Prologue
Still. It was the only word that summed up all the things that he sensed around him. It was cold, he glanced at his gauntlet it was 22 degrees. The land seemed a perfect reflection of the sky: gray. Simple gray, no features, no clouds just endless gray. The soil if you could call it soil was a powder fine silt. His tail moved slowly through the silt. He was taken aback by lack of any thing even remotely lifelike. He closed his eyes and said in his native tongue: triuun dyiases, chy qre na solun. "How could this have happen in three days"
Chapter 1
3 days earlier
Saturday, May 29, 2016
10:47:02.0 p.m. EST.
72:13:58.0 remaining
"it is out of the question. Totally and completely out of the question." Tai almost yelled. "00M1 cannot be colonized by humans. When they became over populated did they ask you for space no they found their own." "I understand that but it still stands that we cannot do that so easily" the secretary general of the UN Walter Adams spoke in a calm voice. "well you had better try" tai exploded again "we can't allow this to happen". "This will not be permanent only for a few years while we-". "Years! At the absolute most days if not hours. This is ridiculous." "I must at least ask that you fulfill your duty as ambassador and take the offer up with your superiors." "My duty as ambassador is to evaluate treaties and agreements not to take some excuse for the inaction of this world on a problem that made itself visible in the 70s for god sake!" "That was the 70s back when people thought that by 2016 we would be living on the moon. And might I remind that you official duty protocol states that and I quote 'you must accept and keep and maintain record of all documents that are presented by any group recognized by the United Nations to you or the country, world, organization or other group of individuals you represent for a period of three days for evaluation. Furthermore at the end of the three days you must present your leadership's response – the response may only be formally presented to the United Nations at the end of the 72 hour period mentioned above and no earlier'". "did you memorize that?" tai asked flabbergasted at its exact quotation. "Yes" Walter replied simply. "fine, but I can already tell you what the answer is going to be". Tai said walking toward the raised desk area. "Well technically you-" "you know what I mean" Walter grinned and handed down the thick binder. "what an asshole" Tai muttered as he snatched it from the other man. Unfortunately tai was not the only one that herd it. "I didn't quite catch that Mr. Kamiah". Tai promptly turned on his heel and yell back "I said 'what an asshole!'". The room which had been filled with some casual chatter fell silent and all eyes turned to the secretary. "I see" he replied quietly "well ummm if there is no other business then I declare this meeting adjourned." With a bang of the gavel it was over. Tai walked to his bench were coronus sat. "don't ask" tai said. "About what? Why you did not pick up the pen you dropped back there? Or the colony thing?" coronus responded. "you know we've got to talk." "Where?" "how bought the lab its close" "ok lets go". Coronus stood, he looked menacing. the fusion of four of the destined digimon resulted in a 6'8'' 480 pound fighting machine but the majority of his strength did not come from there. When izzy first developed the muti-floting point gateway which allowed travel to alternate dimensions the fist place that they went was goku's world although on the scale he was far weaker than the z team they still regarded him as a threat. When they showed up at the portal entrance coronus became defensive vegeta played off of that and attacked coronus defended or tried to he lost quickly izzy and matt were left with no choice but to run for the portal vegeta quickly cut them off and crushed izzy's device just then coronus said the word that saved their lives: "evil will not win I'll see to it". He had said it low but all the sayins heard it. "evil? we are not evil." Piccolo said "then why did you attack us" izzy said "because you were about to attack us. You were weren't you?" gohan asked "No" "oh our mistake" goku said cheerily. At that moment coronus coughed up a large amount of blood. "oh, sorry I forgot we hurt you. Let me help." Goku said and he began to charge a low level of ki. Vegeta was surprised at the change of sides and then he felt the overwhelming amount of ki goku was charging. "Kakaroto what-".he then felt the purpose behind it. A ki transplant. But that was fifty times the ki that the outsider had. "KAKAROTO that's too much-." Too late. Coronus originally had a power level of 90,000. it was now 4,500,000. to goku that wasn't