To those who were reading the original version of this story, I'm sorry for getting rid of it. I decided to rewrite this story with ALL the details, instead of just a few, plus some extras, and it's in paragraph form. But, again, I apologize. I changed my story a little bit, since it's no longer script format, it's gonna take a while to update. I will try as hard as I can to continue to update ASAP. Please continue to enjoy the story even though I changed the format. I own nothing but the characters I created and the story. One more thing. When I use this symbol, (-) without the parentheses, it means the narrarator's talking. Now then, please enjoy the EXTENDED paragraph version of…..
SpongeBob SquarepantZ
Chapter One: The Beginning
In the middle of nowhere, nothing but wasteland and piles of rubble , two children, both about 13 years of age, are approaching a gigantic fortress. The girl, Kiara and the boy, Tasku, are hiding behind a boulder. Tasku asks, "Kiara, should we be doing this?" Kiara replied, " We can't let this guy get away with destroying our homes! We need to take care of this guy before he destroys the entire earth!" Tasku nods, " I agree, but we're only kids!"
Kiara reminded Tasku that they can take this guy, and no one else will stop him if they don't. Two guards block the entrance to the fort. Kiara reaches into her bag and pulls out a dart shooter. She blows two darts at the guards, who then fall fast asleep. Kiara and Tasku sneak up to the doors.
"Wait," Tasku said. "It's too easy…" They look up to see two cameras looking around.
Tasku reaches into his pocket and pulls out a weird device. He turns it on, and the cameras are knocked out. Taking the keys from the guards, the two open the doors to find a long hallway with many different doors. "Great." Kiara said to Tasku. " Now where do we go?" Tasku thought to himself before saying, " Let's split up! I'll meet you back here in an hour." They do so. Their one hour of wandering the hall turns up nothing. " This is hopeless! Nothing is in these rooms but junk!" They both say with disappointment. Tasku turns to the other side of the hall, "We've gone through every door, but that one." He points to the door standing by itself. They go through the door to find just who they've looking for.
" Kuru!" They shout. Kuru turns around and grabs his latest weapon, which looks like a metal glove. He slips it on. " Who the heck are you?" he says with an irritated look on his face. Kiara steps up, "We are from the beloved town of Hiko! The town which you destroyed, along with twenty.." "Thirty." Tasku interrupted. Kiara continued her speech, " Thirty others! I am Kiara! And this is my friend Tasku!" Kuru laughed at them." Don't tell me. you came to ahem 'defeat' me?" "Yes we have!" Tasku said with confidence. Kuru laughed at them, thinking they're crazy. " Well, first, you must dodge this!" He then shoots at them with his glove-like weapon, which turned out to be a laser gun. Tasku dodges the blast and pulls out his ordinary gun from Kiara's bag. " Kiara!" Tasku yells. " Take this!" He throws a cell phone to her. Tasku gave Kiara a look and said, " You know what to do." Kiara runs out of the fortress and dials the phone. Tasku manages to shoot Kuru in the arm, the arm that Kuru shoots with. Kuru screams and angrily fires lasers everywhere! " He's still using his shooting arm?!" Tasku says as he takes cover behind an overthrown table and fires back a few more times. "Oh, man! I gotta check my ammo!" He looks to find he has one bullet left.
" Darn it!" "There will come a time, Tasku, where you'll wish you never met me." Kuru said as he walks close to the table, quietly. He knows that Tasku's is there behind the table, and just as he's about to shoot through it…..BAM!! Went Tasku's gun! Striking Kuru right in the chest! "Argh!!" Kuru yelled as he fell to the ground. " I'm already there." Tasku said with a grin. Sirens wailed outside, The police had arrived, along with a few government officers. Kuru looked at Tasku with an evil look, " I'll….be…back.." The fort was blown up and Kuru was taken away, never to be seen again. Or so they thought…..
Five Years Later…..
-Ahh, it is a beautiful morning here in Bikini Bottom. All is well, peace and quiet…….-
"HONK!!! HONK!!!" went SpongeBob's alarm. Spongebob turns it off and gets out of bed. "Ahh....Good morning, Gary." SpongeBob says with a normal smile. Getting out of bed, Gary meows as usual, for no one knows what will happen on this very day. Squidward is playing his clarinet badly as soon as SpongeBob walks out of his pineapple. Patrick comes out of his rock with his usual "Good Morning!" and once again, falls off his rock. Squidward sighs and walks out the door.
"Ahh, good morning world, and all who inhabit it!" SpongeBob says while walking down the street. "I'm READY!"
" Hey, SpongeBob, wanna go jelly fishing?" Patrick asked. " I can't Patrick. I have work today, remember?"
