So this is the first time i've ever publishing a fanfic I've ever written, so I would like lots of critique
Im kinda new at this so (blah blah blah)
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto (just a few characters cuz I'm an nut)
Well enjoy!
(i'll get better at this...hopfuly -_-)
A torched uchiha story
Prologue
"Mama?" She slowly looked at her mother; cold tears flew off the crying women's cheeks and onto the young girl. She saw her mother the strong arrogant Maika who let nothing get to her, tremble in the corner uncontrollably.
"Mama?" she said again, the whispers of the small child startled the crying women
"Yes Kaiya?" she wiped tears from her swollen eyes
"Papa's dead right?"
Maika stared horrified at the young child, such a question spoken so emotionlessly. She shuttered, indeed she was his daughter
"Yes kaiya" he voice cracked a whisper that was barley audible
"And Sasuke killed him?" No. No. No. Maika screamed in her head this was not exposed to happen she was a young mother but still were had she gone wrong, he made her promise, promise not to let her be succumbed by this.
"Yes kaiya but-"
"Mama" the child cut her mother of but this time with ought a questioning tone. Maika began to cry fearing her 6 year old daughter's words.
"Mama, I will kill Sasuke" she turned on he heal and headed for the door, then stopped and without looking she mutter three simple words.
"Kaiya hates mama" she said just as emotionlessly as he would, then she left leaving her crying mother. Those words hit Maika, they hit her hard. It was her fault she didn't stop him and now he was dead. She felt the guilt rise up in her, she was so angry at him she had wished for his death. Maika wept uncontrollably, her love was dead and her only daughter was caught in the string of revenge and she could do nothing but cry and curse the uchiha clan and its curse of revenge it seemed they all suffer from it.
Kaiya trained for months no breaks she only stopped to eat and sleep and that was rare. She truly had her fathers will.
When she was done, she stood 3 feet taller then before her hair was longer sweeping to her back .her face thick with age.
"Perfection." She wisped to the air. She had perfected her most dangerous jutsu yet, the only price her youth. The girl had given ten years of her life to purse revenge. Now she looked 16, so resembling her father. She tied her hair to the side like he did. Two lines ran down the side of her nose now. She pulled her father's black and red cloak around her shoulders. Then slowly pulled her fathers head band her forehead. She was an exact replica of him, a bit shorter and skinner but still a clone of him. her intention. She had perfected all his jutsu's even his eyes for one soul reason to hunt Sasuke down.
Things did not start of like this the started simply with the one event that decided all the uchiha's fates in this world. The uchiha massacre. So let's take a step back a little after the uchiha tragedy and a little before this when kaiya first entered the hidden leaf village.
Ok so that was the prologue hope you liked it. Kind of intense, don't worry kaiya isn't always like that!
I feel that since it's my first time I'm going to update depending on if I get a review so if I don't know more chapters. So please review good or bad I want to know!