Hi, I don't own Fairy Tail; I do own my OCs I would love a review of my story.
Cat of Fairy Tail
"…Damn…Black Cat…" a member of the newly destroyed dark guild groaned as he watched the figure's black trench coat billow out on an unknown wind as the figure strutted away. Soon officers filed in and the conscious were arrested first.
"Cat…Cat…CAT!" an exasperated voice said as the figure from earlier undid the buckles and buttons of their coat. The coat parted revealing a feminine figure wearing a black shirt that stopped at her midriff, the left side trailing down to her hip; under was a pink top that stopped an inch above her belly button. She wore gray cloth pants with read bands above her knees and around her calves, midway. She ran a hand through her 'short' hair and the magic she had placed on it fell away as her hair tumbled down her back to its usual length. As the sun peaked over the horizon, it reflected off the girl's dark purple hair.
"CAT!" the voice yelled again
"You know, Shiro, you could just change into a human and talk to me while helping me pull back my hair instead of giving me a headache." The girl said sounding sarcastic. There was a fizz and sparkles around the girl's shoulder until a small, white, furry lizard-like creature sat there. There was another shower of sparkles and snow as the creature disappeared and a male with white hair and icy blue eyes appeared beside her. He was wearing a whitish gray fur coat and faded jeans.
"I think you need a vacation or-" 'Shiro' started as he did as she requested and helped her pull her hair into a ponytail wrapping a red cloth around it many times.
"What's the next job, Shiro?" she asked him dully ignoring his statement. Some of her hair couldn't stay pulled back; some shorter strands surrounding her head while two portions of her bangs were longer than the rest, the left side bangs being even longer than the right side. Shiro pushed them aside to look into her…eye since, he realized, she still wore an eye patch over her left eye.
"Your next job is to 'Take A Break.'" He said flipping the eye patch up to look into her dual colored eyes: the left one being crimson red and the right one being teal. Cat sighed he always pestered her about her health and stuff like that.
"…We'll see. Let's go get my reward but on the way think about where we should go next." Cat said pulling her eye patch back down and heading to her client's house.
-Later-
"A con, a total rip-off! They give me a third of the original reward because I took down the guild within ten minutes. Just because they thought they had misjudged the simplicity of the task! It probably was something with me being a girl too. Why those-" Cat ranted as Shiro tried hopelessly to calm her down.
"Now, Cat, calm down. You didn't hear the whole story. They said some other guild caused damages and they can't afford the damage." Shiro said calmly.
"And did you catch the name of this guild?" Cat hissed.
"Um…Fairy Tail, I think."
So, what do you think? I already have the second chapter I just have to type it out and update but I would realy love a review.