First, I'm new at FanFiction, and I had made an account because one of my friends told me too. I enjoy reading, thought I have written stories too, and my friend saw one of them yesterday, and she told me that I should make an account on fanfiction, so here I am. Constructed criticism is welcome, and comments too.
Summary: "Why did you leave me?" said a girl with golden blonde hair. "I didn't leave you, I had too" said a boy with blonde hair."In other words, you left me" "No, they took me" "Who, took you?"
Here is my first chapter.
(No one's P.O.V)
During the night, a girl with golden blonde hair would sit next to her window, the moon reflecting on her wavy blonde hair. She would sit on her fancy brown chair, waiting for her prince to come, he never did. She still remembered the night he left, the moon was still young.
(Flashback, 5 years ago)
"WHAT?! You can't go." screech the blond hair girl.
"You don't want me too, but I can" said the blonde hair boy.
"I know...But, why?"
"That is to be kept a secret, you'll know when the time is right."
"Will you come back?"
"Of course I will, don't worry it'll be only for a small amount of time."
"How long?"
"Bubbles, I'll come back before you say 'Good bye'."
"But, bu-" Bubbles was interrupted by the boy.
"Bubbles, I'll come back, now I must leave. Good bye" said the boy, while giving her a kiss full on the lips, and then turning his back. Bubbles watch the love of her life going away from her, a tear left her eyes.
"Good bye, Boomer" whisper Bubbles, before Boomer had went out of sight. Bubbles return home, with puffy red eyes.
(End of Flashback)
This day was not the same, Bubbles saw a figure of a person coming her way. She blink and the figure was nowhere to be seen, for a second Bubbles thought she was seeing things. After all, the night was foggy and silent. A knock on the door interrupted Bubbles from her thoughts. She groan, and went downstairs to open the door. Who would come and visit her on such a dark, scary, dull, foggy, and horrible day? Bubbles didn't take all the locks off, she took a peek before unlocking the last lock. On the other side, stood a man with a hood on. He was holding his left rib for support, like if he was been hurt.
He heard the door being unlocked and he tilt his head up, making his eyes come face to face with Bubbles. His eyes pleaded for help, knowing Bubbles she would never leave someone who needed help. She unlocked the last lock, and he came in as fast as possible and closed the door behind him. Locking all the locks, not one single lock remained unlock. Bubbles looked terrified to see the young man's reactions, she slowly back away grabbing a lamp just in case. The man, took off his hood, revealing his sharp face features, blond hair and hotness. Bubbles, took a good look at his eyes, those eyes seem familiar. Those dark blue eyes, seem in pain.
"B-Bubbles, is that you?" said the stranger, while walking forwards to Bubbles.
"Yes, I'm Bubbles and who are you?" asked Bubbles, while holding the lamp even more close to her.
"Remember me, I'm Boomer." said Boomer, with a hurt expression on his face, for his girl didn't remember him.
"Boomer...Why did you leave me?" said Bubbles, tripping over a cable.
"I didn't leave you, I had too." said Boomer, getting even more closer to Bubbles.
"In other words, you left me!" exclaimed Bubbles, while trying to get away from him.
"No, they took me." sighed Boomer, and kept getting closer to Bubbles.
"Who took you?" asked Bubbles, now her and Boomer stood only a few inches away.
"Them." said Boomer, while pointing out the window. His eyes focus on a big giant figure, thought all you could see was the figure's shadow.
"I only see one shadow, what you mean by 'them'." said Bubbles, Boomer puts his finger on his lips.
"Look again." Boomer whispers, Bubbles once again turns to look out the window. The once big giant figure, was no more. Now two median figures stood sniffing for something, like hungry dogs. Boomer motions for Bubbles to back away, and he slowly closes the window. Now Bubbles eyes focus on Boomer, she saw blood on his black hood.
"Boomer, what happened there?" asked Bubbles, pointing at Boomer's wound.
"Oh, I was attack by them." said Boomer, while limping.
"Oh, let me clean it." said Bubbles, and stood up from her couch and went walking to the bathroom to go get medicine, for him. She went back to the living room, and left the medicine on the table. She then went up the stairs to go get a cloth and water to clean the wound. Before leaving, she remembered leaving the window opened and went back to close it. There was a loud 'thump' sound, making Bubbles jump from being scared and because the ground was shaking. Bubbles stood still not moving an inch, and she heard the crackling of the leaves. Also, the sound of an animal or something sniffing next to the window, something BIG. The noises stopped and faded away, alerting Bubbles to close the window as soon as possible before the creäture came back. She stood up, and smack the window down. Then, she went running down stairs, to find Boomer putting the pills in his mouth.
"Boomer did you hear that?" Bubbles asked, while getting closer to Boomer.
"I felt the ground shaking, but I don't think they'll come inside, after all they have poor eyesight. They'll know you are here, if she smell you near by. You do have all the windows close, right?" said Boomer, while stretching his legs.
"Y-yeah, yes!" said Bubbles, as she bent down next to Boomer's wound. She started cleaning it, making Boomer wince in pain, and roll over.
End of chapter one, I do hope to get feedback, so I can continue the next chapter. Remember, constructive criticism is accepted! R&R
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