This is my first ever fanfiction. So an event. This is my attempt at a fourth book for the Ellie Chronicles. I would like it if you would give me some ideas or constructive criticism.
LEGAL STUFFS
I DO NOT OWN THE TOMORROW SERIES NOR THE ELLIE CHRONICLES. ALL CHARACTERS ARE JOHN MARDSENS. OTHER STUFFS.
People do this so I'm just copying people
People also do this: TWTWB. Go with the crowd
CHAPTER 1
I'm writing this at Lee's desk in his apartment in Stratton. I've shut the door behind me as all I can hear with it open is Lee and the kids fighting over going to bed. Happens every night and I'm kind of getting used to it.
Gavin and me got into a bit of trouble for the stunt we pulled at St Bedes. Just a phone call with a quite angry and serious person from the court on the other end.
When I told Gavin that I had sold the farm and we would be moving to Stratton to live with Lee, boy did he crack a tantrum. Yelled and screamed in my face saying 'What would Dad say?!' 'We could've made it work!' and me muttering 'I know' or 'I'm sorry'. Eventually he stopped yelling, climbed up a tree and stayed there for three hours, being stubborn. I got sick of waiting and pulled him out of the tree and chucked him in the back seat of the ute, locked all the doors and tried to drive with him kicking and screaming and pulling my hair.
I've started to attend Stratton High School and Gavin Stratton Primary, which I enrolled him in as soon as we got here. Its good for him, there's a girl in his class called Amy who can communicate really well with him and they've made a pretty good relationship. I've seen her a couple of times and she seems nice. She's also quite pretty, but I didn't think Gavin liked her... that was until he said the other day that he kissed her. I'm missing my friends from Wirrawee but I don't really concentrate on my social life in the school, more about my education. Yes I have some friends but there not the same as all the people in Wirrawee.
The bus ride to school was pretty emotional at the start. The route goes straight past dead Grandma's old house, and all of the memories made me quite teary.
The cattle went with Mr Young (he bought the farm), who bought them for nine hundred and fifty a head. Nice price and pretty good profit.
I travel back to Wirrawee every week or two. I drop in to the old farm every month and help Mr Young and catch up with Homer and Bronte and the others at the same time. I have a lot more respect for Bronte now that I know that she is the Scarlet Pimplernal. All that time spent thinking it was Homer or Jeremy, but I didn't think that the Pimple would be a girl, let alone Bronte. I guess there's a link though, with her parents being in the military and all.
I joined Liberation about a month and a half after the kidnapping. I feel like I need action in my life to live now. When I told Gavin though, it wasn't fun. He asked if he could join and I told him he was too young, which caused him to let out a massive scream, swore in my face and slammed his door. Pang, who is my favourite out of all of Lees little sisters and brothers, dragged him out telling him he needed to eat. He obliged. The girls are quite good at that, settling the boys down.