New fanfic!
This is going to be a short one...I think... and the main reason for this fanfic is that I want to test different types of writing.
So then I can see which way I likes to write in the most!
Anyway this is a sad chapter but I hope you'll like it anyway.
Enjoy!
Chapter 1:He doesn't deserve you.
Sakura: I guess you all knows why were sitting here.
Kiba: Actually I don't, I was having a great time on this party and then...
Tenten: Yes we all saw you and Ino so we figured that you might were having a good time.
Ino n Kiba: * blushing *
Sakura: * tries hard not to laugh * anyway sense Kiba here was to busy to hear what we were talking about I'll tell you. This is a party so that all the teams can talk and be with friends and there is one person that isn't here.
Sasuke: Dobe.
Hinata: Don't call him that!
Lee: I've got a question! Why is Temari, Kankuro and Gaara here if this is a meeting for all the teams? They aren't even from Konoha
Temari: Do you have a problem with us being here? * Cracking fists*
Lee: N-not at-t all youthful Temari.
Temari: *smirks * good.
Sakura: Anyway...I think that sense Naruto isn't here we maybe should talk a little about him.
Neji: Why?
Sakura: Because he's treating your cousin like shit.
Neji: WHAT?
Hinata: He isn't!
Ino: Yes, he is! You are together and he takes you for granted!
Hinata: No he isn't!
Tenten: Seriously Hinata, he's the worst boyfriend ever!
Temari: If I were you I should have dumped him for a long time ago.
Shikamaru: zzzzz...wait what? Are Temari dumping me?
Temari: Maybe I'll do if you falls asleep again.
Shikamaru: Troublesome.
Hinata: Naruto is a great boyfriend!
Sakura: Hinata, I'm one of his best friends and I'll have to agree with Ino.
Hinata: Then you're all wrong!
Sakura: No we aren't.
Hinata: Yes, you are!
Sakura: No we...
Shino: Hrrm, Hrrm.
*everyone turns towards Shino *
Shino: I've got an idea. Why don't we ask Hinata ten questions about her relationship with Naruto to convince her that he's a bad boyfriend and if we can't, she's right and if we can...well then we'll win.
Neji: God idea
Lee: What a youthful idea Shino!
Gaara: Can I join to.
Ino: Of course! Everyone has to join * glares at Sasuke *
Sasuke: Fine, I'll join you.
Hinata: Well I goes that's a good idea...
Tenten: Great, the is settled!
Temari: I'm going to record this.
Kankuro: Why?
Temari: Because we might want to listen to this again.
Hinata: Alright can we just get this over with.
Ino: Admit it Hinata, you know you're going to lose.
Hinata: * mumbles something*
Question 1:Have he ever gave you flowers?
Hinata: What's that for kind of question?
Ino: Hey! It's an important question! Now answer it!
Hinata: *sighs * Well...no...
Everyone: gasps!
Sakura: No flowers?
Hinata: I'm sure he just needs the money to something else.
Shikamaru: He earns more than everyone of us, except Gaara.
Choji: Yea and he could always pick them by himself.
Hinata: He probably just didn't think of it.
Tenten: Okay, Naruto is dumb but not that dumb.
Hinata: Then he maybe didn't have the time.
Kiba: Do you even hear yourself! Your first excuse is that he doesn't want to spend any money on you, the second that he doesn't think of you and the third that he doesn't have time for you!
Tenten: Neji is more romantic than he is.
Neji: Hey! I'm romantic!
Tenten: Of course you are.
Gaara: I have to say that in this case Naruto seems a bit unromantic.
Ino: Do you want to have flowers from him, Hinata?
Hinata:...Well yea it would be nice...
Sakura: Then it's settled, next question!
Where do you go when your going on a date?
Ino: We all know the answer on this one.
Shino:Have you even told him that you're not that into ramen.
Hinata: Well...It's not like I hates it but I don't eat so much of it.
Neji: Ahh! So that's why you're always hungry when you comes home after a date whit Naruto.
Sakura: Let me guess, he eats up your bowl to and never even thinks of that you don't eat anything.
Hinata: Sometimes he asks me if I'm not hungry.
Sasuke: Just a question, do you always eat at the ramen stand?
Hinata: does that counts as one question, so that you've asked me 3?
Sai: no
Hinata: *sighs * okay, we always eats at the ramen stand, but we haven't actually been on so many dates.
Everyone: WHAT?
Hinata: Oops...
Kankuro: Haven't you dated for almost two months now?
Hinata: Almost three...
Sai: I thought that Naruto liked Hinata.
Hinata: He does!
Sai: It doesn't looks like it.
Hinata: *looks like she's going to cry *
Tenten: Don't be such a jerk Sai.
Ino: But he got a point.
Sakura: INO!
Ino: Just saying
Shino: I thinks it's time for the next question.
Does he always takes you in first place?
*uncomfortable silence *
Hinata: H-he's the soon-to-be hokage so you can't expect him to...
Tenten: OMG!
Ino: * sighs and shakes her head *
Neji: I won't tolerate that my cousin is treated this way.
Kiba: Then you should have done something earlier.
Gaara: I've always thought that Naruto would treat his girlfriend very well...I guess I'll have to change my opinion.
Lee: This is not very youthful of Naruto.
Sakura: I actually think that the whole thing is very weird, I mean it isn't like Naruto to be like this.
Hinata: He isn't doing something wrong!He just have a lot things to do, I mean he's about to fulfil his dream!
Kankuro: He should still treat such a cute girl like you with respect.
Ino: I've just come up with the next question!
Does he ever call you cute or beautiful?
Hinata: Yes he does...sometimes...
Shino: How often?
