Okay, this is my first story, so it's probably not very good but review and tell me what I need to improve on and I will try.
Parent Trap- The Gilmore Way
Background information: Luke and Lorelai have been friends for five years, but they became better friends when Jess and Rory started to hang out together which was pretty much all their lives. Lorelai had Rory when she was 16 years old. Christopher is Rory's father but is never around, so it will be surprising when he shows up in Stars Hollow all of the sudden when he hasn't seen Rory or Lorelai for two years. Rory has decided she doesn't need him or want him and all she needs is her mom, Luke, and Jess. That's the perfect family for her. Lorelai wants Christopher out of their lives completely she has given him way to many chances it always ends up the same way with him promising he'll be there, then taking off and leaving. Luke had Jess when he was 18, but Jess's mom had had Jess then ended up leaving him outside Luke's diner and running away for good leaving Luke to do everything and raise Jess all by himself. Now Jess is 8 years old and Rory is 6.
Luke's diner
Luke looked outside and saw Rory rounding the corner as fast as humanly
possible to get into the diner with Lorelai a ways behind her. "Luke! Where's Jess?
Where's Jess? Where's Jess?!!?" she demanded. "Umm I think he's upstairs but,
why?" "Oh…umm I just…wanted to uh….show him this book I read it really
good." With that she took off upstairs. Lorelai walked in. "Hey, do you know what's
wrong with her? She just took off." "I think she said she had to show him a book or
something. So, you want some coffee?" "Luke. You have known me for five years
now in which everyday you have seen me with numerous cups of coffee now you'd
think you would know by now, that" "- Yes is just to hard for you to say isn't it?"
Upstairs
"Jess! Okay so I think I have definitely found a way for us to get mom and
Luke together. Really its" "- I want them together as badly as you, but we
have been trying this nonstop… at least since we could walk, and I hate to say it, but
its not working great." "No! This will work it has to! And then we can all be a real
family." "Fine." Jess said deciding there was no way to stop her. "what's the plan?"
"Okay, So since school is going to be out next week I thought we could have a movie
night.." "Okay, but we always have movie nights and that's never worked before."
Jess said, confused. "But this time we can make it a sleepover." "Member like that
time about a year ago when I was really sick and you and Luke came over to see if
there was anything you could do? Well you ended up spending the night there. Lets
just do that again." I still don't see how that will work." Jess said. "Well it's still a
good plan, plus it sounds really fun, so lets do it!" "K…but how will we get them to
agree to make it a sleepover?" "I told you, we will just say it is a celebration for
getting out of school and that I will be starting the first grade. And you will be
starting the third." Jess was thinking. "Your pretty smart for just almost being In
the first grade you know." "Oh yes, I know."
Gilmore Home
"Mom!!!" …"Rory!!!" "I was thinking, wouldn't it be cool if we had a movie night/
Sleepover with Luke and Jess here tonight!?" "Oh well…umm…" "I asked Luke
Already and he said okay because he doesn't have to work tomorrow. And it could
Be a celebration since I am getting out of school! And, and" "- Okay. It sounds like
Fun. So lets do it!"
The movie night/sleepover begins
Lorelai and Rory walked into the house, but Luke and Jess were already there.
"Okay so I got Casa Blanca, Gone with the wind, and Love story." Lorelai said, very
proud of he purchases. "Geez, those all sound like chick films to me!" Luke said.
Aw, Luke your gonna love em, Jess you too. I've seen them all at least a dozen times
Rory said. "A six year old has seen Casa Blanca, Love Story, and Gone with the
Wind a dozen times.?" Luke said. "C'mon Luke your gonna like it!" "fine." He said.
It was funny how Luke and Jess always agreed to anything the Gilmores wanted!
Later that night half way through their second movie, Love Story. They were all
Four on the floor, but Jess and Luke were getting kindof tired of Lorelai
And Rory knowing every scene by heart.
A while later into the third, and longest movie they had all fallen asleep… Rory was
lying next to her mom and Jess was lying next to Rory. Lorelai was lying next to
Luke with her head on his shoulder. Suddenly Rory woke up. She looked around
And thought, this is the way that it is suppost to be. Who needs dad I have Luke
As my dad and Jess as my brother and even though they were not really her dad
And brother in real life they were close enough, and she had her mom that was,
Obviously her real mom and she was also her best friend. This was perfect, she
Thought. And was about to go back to sleep when she remembered the plan.
