balmung's angel: hi! this is my first fanfiction. i am really excited that i could finally write one. actually i already wrote and posted this, as some of you might know. i changed the story a little, and i edited the part that i didn't think was very good. so please R&R! i like co-hosts, so in this story, i will have one. and that person is-
jaken: do not read this fanfiction! this fanfiction is bad!!!!!!!!!!!!
balmung's angel: jaken, you're the only "bad" thing here. and by the way, i was trying to introduce you to the readers before you so rudely interrupted me!
jaken:laughs maniacally i love being bad and i love interrupting you! more manaical laughter
balmung's angel: o-kaaaay. shakes head so i want to know how bad or good this story is, so please tell me, and don't hold anything back.
jaken: you're forgetting something.
balmung's angel: hm? what are you talking about?
jaken: you need to tell the people that are actually trying to read this something else.
balmung's angel: oh yeah. thanks jaken. i do own inuyasha, and i never will. all origional characters belong to rumiko takahashi.
jaken: thank you. now, will you strt the stupid story already?
balmung's angel: why do you call it stupid?
jaken: because you kill me in the first chapter. me! i'm supposed to be the hero of your story!
balmung's angel: says who?? and jaken, don't give away things from the story!
jaken: i do, i will give away all i want, and if you want to live, then make me the hero!
balmung's angel: no way jaken. i'm not afraid of you. anyways, that won't go along with the theme i wrote for this. okay, now let's start the story and ignore the disturbed little demon.
jaken: wait! no! i'm not done with you yet mortallllllllllll! voice fades into the distance along with his curses
chapter 1: prologue
9 years ago:
there she was, a ten year old girl, watching helpless as the demon she loved fought to save her. he was soaked in his own blood, as was the small demon next to him. a-oon, the other demon in their party already lay behind them, dead.
"hahahaha!" laughed naraku, the demon sesshomaru and jaken were fighting. he swooped toward jaken, killing him with one of the many sharp demon parts attached to his body.
sesshomaru, seeing naraku turn toward rin, ran to save her. "rin, run away now!" he yelled as he threw himself in front of her. naraku did the same thing to sesshomaru as he had done to jaken, killilng him as well. the demon lord fell, blood poring from his body.
the demon that had just killed her best friends laughed in a very mad way, grinning down at the demons he had slaughtered. "sad, are you little girl?" he asked rin as he flew over towards her in one quick motion.
rin gasped and almost fell backwards in an effort to aviod running into him. she stared up at him, hatred and anger in her eyes. tears streamed down her face as she began to talk. "h-how could you?" she asked him, her voice shaking. "how could you kill my friends?"
"i kill many things girl," naraku said with a laugh. "but i will make a deal with you. if you want revenge for their deaths, i can make that happen. all you have to do is give your body to me now, and again when you turn twenty. and if you don't then, i will take it from you myself. it's that simple. i will also make it so that you will be immortal and that you will never be able to die, or at least until i am killed. but in return, you will never be able to forget this night. you will be haunted by it for the rest of your life. also, if you somehow manage to escape me before you turn twenty, i promise that you will be reunited with your loved ones for i will bring them back from the dead."
rin thought a moment, then answered. "i'll do it, if you give me your word that they really will come back to life if i manage to get away from you," rin said venomously. she started to shiver when naraku smirked.
"this will be quite amusing. watching a girl suffer and never die. i will make her suffering last as long as possible," naraku thought. "you have my word," he said to tin at last. afterwards, he took her body and the deal began.
after they had finished, naraku licked his lips. "now you are immortal," he said. " and let your hatred for me keep you going." and he vanished into thin air, leaving rin all alone, with her friends' bodies. she swore that she would not only get away from him, but she would kill him as well for what he had done. after all she would do anything in order to save her friends.
balmung's angel: thanks for reading. sorry for the short chapter. so, how did i do? please review, so i know how to make the next chapter better. and maybe jaken will even be nice in the next chapter. laughs evilly
jaken: what are you implying?
balmung's angel: sigh nothing, nothing. :-)
jaken: you are an irresponsible mortal.
balmung's angel: what are you babbling about now jaken?
jaken: you forgot something AGAIN! OY!
balmung's angel?????????huh?...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 oh! i'm sorry. i completely forgot.
jaken: shakes head in disgust typical.
balmung's angel: sticks tongue out at jaken i'm going to be out of town for a week so i won't be able to update. :( sorry. i promise to update as soon as i get back.