Hinata: Well...He's probably just shy!
Sasuke: Naruto? Shy? This is getting pathetic!
Hinata:...
Ino: It seems like Hinata is head over heels in love with Naruto and Naruto is just together with her because of that.
Hinata: * gasps*
Sakura: Okay, now your going to far Ino! I'm sure he likes her.
Ino: Then why is he treating her like shit?
Sakura: Well...I don't...
Kiba: Because he takes her for granted.
Hinata: * stares at the ground with tears in her eyes. *
Gaara: I would call you beautiful every day.
*Everyone stares at Gaara *
Gaara: What? If you were Hinata Hyuuga's, the head of the Hyuuga clan and the girl that has her own fanclub, boyfriend wouldn't you call her beautiful everyday so she doesn't leave you for one of her fanboys?
Kankuro: He got a point.
Hinata: I would never leave Naruto for one of my fanboys.
Sai: Then maybe he's right when he's taken you for granted, you obviously can't leave him.
Everyone: SAI!
Hinata: *sobs *
Neji: You made her cry...
Lee: I've got a youthful question to ask.
Has he ever made you cry?
Hinata: Before or after we got together?
Lee: Does it matter.
Hinata: Yes because before we got together I could cry because he liked Sakura and not me.
Neji: Bastard...
Lee: Hmm...After then.
Hinata:...Well one time...
Neji: I'll kill him.
Kiba: Or we could torture him...
Shino: Or Hinata could just dump him.
Kiba: Naa, that wouldn't hurt enough.
Ino: Stop with your useless babbling and instead listen to when he made Hinata cry.
Hinata: Well it was when he said that he was going to be on a mission on the day that it was exactly one month sense we got together.
Tenten: Oh Hinata! * hugs*
Temari: I really don't see why you stays at him.
Shikamaru: It almost seems like you're a little bit to good for him.
Choji: Weren't you a sleep.
Shikamaru: No, Temari said that she would dump me.
Temari: Naw!
Sai: I've got a question.
Sakura: Is it a pervert one?
Sai: No
Sakura: Okay.
How long time did it take sense your confession until he said that he liked you?
Hinata: Next question!
Ino: Ooooh no Hinata, answer the question like a good girl!
Hinata:...It was...a while after the war...
Gaara: How long.
Hinata:...Some weeks.
Choji: How many?
Hinata:...Okay, okay 3 weeks after the war and almost 2 months after my confession! HAPPY NOW?
Sasuke:...That's just sad...
How often do you meet him?
Hinata: Oh please, not this question.
Neji: Why not?
Ino: Because this is one of the things that even she has thought of.
Neji: ohh
Lee: Youthful Hinata, the first step is acceptance so just say like it is.
Sakura: Actually the first step is crying.
Kiba: The first step to what?
Sakura; Never mind, Hinata?
Hinata: *sighs * Okay, this is how it is: He's to much on missions and when he's home he's training and sometimes I don't even know that he's home before he leaves again.
Temari: Finally! Now you actually isn't trying to say that he's doing right when he's wrong!
Gaara: I'm impressed.
Choij: Chips someone?
Shikamaru: You're giving you're chips to someone?
Choji: Me? Are you crazy? I just want a excuse to go and get more because Sakura said that I'm not allowed to go and get something fore myself.
Sakura: Arrg, just go and get your stupid chips! Your going to eat me out of the house.
Shino: I've got a very personal question and it might make you cry.
Hinata: It can't get much worse, can it?
Has he ever said that he loves you back?
Hinata: I...I... Maybe he thinks it's too early?
Kiba: You've already said it too him so what does he have to fear?
Hinata:...* starts to cry*
Tenten: Maybe we can just stop to ask those question, I think that we already has won.
Ino: Not a chance! There is 2 questions left!
Temari: Yea Ino is right!
Neji: I've actually got one question.
Everyone: * in chock*
Hinata: *dries her tears * Go on.
Have you ever thought of this?
Hinata: Every night * sad smile* I have thought of this a long time and I know I should be strong and just dump him but then he smiles at me and says sorry and I just...I just forgets that I'm angry
*looks down at the floor again. *
*sad silence *
Tenten: I'm so sorry for you.
Choij: I'm back!...what did I miss?
Temari: *annoyed sigh * Anyway Hinata you have to be strong and dump him.
Hinata: But how? How am I suppose to dump him? I still loves him.
Shino: Because it would be the best for both off you. He's just not that into you.
Ino: Isn't that a movie?
Shino: Yes it is.
Sasuke: Look Hinata I don't know you but I just think that you should be better of without him. And you should be happier if you found a boyfriend that actually likes you as much as you likes him.
Sakura: Wow Sasuke!
Hinata:...You're right, all of you. I should just be strong and move on!
Ino: Yes! That's the spirit.
Neji: I never thought that you would start to date him in first place.
Hinata: I wont regret that. If I said no when he asked me I would wonder my whole life what would happened if I said yes and that shouldn't be good either.
Neji: You're right.
Ino: Okay! Last question!
So you will move on?
Hinata: Yes.
*Door slams *
Naruto: HI! Sorry I'm late but I had to...why are you sitting in a ring on the floor? Weren't we suppose to party? I bought chips!
Everyone: * Looks at Hinata*
Hinata: * Sighs, stands up and walks to Naruto. *
Naruto: Hi Hime, What's going on? I...
Hinata: I'm not your girlfriend anymore. *walks out of the door *
Naruto: * stands paralysed* WHAT? *runs after Hinata *
Choji: Yes! He left the chips!
Ino: Is the only thing you can think of food?
Choji: yup.
Ino: arrg!
Done!
Hope you liked it.