Ok my first time writing so reviews are welcomed for better stories.
Warning characters are not mine they came from Stephanie Meyer
Another warning very short cahpter
Bella was standing in a room small enough to be a closet but big enough for more then one person to in it.
The door started to open slowly. Bella saw Jane's short figure at the mouth of the door. The one light flickered on because of a switch on the outside.
When Jane shut the door her eyes turned form a dull red almost black to onyx black. Jane was thirsty.
Bella pressed herself against the wall as hard as possible even knowing that it wouldn't help.
Jane tried to make Bella feel pain according to the anger and frustration flash across Jane's face.
"Time to see what you will become when you're a vampire."
That was all that she said before Jane took a step forward.
With Bella already pressing herself against the was she pressed harder and when reality appeared in her head, that she couldn't back up any more, distress and despair crossed her face.
"Ha, Ha" Jane chuckled and took another step forward.
Ok now that you have seen my work review
Constructive criticism always wanted!
Love Ya,
rosaliexemmett