much but it broke the level that he was supposed to be limited at so he became unlimited in his potential. Now he could max at 79,000,000. goku 92,000,000. and vegeta 85,000,000. "Coronus!" "Aah! What?!" "you kind of zoned out there. ok so the lab?" "no the gateway". gateway! Yeah gateway. Why the gate? It's got the passage to mars. Mars there's nothing on mars. Is that what they told you? "Look" tai said facing him "they did not even tell me were it is". Point hope. "Huh?" Alaska. what!? how are we going to get to Alaska! Tai exclaimed as they arrived at his car. As he walked up the doors opened the H3 was nice. A personal gift from coronus. It was a quantum leap forward in car technology. The only one like it in the world. The car was not assembled it was poured. one solid car frame then is went the extras. The engine a dch2o2. produced by digital manufacturing corporation coronus' company. With only one plant in the digiworld it produced the highest quality of everything. Over a relatively small amount of time capsule corp. turned into omni corp. with the divisions: digicorp, izumicorp, x-corp and capsule corp. izumi was the biggest success story of all: omni corp got together and made the 4-winds optical frequency scanning computer. it processed at the speed of light. And it runs 98.9% of the internet. but digicorp owned some power too. They held the patents on stereo lithography and thermal depolarization. They also do the dirty work of the world recycling trash. X-corp they trade agreements in earth's name and distribute technology to the people. Tai sat down and sighed. "how do you do it?" he asked. He pressed his thumb to the dash and the car made a low hum. He backed out and then stopped. "Alaska" he said and leaned his head back. "I'll drive" coronus said. They switched and coronus sped off at high speed. He got on the freeway then the interstate then the transcontinental he skipped the global. On the road they sped, glancing at the speedometer 112 mph he engaged the overdrive. They slowed as they arrived at the station. "ids please" said the gate attendant "go right on through sir". He stopped at the clamps. He felt the clamps lock onto his wheels and then they started moving. Fast. He closed his eyes it was to be a 6 hour trip.
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Please review. Tell me what I'm doing wrong
Still. It was the only word that summed up all the things that he sensed around him. It was cold, he glanced at his gauntlet it was 22 degrees. The land seemed a perfect reflection of the sky: gray. Simple gray, no features, no clouds just endless gray. The soil if you could call it soil was a powder fine silt. His tail moved slowly through the silt. He was taken aback by lack of any thing even remotely lifelike. He closed his eyes and said in his native tongue: triuun dyiases, chy qre na solun. "How could this have happen in three days"
Chapter 1
3 days earlier
Saturday, May 29, 2016
10:47:02.0 p.m. EST.
72:13:58.0 remaining
"it is out of the question. Totally and completely out of the question." Tai almost yelled. "00M1 cannot be colonized by humans. When they became over populated did they ask you for space no they found their own." "I understand that but it still stands that we cannot do that so easily" the secretary general of the UN Walter Adams spoke in a calm voice. "well you had better try" tai exploded again "we can't allow this to happen". "This will not be permanent only for a few years while we-". "Years! At the absolute most days if not hours. This is ridiculous." "I must at least ask that you fulfill your duty as ambassador and take the offer up with your superiors." "My duty as ambassador is to evaluate treaties and agreements not to take some excuse for the inaction of this world on a problem that made itself visible in the 70s for god sake!" "That was the 70s back when people thought that by 2016 we would be living on the moon. And might I remind that you official duty protocol states that and I quote 'you must accept and keep and maintain record of all documents that are presented by any group recognized by the United Nations to you or the country, world, organization or other group of individuals you represent for a period of three days for evaluation. Furthermore at the end of the three days you must present your leadership's response – the response may only be formally presented to the United Nations at the end of the 72 hour period mentioned above and no earlier'". "did you memorize that?" tai asked flabbergasted at its exact quotation. "Yes" Walter replied simply. "fine, but I can already tell you what the answer is going to be". Tai said walking toward the raised desk area. "Well technically