This is my first 'vampire' story I've made and I want you all to enjoy it, I don't know if I'm any good at writing these types of stories so you tell me.
Summary: Amy has been alone half her life, her parents never were home and her brother was off somewhere trying to make something of his life. All she ever wanted was to get that warm feeling she did whenever she felt somewhat loved. When she becomes a vampire, she gains a gift that makes her feel cold and the darkness takes over. Dante, who had came to her rescue when she was being turned, falls in love with her during the three days of her transformation. When Amy is ripped away from him the moment those three days end, he doesn't know what to do and he goes to the Cullens.
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"Please! Please, don't do this!" I screamed, thrashing my legs.
The man wasn't paying much attention to my pleading, his eyes were trained on my neck as blood pulsed through my veins quickly.
I couldn't look at him, he wasn't normal and that's all I knew.
If you looked at him, you knew he wasn't normal when your eyes met his crimson red eyes. He was a monster.
So badly, I wanted to push him off and give him a piece of my mind.
But I wasn't strong enough, he was stronger than me.
My eyes widened as he leaned forward to take a bite and his teeth sunk into the flesh of my neck causing me to let out one of the most loudest screams I have ever done in my life. I felt as though my life was slowly draining away, my heart racing in my chest.
That when I heard, "Let her go!" from a loud voice.
The man pulled back and I could see some of my blood on his lips, his tongue slowly licked away any trace of him even having drank my blood.
"Go away." the man hissed.
The voice laughed, "I'll give you two seconds to drop her and run before I kill you myself." it said.
Why wasn't he just saving me?
A burn spread throughout my body and I gasped, my eyes widening like saucers. "No...no!" I screamed, my hands going to his wrist.
"Damn it." the voice muttered, like he knew what was happening to me.
Suddenly, I was falling to the ground and the man who had been holding me before was flying towards the alley wall. As much as I wanted to run, I couldn't. The fire wasn't letting me move much unless I wanted to claw it out, but I knew that would be stupid.
Someone crouched down beside me and I felt a cold hand on my cheek, I shivered from the cold as it literally seeped through my skin. It helped the fire a bit and I was grateful that it did, I don't want to burn.
"The venom...it's spread." it whispered.
A girl...a girl my age.
My eyes tried to opened, but they quickly closed in pain. My heart was slowly breaking and I felt like clawing my heart out just to stop the pain, "Make it stop." I begged.
Beside me I heard footsteps and shuffled when someones hand was on my forehead, I gasped and my teeth pulled my lips in between them. "Put it out." I whispered wearily.
As quickly as it came, it left and I was left in a cold yet warm state.
My eyes opened, but I could see nothing because it had started raining. Never in my life have I felt so tired, but right now I did and I felt like sleeping. "There. I've taken away your pain and you'll feel tired, I beg you not to fall asleep and maybe you'll make it through the transformation. That is the only catch, I brought up your exhaustion and replaced it with the pain of the burn. Please, try to stay awake and don't fall asleep. I'm begging you." another voice explained.
The voice was soft and gentle, but definitely a man's voice.
He wanted me to live, he wanted to see me live.
That was enough to pull me through this, for some reason I felt a bond forming between us until the burn began to come back. A took mine and it disappeared again, but yells and cries of pain filled my ears.
Why was he doing this for me?
"Oh, Dante." the girl's voice whispered brokenly.
I couldn't help the tears that fell for him, he was in pain because of me and he didn't want me to feel the burn.
"I-if I can take it away, I-I'll do it." he choked out, letting out another cry.
For awhile, I just let my tears fall as I laid there. Unable to move my body or even my lips, I wanted to die.
He going through this torture just so that I wouldn't feel the pain of it.
Why?
"Dante, please stop." the girl whispered again, it felt like ages since she had spoken last.
A loud yell filled the silence and he kept on yelling for awhile until all fell silent, "Dante?" the girl called.
Then, in what seemed like seconds after he had stopped my heart took off like a rocket. Speeding up at an amazing rate until it fell silent, I couldn't hear it anymore.
I heard a groan and my throat began to burn, but not like the burn before. It was more of a burn similar to a dry throat, I was aching with thirst.
My body was pulled towards someone and they felt warm, but their heart wasn't beating like mine wasn't.
A silent melody.
My eyes opened more and I looked up to finally see a man that was about twenty years old, his gold eyes were staring down at me with happiness and relief. Behind him, a young girl stood and she was leaning over him to get a good look at me. I could tell she acted a bit animated at times, but for now she was dead serious.
"You're...done." he whispered, brushing away my bangs from my face.
Deep inside, right in the core of my body, a coldness began to spread throughout me and I winced. I don't like this feeling, I felt like I had just swallowed a lot of ice and it wasn't moving from the pit of my stomach.
Roughly, I was pulled back like a doll and my hands shot out to my sides.
Like a puppet.
My eyes were wide as I stared at the two, they were just as surprised as I was.
What's happening to me?
"What is this, Sophia?" Dante asked, looking up at the girl.
She closed her eyes and she held out her arms out in front of her, her palms facing me as something began to tighten around my neck.
"Her gift...it's the ability to control the darkness and anything dark." she whispered, her eyes shooting open.
Just as she finished speaking, I let out a loud scream.
"Help me! Please, help!" I cried, trying to reaching for them.
Dante got up and held out his hands, "Don't worry." he said.
Whatever was holding me began tugging me back towards the shadows, never have I felt more scared in my life. Sure, when that man attacked me I was scared, but now I was fearful for me and them.
My left hand was freed and I reached out just as he did, our hands connecting and they began trying to pull me back. A cold chill ran up my arm and kinda stayed in the palm of my hand where Dante was holding, his gift was to control ice.
That was a cool gift.
Our hands began to slip and he looked into my eyes, "Your name?" he asked breathlessly.
A smile spread across my face, "Amy." with that I was pulled back and I didn't even try to fight back.
I got this idea from a song called Hero by Superchick, I don't know what the story has to do with the song but maybe you can help me? Review, please.
Thank you.
-Angel