An: So this is my first Percy Jackson fanfic. Please be brutal, I need to know what my mistakes are, and I need people who can tell me and who can show me what I did right. Thanks!
Percy Jackson and the Olympians belong to Rick Riodan or however you spell is last name
Percy's POV:
It was like any normal day at Camp Half Blood. Kids doing everything they could do have fun. The stool twins doing anything they could to annoy everyone. It was a year since Kronos died and it was peaceful. There was far less monsters in the war and more half bloods were safe and coming into the camp. It was that day that sent me into a burning abyss and no chance of coming out. There was a new half blood by the name of James Williams. A son of Zeus. He was 10x as strong and skilled as Percy. Every quest he went on, he completed with flying colors. Yet the thing that shocked me the most is when zues and posiden announced that when they poth had sex with the same female, their sperm mixed together to create James. He was ¾ god, ¼ human. Faster, stronger , and more skilled than any other of us. The day that set me off was the day my father came to the camp. Everyone thought I had gone home for the rest of the 4th of July weekend. My father then announced that James was his "favorite son and the best hero of all time." Even Annabeth dumped me for him. She was always around him and was just awestricken "Really dad, really." "Percy-I" "Shut the fuck up!" Everyone was shocked and stunned. "That is no way to talk to your father!" Then he raised his trident , chanted something in ancient Greek, and a beam of lighting struck at me. A dark cloud surrounded me and it struked back at him. "Poseidon, I think it is time to reveal the truth to Percy." Out of the cloud came Oceanus, the titan of the sea. "Oceanus! How did you escape tartarus! "I believe I shouldn't miss the grand occasion when Percy finds out the truth. "He should never have to hear it" I couldn't take this. "What the hell are you both talking about!" Oceanus walked towards me and touched my forehead. A vision pored through my head. It was Zeus and Poseidon standing over me and talking. "What should we do, he is the first half human-titan ever to be born." "I will use the mist and use it to create the illusion that he is my son. "Are you sure Poseidon" "Yes" The vision disappeared "Father, its time for war" I said