you-" "you know what I mean" Walter grinned and handed down the thick binder. "what an asshole" Tai muttered as he snatched it from the other man. Unfortunately tai was not the only one that herd it. "I didn't quite catch that Mr. Kamiah". Tai promptly turned on his heel and yell back "I said 'what an asshole!'". The room which had been filled with some casual chatter fell silent and all eyes turned to the secretary. "I see" he replied quietly "well ummm if there is no other business then I declare this meeting adjourned." With a bang of the gavel it was over. Tai walked to his bench were coronus sat. "don't ask" tai said. "About what? Why you did not pick up the pen you dropped back there? Or the colony thing?" coronus responded. "you know we've got to talk." "Where?" "how bought the lab its close" "ok lets go". Coronus stood, he looked menacing. the fusion of four of the destined digimon resulted in a 6'8'' 480 pound fighting machine but the majority of his strength did not come from there. When izzy first developed the muti-floting point gateway which allowed travel to alternate dimensions the fist place that they went was goku's world although on the scale he was far weaker than the z team they still regarded him as a threat. When they showed up at the portal entrance coronus became defensive vegeta played off of that and attacked coronus defended or tried to he lost quickly izzy and matt were left with no choice but to run for the portal vegeta quickly cut them off and crushed izzy's device just then coronus said the word that saved their lives: "evil will not win I'll see to it". He had said it low but all the sayins heard it. "evil? we are not evil." Piccolo said "then why did you attack us" izzy said "because you were about to attack us. You were weren't you?" gohan asked "No" "oh our mistake" goku said cheerily. At that moment coronus coughed up a large amount of blood. "oh, sorry I forgot we hurt you. Let me help." Goku said and he began to charge a low level of ki. Vegeta was surprised at the change of sides and then he felt the overwhelming amount of ki goku was charging. "Kakaroto what-".he then felt the purpose behind it. A ki transplant. But that was fifty times the ki that the outsider had. "KAKAROTO that's too much-." Too late. Coronus originally had a power level of 90,000. it was now 4,500,000. to goku that wasn't much but it broke the level that he was supposed to be limited at so he became unlimited in his potential. Now he could max at 79,000,000. goku 92,000,000. and vegeta 85,000,000. "Coronus!" "Aah! What?!" "you kind of zoned out there. ok so the lab?" "no the gateway". gateway! Yeah gateway. Why the gate? It's got the passage to mars. Mars there's nothing on mars. Is that what they told you? "Look" tai said facing him "they did not even tell me were it is". Point hope. "Huh?" Alaska. what!? how are we going to get to Alaska! Tai exclaimed as they arrived at his car. As he walked up the doors opened the H3 was nice. A personal gift from coronus. It was a quantum leap forward in car technology. The only one like it in the world. The car was not assembled it was poured. one solid car frame then is went the extras. The engine a dch2o2. produced by digital manufacturing corporation coronus' company. With only one plant in the digiworld it produced the highest quality of everything. Over a relatively small amount of time capsule corp. turned into omni corp. with the divisions: digicorp, izumicorp, x-corp and capsule corp. izumi was the biggest success story of all: omni corp got together and made the 4-winds optical frequency scanning computer. it processed at the speed of light. And it runs 98.9% of the internet. but digicorp owned some power too. They held the patents on stereo lithography and thermal depolarization. They also do the dirty work of the world recycling trash. X-corp they trade agreements in earth's name and distribute technology to the people. Tai sat down and sighed. "how do you do it?" he asked. He pressed his thumb to the dash and the car made a low hum. He backed out and then stopped. "Alaska" he said and leaned his head back. "I'll drive" coronus said. They switched and coronus sped off at high speed. He got on the freeway then the interstate then the transcontinental he skipped the global. On the road they sped, glancing at the speedometer 112 mph he engaged the overdrive. They slowed as they arrived at the station. "ids please" said the gate attendant "go right on through sir". He stopped at the clamps. He felt the clamps lock onto his wheels and then they started moving. Fast. He closed his eyes it was to be a 6 hour trip.
I know, I know. I suck at writing but I tried.
Please review. Tell me what I'm doing wrong