Hey everyone! I got the idea of this story from Eragon. I need TEN reviews before I write the next chapter…So, TEN REVEIWS!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto
Time period-Renaissance
Prologue- (Heh, short one)
My name is Tian. I am 16 years old. They call me Tenten where I am now. I don't have a last name, my parents died when I was born. Nobody has any idea what it is. Even if I had a last name, I couldn't tell you, they might find me. I can't tell you where I am right now…I can't trust anyone. I am Tian, weapons maker of Suna, and this is my story.
Chapter one –Sight-
Tian (It would be TianTian, but I'm too lazy.) looked around at the different shops –Food, clothes, silversmith…- She glanced down at the slip of paper the old man in the shop had given her. She was going to the blacksmith to pick up some materials. It was some strange metal he had found. He said that it was too soft, and he couldn't use it for anything, so he would give it to her for about 500 yen. (I'm not sure how much that would be, so…) She looked up. This should be the place… Tian pushed the door open to see Mr.Koto at work. He was making horse shoes. "Ah, you've arrived." He said, not looking up from his work. He called out to his wife that was probably in the backroom. "Oi! Yuzu! Can you get that metal that I found?" Tian heard what sounded like a yes, and looked up when a woman –probably in her late thirties- came out with a sack in hand.
She set it in Tian's arms, while Tian handed the woman the 500yen. "I found it near the pond…the water must have set in and softened it." Mr.Koto went back to working.
"Thank you, Koto-Sama" Tian bowed and pushed the door back open. It was a windy day out, so Tian had to put her hair up into a ponytail, using a hair tie that she found in her pocket. Tian had black hair with blonde highlights –nobody knew how she got the highlights…hair dye was just invented a few years ago, and only very rich families could afford it…others had to use wigs.- She also had very strange eyes. They were green with bright silver sparks. Nobody in the entire village had seen anything like it. (Okay…just bare with me on how she looks right now. I know its not how she actually looks, so don't nag me about it, kay?) Tian took out another slip of paper that had her grocery list on it. Bread, cheese, and milk…maybe some raisin bread for after supper if it wasn't too expensive. Tian wasn't rich –she lived on a weapon smith salary, and she didn't have parents to help her. She was just the weapons maker of Suna. She wasn't a ninja –she couldn't afford the academy, Tian just happened to have very good aim to test the weapons she made. She didn't know any combat moves, and didn't know how to control her chakra. (Did I spell that right? Ugh, I'm so tired…) Tian was one of the best friends of the Kazekage, Gaara. He was the one who got her at least a hut to live in. Otherwise, she would be a beggar on the streets. "Happy birthday Tian-Chan!" Tian swerved to see Tamari –Gaara's sister- holding a box up to Tian's eye level. Did I mention today was her 15th birthday? "Gaara wanted to give it to you, but he's at that very important meeting." Tamari emphasized the word 'very' as much as possible. "Thank you!" Tenten smiled, taking the box from her friend. Kankuro appeared behind Tamari.
"Happy happy birthday Tian-Kun" He smirked. "I told you not to call me –Kun- Kankuro! I am a girl you know!" Tian scowled. "Ya sure about that?" He dared to question. Bad choice. He received a bump on his head.
Tian opened her gift at her house. She gasped. It was a kunai set. They were all make out of the finest metal, and were glossed until shiny. (OOOOO pretty, pretty, shiny, shiny!) Tian tried it out. It worked perfectly. She needed to remember to thank Gaara later. Speaking of Gaara…
At the meeting…
"Today is her 15th birthday! One year to go…you know what happens on her 16th birthday!" One of the leaders spoke. "Her eyes may hold the power that is feared, but that's still no reason to KILL her!" Gaara was the next speaker. "There has to be another way." Said Tsunade of Konoha. The leaders all spoke amongst themselves.
"We'll put it to a vote then."
More than half the people voted to get rid of her now, so they don't take the risk. The others –Hidden mist, Leaf, Sand, and Star said to try something else. Gaara was outraged. "NO! You cant just kill her! You don't even know if she-" He was cut off. "She is! We leave to get her at dawn." … "What is this child's name?" questioned Tsunade.
"Tian"
That's it XD. TEN REVEIWS! Sorry its short…and slightly demented :)-Rukia.
