My first work of fan fiction, don't be afraid to criticise. Just be sure the criticism is justified and (preferably) constructive.
Will update whenever I can be bothered to try and decipher my own handwriting, which is already horrible in and of itself but the fact that I only have time to write in a bus or train doesn't help either.
Classes:
Elsword: Infinity Sword
Aisha: Dimension Witch
Rena: Wind Sneaker
Raven: Veteran Commander
Eve: Code Nemesis
Chung: Tactical Trooper
Chapter #1: Technical Difficulties
"Eve?"
She looked up as she heard a familiar voice say her name accompanied by an equally familiar metal on wood knocking sound.
"Come in Raven." She said as she stood up from her work on her drones. Raven walked into the workshop, not surprised to see Chung in the workshop as well, working on his destroyer.
"I need you to look at my arm. Lately, I have the feeling it takes longer to stop overheating." He said to Eve while holding up his human hand to greet Chung, who waved back before continuing to work on his cannon.
Eve sighed, "I knew the modifications to your arm were a bad idea."
"Hey! It's my problem to deal with so quit your preaching." Raven said, slightly annoyed.
"Except it is not just your problem. Not only am I the one that has to repair it every time, but what if you get seriously hurt? How will you fight with us then?"
"Can you just take a quick look at it?"
"Fine."
Eve walked Raven to a chair with a few machines and a table next to it. Chung looked up as he had been wanting to see the inside workings of Raven's arm for quite a while now.
"Can I watch?" He asked curiously.
"If it's okay with Raven." Eve replied.
"Sure, no problem." Raven responded.
Raven sat down on the chair, laying his nasod arm on the table next to it. Eve quickly glanced over it before removing some of the outer plating. Chung looked over her shoulder, staring at the complex-looking mess of wires and components inside Raven's arm.
It didn't take long for Eve to spot the problem as she took a deep breath.
"Is it bad?" Chung asked her, curious as to what she'd seen.
"It is the Ignis nuclear flame core," she replied, pointing at a small round and red component. "It's starting to wear down."
"Can you fix it?"
"Not without replacing it completely."
"Where can we get another one?" Raven inquired, "Ignis is gone."
"I should be able to recreate it, but I would need to analyse it first."
"So I take it you need to remove it for now."
"Yes, which means you'll have to make it through a few days without sparring or otherwise engaging anyone in combat."
"I guess I have no choice."
"I shall remove it right away. The sooner we do this, the sooner your arm will be fixed. Chung?"
"Hm?" Chung stopped looking at Raven's arm and looked at Eve.
"I need you to use those straps to ensure Raven won't hurt himself."
Chung was slightly puzzled by what Eve said but Raven nodded at him so Chung did as he was told. As Raven was strapped to the chair Eve grabbed hold of the nuclear flame core and looked at Raven.
"Ready?"
Raven nodded as he braced himself and Eve started pulling on the core. A painful scream from Raven made Chung jump, nearly knocking over a table full of tools. As Eve had pulled out the core, Raven sat there, heavily breathing, tears in his eyes.
All of a sudden, Rena and Aisha barged into the workshop.
"What's going on here!?" They yelled in unison, having heard Raven's agonized screaming.
"Not much, just some technical difficulties." Raven huffed, exhausted and in pain.
"I am merely performing some procedures to repair Raven's arm. These procedures are unfortunately somewhat painful."
"Somewhat painful!?" Rena shouted, "Raven sounded like he was being murdered! I was so worried!"
"Worried? About me?" Raven said with an innocent look on his face as Eve started to put the outer plating back on his arm. Rena blushed slightly.
"S-s-shut up!" Rena blushed.
"Heh heh, sorry." Raven said with a playful smile.
"We're just glad you're okay." Aisha said, taking the now red-faced elf back to the house.