Alleignt ending

by i can't care

How i think the end should've been. Tobias goes crazy from missing Tris and is bed-ridden, can't do anything for himself, can't remember anything but Tris. he sometimes cries so much they must put him to sleep (for a few minutes). He always sees her in his dreams. Christina also is going through the loss of her best friend, but she has the comfort of Matthew, a scientist.

1. Gone

Hey guys! It's me again and I wanted to say I have the next five chapters written, I just have to upload them. Sorry for this one being so short, the others are longer. I just wanted to capture how crazy Tobias is feeling, the loss the everything. So yeah, the next chapters will be up once the thing lets them show up! So yeah! I just hated the Allegiant ending. I get it; she had to die for love, blah, blah. But I just thought about Tobias and all her friends, how they felt. So Yeah. Now the authors note is longer than the chapter. Great.

Gone

Tris is still gone. She still isn't just going to wake up and smile at me, asking for a kiss. That bullet wound isn't just going to go tomorrow. She'll be forever dead. A week has passed, and somehow I still can't comprehend it. She's gone. No. More. Tris