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Hellsing: A Meister and her Vampire.

Chapter 1: Acquittance

Maka's perspective:

Professor Stein walked into the classroom with two new students.

"Class, we have two new students today" said Stein.
"Please, introduce yourselves."

"My name is Alexander, but you can call me Alex" said
the new student with black hair and red eyes.

"The name's Joshua, but please call me Josh if you want."
said the new student with silver hair and white eyes.

"HEY, DON'T STEAL MY SPOTLIGHT!" yelled Black Star.

"I am certain that you are Black Star. Please tell me if i'm
wrong"

"Yet two more people who think they're cooler than me."
Soul remarked quietly.

"I heard that." replied Alexander.

"Take a seat, class will begin shortly"

The two new students sat down two rows in front of me.

"I wonder where they came from." I thought.

"Now, can anyone tell me what a Lycan is?" asked Stein.

Alexander, Joshua, and I raised our hands.

"Yes Alexander."

"A Lycan is another name for a werewolf."

"Excellent Alexander. Joshua, what are their weaknesses?"

"Usually silver, however I have heard that regular weapons
work too. "

"I wonder where they're from." I thought.

"Wer'e British." Alex said.

"How'd you know.."

"Intuition"

Ding-dong Death gong. (How the bell rings in the manga.)

All the students got out of their seats.

"Alexander, Johnathan. Lord Death would like to see you."
I overheard Professor Stein tell them.

Alexander's perspective:

After Professor Stein directed us to the Death Room, we hurriedly
ran there to see what the Lord of Death wanted from us.

"Well hello young ones." Death said.

"Lord Death I presume?"

"Yes, I am Lord Death. So tell me, why is a member of
Hellsing at the Death Weapon Meister Academy?"

"We have three objectives. 1: Find my father Alucard. 2: We
believe a former spy of Millenium is within your ranks. 3:
Recruitment."

"What makes you think he's here?" said the younger man
next to Death.

"There have been reports of vampire attacks within the
vicinity."

"Any ghouls reported too?" Death asked.

"Not to my knowledge." I responded.

"If that's true I'll have to contact Nosfaractu."

"Nosfaractu?"

"It's an organization dedicated to eradicating vampries. They come from the Translvanian branch of the DWMA, which is headed by Dracula."

"So this Dracula runs Nosfaractu."

"Not exactly, his son, Alucard, does."

All of a sudden Integra appeared in Death's mirror. "Alexander, Jonathan. I just recived word that a fledgling has been spoted nearby. You know what to do."

"Yes mam, we're on our way. Joshua, let's go."

The two of us ran to the location.

'Only 2 more to go before I become a full fledged hunter' I thought.