OK So this is my first ever story so apology's if it's really bad. All comments welcome. If you want me to continue this plz comment. So any way here goes.
Gwen's P.O.V
In life you get boys who are just make great friends and you get boys who just make great boyfriends. So now I'm confused, me and Duncan have been going out for a year now it was great at the start don't get me wrong but now I just get the feeling we were just meant to be friends and I think he feels it to. Trent though well… that's all I can say, well.
Trent's P.O.V
I'm only kidding myself when I say I don't love her, but I can't and I hate it I hate Duncan. I remember thinking to myself look theirs maybe still a chance then he came back and all hope was lost. I tried to still be friends with her but it's just too hard. The biggest mistake I ever mad though was back on the island when she was in the final, I think what was I thinking I didn't think loved her I know I love her if only I had told maybe she would still be mine.
I know its short but anyway what do you think should I write more or just scrap it plz
Give me your opinion ways to improve greatly appreciated Thanks :D