I woke up having no idea where I was, nor did I care, who would when you saw your parents die in front of you. Not that they were murdered they just succumbed to old wounds from the Fall of Uzushio. Anyways after coming to terms with what happened I asked where I was a nurse told me I was in Konoha. I guess that explains the smell of trees. This leads us to where we are now, with me staring into the eyes of one Hiruzen Sarutobi, the Sandaime Hokage of Konohagakure.
"Hello" I said plainly
"Hello, my boy" he responded in a grandfatherly manner " What is your name young one" he asked
"My name is Fenris, Fenris Uzumaki" I said calmly
"Ohoho really now, isn't that interesting" he said in a surprised and amused manner " How can you prove such a bold claim my boy"
"Like this" I said pushing out my open palm causing my vermilion Kongo Fusa to emerge from my palms
At this the old mans pipe drops from his mouth his jaw firmly planted on the floor, I snickered at his reaction
"Also look at my hair and eyes" I said still chuckling
He looked and saw spiky (AN:think of the Rikudo Sennin's hair but Naruto's Rikudo mode hair horns) vibrant vermilion hair and sparkling metallic purple eyes with an angular face and flat indented chin.
"You... make a good point, anymore surprises my boy" He asked kindly
"Yes actually two things one: my Rinnegan" I say before activating said dojutsu before he fainted "Well that was amusing"
A couple minutes later after I shut off the rinnegan
"That wasn't a dream was it" he asked tiredly
"Nope" I said popping the word out "Now for the second thing I wish to become a genin and be on Naruko Uzumaki's team"
"How do you know her" he asked instantly on edge
"Well first of all I can easily sense her Uzumaki chakra and second I can hear them whispering about her after I said my name" I explained
"Oh sorry, but still why do you want on her team anyway" he asked now curious
"Well someone needs to teach her the Uzumaki Arts" I said as if it was the simplest thing in the world
"Wait how do you know the Uzumaki Arts" he asked confused
"My parents took the scrolls for them before they fled Uzushio" I said sadly
"Where are they now" he asked, interested
"Destroyed, I mastered all of them and so I destroyed them" I said simply
"Oh, OK I can get you on her team but be careful when teaching her those techniques" he said, resigned
" OK I cant wait to meet her" I said excited
How was my story guys, good, bad, horrifically terrible. You tell me I will accept your criticism with utmost appreciation so feel free to point out things that were bad in it OK bye now!