Authors note.

Love feed back by the way not everything I've written down is final I may go back and change things, also no I haven't taken bofire191s whole idea of the outer republic just the name and a bit of the concept my version differentiates from his

Outer republic command

Location: Kato system

Several ships orbit over the world of kato as ships start leaving orbit.

Aboard the space station the forge.

Several officers stand around a holo table.

"Sir what do we do first order forces are pushing through our worlds to fast"

"Where is the new republic we need them"

"They have gone silent"

"Republic Cowards those fools have doomed us all"

A soldier wearing old white Armor lowers his head

"What of the resistance"

"The resistance they are not even a threat to the first order they are nothing anymore"

"And the Jedi what of the Jedi"

Several of the officers look at on another.

"We have reports from first order forces that the Jedi and remains of the resistance escaped them"

"So we have hope"

"Sir one girl isn't enough to win the war"

The man in white raises his head revealing a scorched white helmet.

"They are everything we could need"

He turns to one of the officers.

"I want a group of phantoms to find them"

They all salute.

"Sir yes sir"

A figure with a glowing visor and red and black combat Armor begins to walk out but is stopped.

"Stay away from the front and especially him"

The figure nodes and the man in white remains.

The scene fades to black

Three days later...

Blaster fire ignites in the streets of a town as stormtroopers force their way towards a Fort which is raining down blaster fire on them.

In the fort...

Resistance soldiers fire down at the stormtroopers as Finn and rey run into a makeshift conmand centre.

Leia sits in a chair as men run past her.

A soldier is talking to her.

"Sir we are almost out of rations or munitions are depleting and our men are beginning to think about surrender"

A explosion rocks the fort as part of the forts wall collapses.

Stormtroopers rush in as resistance fighters do the same.

"Fall back fall back"

A set of tie bombers appear over the horizon.

"Run for it"

Two resistance fighters break down a back door to a open field and several resistance fighters run as stormtroopers fire at them.

Rey and Finn are thrown to the ground as the bombers drop their bombs behind them.

Several seconds later.

40 stormtroopers walk past the fallen resistance fighters shooting any survivors.

One of them approaches Rey's body and takes aim.

A gunshot rings out and the stormtrooper is thrown backwards with a hole in his helmet.

Gunfire erupts from the field as several figures stand up and moving forward.

Stormtroopers crumple left and right of Rey as the stormtroopers are pushed back.

A rocket strikes a tie fighter causing it to smash into a hill side.

After some time all of the stormtroopers are dead and the figures walk past the fallen resistance fighters checking bodies

Rey and several other resistance members rise up with their hands up.

The figures walk slowly towards them with weapons aimed.

One of them goes behind Rey and hits her in the back of the head.

She crumpled as everything goes black.

When she wakes up she has a black cloth covering her eyes however she knows her surroundings.

Her hands are tied behind her back and she hears the sound of footsteps.

The footsteps stop infront of the door.

"Come here"

The cloth is pulled off revealing a man with a helmet on covered in black clothes and with a face mask on.

"Wait here your friends will be awake shortly"

"What do you want from me"

The man walks away from the door and goes and sits down in a chair.

He puts something in his ears and lays back.

A explosion rocks the cell as dirt falls from the roof.

Several hours later two men come in pulling a guy fighting against them.

They open up the door and shove him in.

"You are screwed up if you can't be nicer we are going to put you in solitary"

A gunshot goes off outside the room.

"Stay here"

The three men run up the stairs as sounds of a struggle begin to get loader.

Blaster fire erupts outside and two men run in both having red markings and riot masks on.

One of them looks at Rey.

He looks at his friend.

"Make it quick"

The man opens the door.

"You guys the new ones"

"Yes"

"follow us"

The men run up the stairs and Rey and Finn follow.

When they come out they see caos inmates attack stormtroopers as guards struggle to push the first order out the doors.

A group of soldiers wave the two guards over and they all join up.

They run down the halls coming to a door.

It opens revealing a water treatment plant.

They run in and two of them Barricade the door as the two guards pull off a vent.

"Go when you get outside run and don't stop"

They are handed two gas masks.

"And what ever you do don't get wet"

"What"

Rey crawls through the vent into a room

Several soldiers are already there.

"Check fire"

"Grab a suit a and get ready to run"

After everyone came through the vent and had a hazmat suit on the door opens revealing a thick green fog.

