs or was electrocuted to death
"Dammit, he was better than anticipated" the ANBU with the wolf mask said as he surveyed the destruction that ensued
"Kill the demon, Don't hold back, we cannot let him get out of this alive and harm more innocents"
"FOR KONOHA!!" he said as he rallied the remaining ANBU to attack mercilessly
And with that they all charged at him and readied their katanas, poised to strike and kill the boy with extreme prejudice.
"Seems like a good time to test my latest acquisition" Naruto whispered as he unsheathed Crissaegrim.
"Come get some!"
Naruto jumped up and started launching lightning projectiles courtesy of the Raiton: Lightning Shard technique although a few were hit, they managed to protect their bodies from the assault by projecting a chakra shield, after the rain of lightning was over, the ANBU came and started their own assault, some came at him with lightning fast sword strikes, it was only thanks to the improved reflexes and power his years of training and the body pound gave him that he managed to parry and dodge those attacks. After a while the sword strikes ceased and the ANBU that were assaulting him backed away and he could certainly see why, as he was fighting with those sword wielding ANBU, those other ANBU were readying their own jutsu and he could see that he was in the receiving end of a jutsu storm.
"Oh Shit.. This is not good" Naruto said with eyes as wide as plates
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END
Jutsu Library and Technical stuff:
Fox Arts: Demon Dragon Fire:is a SS class fire technique used by Kyuubi, by activating one of it's tails, the Kyuubi lets loose a dozen black fire dragons to assail it's enemies and reduce them to naught but ash, it is said that it is 10x stronger than Uchiha Itachi's Amaterasu. Only the strongest water defense jutsu not lower than SSS class can defend against this kind of attack.
Fuuka Houin: Fuuka Houin is a B class Fuuinjutsu technique that allows the ninja to seal away a nearby fire. After unrolling a scroll to hold the fire, the ninja writes the needed sealing incantation onto the scroll. Then by forming the needed handseals, a vapor will emanate from the scroll to encompass the fire and take it back to the scroll for sealing.
Shiki Fuujin: is an S class Fuuinjutsu technique developed by the Fourth Hokage. A variation of this technique was used to seal the Kyuubi within Naruto. The technique was taught to the Third Hokage who later used it in battle. After calling forth the Shinigami (Death God) with the proper handseals, the user will hand over their soul in exchange for the Death God removing the soul from his target.
Crissaegrim: A magically intelligent shapeshifting sword that the great unnamed sword master used in the 2nd Great Shinobi War when she came to Konoha's aid, she left it as a sign of friendship and left, not even bothering to say her name, this sword has been placed in a shrine in honor of the sword master that came to Konoha's aid. When used in a battle, Crissaegrim lets the user choose from one of it's twelve legendary forms each with different characteristics, strengths and weaknesses, so far there is only one form out of twelve that are known. It is said that this initial form is not part of the twelve legendary forms but when it is charged with its wielders chakra, it can launch projectiles matching it's wielder's chakra affinity.
Raiton: Lightning Shard technique: is a B rank ninjutsu developed by Naruto with some help from the Kyuubi. the mechanics of this jutsu is pretty simple, just launch a lightning natured bolt of pure chakra at the enemy,but it's adaptability more than makes up for it. This technique can be done no matter how much chakra you put into it, put in a little chakra and it will only fire a small bolt of lightning to your target, put in a lot and it will produce a lightning storm capable of leveling half a city block, is the set up technique for Raiton: Lightning Shard Explosion technique.
Raiton: Lightning Shard Explosion technique: Another B rank ninjutsu that Naruto had created, in this jutsu Naruto uses his chakra to hyper activate the electric current that had built up in the body of an enemy, making the body explode in a lightning storm damaging anything in every direction for 10 feet, effects could range from temporary paralysis due to the electric charge to death due to electrocution. This jutsu can only be used if a body has been hit with the Raiton: Lightning Shard technique and would be rendered useless if the jutsu was defended against or deflected.
Author's notes
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