War chapter one
It had been great. Everything was falling into place, the dragon was dead and the child rescued. The scene was set, the revelation to John was near enough complete. The devil had been cast down into his personal hell as was his army. But he still had a piece to play. His queen. His Raven.
She attacked quickly, without remorse or pity, destroying the elders and slaying the lamb, the angels fell in swathes. And god? Trapped by his own stupidity, his own arrogance, after all, why should he still be there, he needed to finish the new Jerusalem, nothing could harm the new kingdom after the devil was gone.
Through the fire and flames only four stood against her, the four horsemen of the apocalypse, war, famine, pestilence and death on their steeds, they alone fought her, but they began to slow, to tire in a way none of them imagined, while she stayed in top form. Pestilence was destroyed first, caught of guard by a brutal psychic assault killed by his own sword, contagion. famine was next, caught as he stabbed her, only for her to push the sword, starvation, back through his chest. Death did not fall, he could not, but she did injure him, mangling his right hand, and war? Upon seeing this knew he had no chance, as she advanced he gathered the last of his arcane power and went back to the beginning, back to jump city, 2011.
AN ok little bit strange this one, but bear with me, oh and does anyone have a good name for Pestilence's sword. Please please please review.
Update log: 22/5/11: pestilence's sword now has a name, contagion, thanks to the cretin for that.
fixed some grammatical issues