"Go"

The soldiers run out and begin firing on the stormtroopers.

Rey and Finn run as the soldiers and guards cover them.

They run into the trees where the fog is densest.

A man in dark camp stops them.

"Follow me"

He runs towards a large dark structure.

As they get closer they see a ship.

"Get inside it"

They run in as the soldiers follow the ship quickly lifts off and begins exiting the atmosphere.

They burst out of the fog and they see a massive fleet of first order ships surrounded by the remains of a fleet.

The ship quickly jumped into hyperspace.

Rey turns to the man in dark camo.

"Where are the others"

"Doesn't mater all that matters is that we extracted you"

She grabs his blaster and points it to is head.

"Where are the others"

"I would drop that gun before you get hurt Jedi"

The man grabs her arm and she pulls the trigger the gun clicks.

"No clip Jedi"

Someone pulls her down.

"Now you are going to stop before we gag you"

Several hours later...

The ramp comes down and the soldiers lead them through a temple.

Several lookouts Stare at Rey as she walks.

They go through a set of doors into a large chamber with a figure sitting at a table wearing a hood and looking down at a book.

The soldiers leave Finn and Rey locking the door behind them

Rey and finn slowly approach the figure

A echo like voice comes from the figure.

"What do you fight for child"

"Not you her"

Rey steps forward as Finn stops.

"You are something seen not by many"

The figure puts something on the table the hand shriveled and dead.

"It will take you to your destiny"

She picks up a small old metal disk with symbols on it.

"The final battle awaits and they will need you more then ever"

Ghostly whispers begin to come from the walls.

"She will serve them well ancestors"

Several force ghosts come from the walls.

"The reckoning has begun"

"The final battle must be fought or there will never be a balance"

Several red force ghosts appear from the walls.

"End our endless war let us rest"

Suddenly all the ghosts disappear as the doors open.

"Leave now and end the bloodshed"

After Finn and Rey left a man wearing armour and a helmet with a red visor hands Rey a box.

"A gift from the ancestors let it serve you well"

When they walk outside they see a massive city.

A woman in a robe speaks.

"You may now see your friends and leave this world"

After several days the resistance left the world aboard a nebulon-b frigate.

They pass a small fleet of ships and were accompanied by two escort fighters.

"So where do we go now"

"Well they gave me this"

She pulls out the disk.

A droid walks towards it and takes it.

It presses down on it and a holographic map appears with a green blinking dot it then puts it on a table.

The resistance looks at the droid as it goes back to work.

"Okey So before we do anything we have to gather forces"

Suddenly two red blinking dots appear on the map.

"Well the map seems to be showing worlds."

Suddenly the ship turns hard to the right as a star destroyer comes out of hyperspace.

The ship enters hyperspace as the resistance members look around in shock.

The ship stops suddenly and the power cuts.

"Well then"

They hear a ship attach to the hull as the power comes back on.

The door suddenly opens and a group of soldiers come in.

One of the soldiers pulls out a radio.

"We found the Jedi"

"Give them the location we talked about"

The soldier pulls a data chip.

"Follow the instructs go to the system and get some people to join your resistance and get it back in order"

"And help us out a bit"

Rey stops the soldier

"Wait who sent you"

"Ash says they are going to try some aggressive negotiating"

The soldiers leave the room as leia sits down.

Finn asks

"Who is ash"

Leia shakes her head

"A old friend and a great ally of the rebellion"

They insert the chip in the computer as a map appears.

Five days later...

Location: first order prison camp

World of talios

Rows of civilians walk towards a large fortress as they struggle through the rain and mud.

Stormtroopers walk next to them pushing them forward.

The people sob as they continue forward.

As the rows of people enter the prison groups of people start yelling at the stormtroopers as people begin to riot.

A man in imperial officer uniform yells

"Anyone who spreads rebellious propaganda and the false lies of disorder will be named a traitor and be executed"

A man speaks from the crowd.

"The only lies are that of the first order"

Two stormtroopers drag a man out of the crowd and force him to the ground.

"Let this be a example for further traitorous acts"

The officer pulls out a blaster and aims it at him.

A laser strikes the officer and he flies back as the mob terrified drops to the ground.

A rocket flies over their heads and strikes the gate ripping it off its hinges.

Laser fire erupts as men with blasters rush the stormtroopers.

A vehicle drives through the opening firing its turret at the stormtroopers as the prisoners run out.