This is chapter one of my new story! The other one is abandoned for now but read it and give me reviews! Reviews keep me writing!
I rewrote this chapter because I felt like it was too short and I was losing readers because of the impression it gave that all my chapters were that short.

"Bye, see you tomorrow, Michelle!" my friends said.

Jake looked at me and smiled, but then went back to chatting with his friends. My heart fluttered, but I quickly let that feeling disappear.

BEEP BEEP! My mom's car horn honked outside of school and I ran to her. I shoved my stuff in the trunk and got up to the front seat.

"How was your day honey?" she asked absentmindedly. She says that every day but I doubt she listens to what I would have to say.

"Meh, we had Spanish today, but she was sick so we had a free period. So fun," I said.

"Glad you enjoyed yourself. I went and got you that hat you wanted," she said.

"Oh cool, thanks mom!" I told her.

We went and had lunch at some random sandwich shop, and then we went home. She gave me my new beanie and then I went to watch television.

As soon as my dad got home, I had to set up the dinner table for us to eat.

When we sat down, I was picking at my food. We were having my least favorite food of all time. Who likes stuffed cabbage? Blegh! My mom kept trying to get me to eat, and my grandma tried to ignore me, but throwing dirty looks at me every once in a while.

I picked out the cabbage and ate the rice stuffing, then went to my room.

I decided to get some homework done, so I pulled out an English book. Ugh, this stuff was annoying. I mean, who needs to know what an object of a preposition is! My mom doesn't know this stuff and she turned out just fine! So not fair. I'll just do it at recess tomorrow with some other friend who didn't do it. That was all the homework I had so I put my English book away and threw my backpack onto my desk. I moved over to the bookshelf next to my desk.

I pulled out Eclipse and opened to a random page. I started reading from there. You see, Twilight is my favorite story of all time. A few weeks ago, my friends and I had a twilight movie marathon and we stayed up ALL night. It was so fun. If I saw one of the actors of twilight, I would probably freak out. I just sat there reading until my phone buzzed in the back pocket of my jeans.

I looked at my phone and saw a text. "Hey how's it going? Going 2 mall tmrw, wana come?" It was my friend Jake. I secretly liked him, but I would never tell. He was too… not my type.

I replied, "Sure, what time?" I was planning on asking my mom… eventually. I read until I fell asleep at around two in the morning, even though my 'bedtime' is at 8:30 because we live far away from school. I never liked that because everyone else stays up until like ten or eleven. What my mom doesn't know, won't kill her.

When I woke up, I felt kind of different. Maybe I was going to get sick soon or something. I got up off my bed, rubbed my eyes a little and looked around. I noticed my room was different. None of my things were there, and even the setting was different. There was never a window there or a nightstand here. This was definitely NOT my room.

I quickly got up and found a mirror. I screamed as soon as my eyes fell on it.

Okay, that might have been a little slow or boring, but I promise it gets really good! Review please!