I'm taking characters from the Tamora Pierce books and changing them :P and im changing the whole plot of the story er at least a lot of it ^^ so my satisfaction and all the adventures with Neal (from the Kelendry seris) and Alanna (from the Lioness seris) are all my own!!!! and with my own rules dont agrue just read and r and r :)
"Hey wait up!" yelled Neal as he rode after Alanna's black and grey horse, Tkaa on his tan colored horse, Comet. Alanna is a tall yet sassy, and energetic 10 year old girl with chin length brownish red hair, one purpleish blue eye and one purpleish green eye, who had just arrived at the palace for her training as a page. So she could in 4 years become a squire, then 4 years after that a lady-knight. Neal is a half-head taller than Alanna with inch long dark brown hair and green eyes.
"Just catch up slow poke!" Laughed Alanna as she kicked Tkaa to go faster. They headed back to the stables, their rest period of the day almost over. Alanna slowed down as Neal caught up with her, and slowed down into a walk.
"Cant you go any faster?" teased Alanna jokingly.
"Cant you go any slower?" teased Neal back as they climbed down from their horses in front of the stables.
"Well its not my fault if you cant keep up"
"Its not my fault my horse isnt as fast as Tkaa!" Alanna poked Neals arm.
"Well then get a new horse" she said unsaddling their horses in their stalls handing Neal them to hang up.
"You know that we can't get new horses these are the only ones they give us til next year!" he snapped. Alanna stopped talking and brushed off her own horse handing Neal a brush.
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The bells rang to indicate the time for lunch as Alanna walked alone back to her room to change from her sweaty clothes. She walked into her room to find her female cat Nightfang sleeping on the bed. She roused Nightfang from her slumber after she finished dressing into clean breaches and tunic.
"What do you want now" Said Nightfang as she streched her tired body. To other humans what Alanna heard came out in meows from the black cat.
"It's lunch time" mumbled Alanna as she walked out the door. The cat run after her and followed her down the halls.
"'ey Lan!" said a dark skinned boy about the age of 13 running up to walk by Alanna.
"Heya Kir" she replyed
"Have I ever introduced you to my brother?"
"No you havnt Kir" Just then Kir whistled and a boy Alannas age ran up and stood by Kir. His nose a proud arch like his brothers. A traiet givin to Bahzirs of his standing.
"Techo this is Lan er Alanna and Alanna this is my lil bro Techo" said Kir obviously proud of introducing Alanna to someone. Alanna shook hands with Techo.
"Nice ta meet cha" she said as they walked into the mess hall.
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Tell me if thats good or not if it is ill keep writing it ^^'''
"Hey wait up!" yelled Neal as he rode after Alanna's black and grey horse, Tkaa on his tan colored horse, Comet. Alanna is a tall yet sassy, and energetic 10 year old girl with chin length brownish red hair, one purpleish blue eye and one purpleish green eye, who had just arrived at the palace for her training as a page. So she could in 4 years become a squire, then 4 years after that a lady-knight. Neal is a half-head taller than Alanna with inch long dark brown hair and green eyes.
"Just catch up slow poke!" Laughed Alanna as she kicked Tkaa to go faster. They headed back to the stables, their rest period of the day almost over. Alanna slowed down as Neal caught up with her, and slowed down into a walk.
"Cant you go any faster?" teased Alanna jokingly.
"Cant you go any slower?" teased Neal back as they climbed down from their horses in front of the stables.
"Well its not my fault if you cant keep up"
"Its not my fault my horse isnt as fast as Tkaa!" Alanna poked Neals arm.
"Well then get a new horse" she said unsaddling their horses in their stalls handing Neal them to hang up.
"You know that we can't get new horses these are the only ones they give us til next year!" he snapped. Alanna stopped talking and brushed off her own horse handing Neal a brush.
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The bells rang to indicate the time for lunch as Alanna walked alone back to her room to change from her sweaty clothes. She walked into her room to find her female cat Nightfang sleeping on the bed. She roused Nightfang from her slumber after she finished dressing into clean breaches and tunic.
"What do you want now" Said Nightfang as she streched her tired body. To other humans what Alanna heard came out in meows from the black cat.
"It's lunch time" mumbled Alanna as she walked out the door. The cat run after her and followed her down the halls.
"'ey Lan!" said a dark skinned boy about the age of 13 running up to walk by Alanna.
"Heya Kir" she replyed
"Have I ever introduced you to my brother?"
"No you havnt Kir" Just then Kir whistled and a boy Alannas age ran up and stood by Kir. His nose a proud arch like his brothers. A traiet givin to Bahzirs of his standing.
"Techo this is Lan er Alanna and Alanna this is my lil bro Techo" said Kir obviously proud of introducing Alanna to someone. Alanna shook hands with Techo.
"Nice ta meet cha" she said as they walked into the mess hall.
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Tell me if thats good or not if it is ill keep writing it ^^'''