"Jess." Rory said. She said it again but he didn't wake up. "Jess!" she said
Hoping nobody heard her and was thankful that Luke and Lorelai were even more
Deep sleepers than jess was. "What, who died?" he said "Okay the plan has begun.
Now
We have to leave." "Why would we have to do that?" Jess asked. "I don't know
But maybe if we leave they will wake up and kiss or something." Rory said, deciding
Now that she thought about it that it was kindof an unlikely think to happen, but
Possible. "Fine." Jess said agreeing with whatever Rory said, like always.
They decided they would get the sleeping bags out and take them to her room.
Later that night- 2:00 am
Lorelai woke up and she didn't see Rory or Jess. She was tired but didn't wanted
To get up and look for them. She decided she would though, so she started to move
When she felt something…no…someone holding her down. She looked and saw
Luke's arm around her waist. She turned around the rest of the way and saw his
Face just about two inches away from her's. She thought now this is perfect.
Deciding she would wait a while to go find Jess and Rory and go back to sleep.
But first she put her arm around Luke hoping it would not wake him up…. Perfect.
Now she would go back to sleep.
Jess was in Rory's room now and Rory was already asleep. Even though he
Wouldn't admit it to her or any of his big eight year old friends. He liked Rory.
He put his hand on the six year old girls hand. He hoped she would not wake up.
He didn't notice this, but she did wake up. And she didn't move her hand. Perfect
She thought.
Next morning 6:00
Rory and Jess were fast asleep in here room. It was still dark outside. Luke woke
up. He looked for Rory and jess and found that they were not in the living room. He
started to get up but felt a someone beside him. Lorelai was practically on top of
him. He didn't know what to do. He just stayed there for a couple of seconds and
Lorelai started to wake up. She looked really freaked out when she saw where she
was. They just stayed there a little bit longer and then "Luke awkwardly said umm,
hi." Lorelai was thinking about kissing him." Luke started to lean forward a little.
All of the sudden Jess woke up and said hey Rory, totally forgetting about the plan.
But Rory was already up watching them and she said "Jess! Be quiet I think their
about to" – she couldn't finish that sentence because apparently she had said it to
loud. "Oh hey guys we were just…umm well I was asleep and…umm…anyway" she
jumped up real quick. "So who wants breakfast?"
After they ate breakfast Rory finally got Jess alone. "Oh my gosh! I'm such an idiot
They were about to kiss! And I messed it up!" "Hey, Rory its okay" "No, Jess
This isn't okay because my mom and your dad were about to kiss! And I totally
Messed it up. It might have worked and then we could all be a family and" "-Rory,
I promise we will do whatever we can to get them to be together okay just calm
Down." "Okay, So what are we going to do now?" Just as Jess was about to respond
They heard a loud noise. First Rory thought lawn mower? No… motorcycle...
wait… "Hey, mom what's that noise?" She heard her mom mumble something…
then it was obvious what it was. "Is that…Christopher?" she said her mom say
quietly.
"Rory, why don't you go in your room with Jess for a minute." Lorelai said
She thought about it for a minute and decided she would.
Luke just sat at the kitchen table while Lorelai went outside.
"Christopher?"
"Hey, Lore!"
"Why are you here?"
Christopher came up and tried to give her a hug, but she pushed him away
"What the hell are you doing here, Christopher?"
"I'm here to see you and Rory and to tell you that I decided I want to stay with you
All."
"No."
"What? Why?"
"We have gave you chances to live with us and each time you say everything
Will be different, Rory and I have gave you so many chances and each time you just
Took off and left when you wanted to. You hurt me, but you hurt Rory each time
You left after you promised that you would be there for us. And now we haven't
Heard or seen you in two years, then you come here after the way you left last time
Which by the way was just great, you didn't tell us, no note no nothing. We
Aren't going to let you do that again, so get out of here Christopher Rory and I are
Fine on our own" Lorelai said now getting very angry that he wouldn't leave
"-I'm going to talk to my kid now" he started to walk into the house but Rory
Showed up there and stopped him "You are not going to talk to your kid, cause
I am not your kid, I hate you okay! Just go be some other kid's dad!"
"Hey, Rory it's okay" Lorelai said running after her into the house. That's when
Luke walked outside
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