"You work?" SpongeBob sighed and explains to Patrick that he can't go jelly fishing while working. Squidward walks past them saying to himself, " Barnacle heads". "Squidward, you forgot your hat!" SpongeBob reminded Squidward. " Hmph." Squidward said as he went back to get his hat.
-Well, it is an ordinary day, isn't it……Hmm.. What is happening up on the land? -
Kuru was floating over the Pacific Ocean, holding out his hand over it. " Finally, after all these years. I shall succeed in taking over the world!" He said with an evil laugh. " First, I will test my new power on this underwater city I detected with my radar." A small ball of energy comes from his fingers as he points it in the air. " Hahahahaha!" Kuru laughed as he made the ball bigger and sent it down the ocean.
In Bikini Bottom…….
There is a giant earthquake shaking the entire city. Buildings are crumbling, cars are crashing and roads are splitting. SpongeBob and Squidward run through the panicking crowd of citizens to find Sandy. Sandy is in her Tree Dome at the time of this earthquake. " WHAT IN TARNATION?!" she screams. "I'd better check on SpongeBob!" She runs to the phone, but the phones are down. " I guess, I'll have to…" She was just about to open her door, when she saw it was locked from the outside by a weird liquid-like substance. " What?!" She shouted in surprise as she tries to open the door. SpongeBob and Squidward are still trying to squeeze through the crowd of terrified people when A nearby building collapses right next to them. A huge piece of the building is about to crush them, when all of a sudden, the screams stop, and everything goes black…….
SpongeBob wakes up to find a tall girl stare at him. " Oooh… What happened?" " You must have fainted." The girl replied. SpongeBob looks around him. It's hard to see, but he still manages to figure out where he is. " Sandy's Tree Dome?!" He said in shock. He looked outside. It was black as night, no. Even blacker. It was as black as coal. "No.."
"I'm afraid so." The girl said sadly. " Who are you?!" SpongeBob screamed. " I am Kiara." " Get away from me!" SpongeBob said, still freaked out. Then again, I'm sure you would be too. " Calm down! I'm not gonna hurt you!" Squidward wakes up, looks around, but although absolutely horrified, doesn't freak out. " Who are.." "Kiara." Sandy looks at them. " Kairi, did you lock my door from the outside?" she asked Kiara. "It's Kiara. And yes. I had too so you wouldn't run outside and get yourself killed." "It'll open now though, the effect of the liquid I put on it wore off." Squidward sits up and asks, " Would you please explain what's going on, and how we all got here?!"
Kiara looked at everybody and said, " All right. I am from the land. Five years ago my town, along with thirty others were destroyed by an evil man named Kuru. My best friend Tasku, and I used a tracking device that was given to us to locate Kuru's hideout. We snuck into the hideout and destroyed it. Kuru was, of course, arrested. He escaped from prison a few months ago and now is testing his newly discovered power to destroy humanity with! Why? He wants nothing but world domination! He gets his entertainment by destroying cities like this one! He must be stopped before he destroys more! As for how you got here, I rushed in between you two before that building crushed you . You see, I too have the same power, but I am no match for Kuru." Everyone was speechless. Patrick walks behind Sandy. " So, this guy did this to Bikini Bottom?" He asks. "Patrick, you're alive!" SpongeBob says. " I am?"
Kiara looked at the pink starfish. " How'd you get here?" "Well, I wanted to go to Sandy's, so I went to the Tree Dome after SpongeBob left."
"So, what now?" Squidward asks. SpongeBob quickly gets an idea. " Let's introduce ourselves!" "I'm Squidward."
"The name's Sandy." "Uh…." "That's Patrick. And I'm SpongeBob!" Kiara looked at them all for a sec. " You mean, THE SpongeBob?" "Well, I'm the only SpongeBob I know, so yeah." "Wow! It's an honor to meet you! And all your friends!" "Wow, thanks!" SpongeBob said, not knowing why it was an honor. Kiara looked at him, "I came here knowing that something was going to happen. There's only one way to fix this mess." Everybody looked at her. "How?" they all ask. "On the land are three crystals. Each are a fiery red color. When the crystals are put together, it is said that we get a wish." Everyone looked at her like she was stupid. "How do you know it's not just a fairytale?" Sandy asked. "Because my best friend did this, I saw him." Everyone looked surprised. "If we find all three crystals, we can use the wish to make sure none of this ever happened! But first, we'll need to get rid of Kuru! Who's with me?" Everyone but Squidward raises their hand. SpongeBob says to Squidward, "Aw come on, Squidward. There will be…um…no clarinet if you don't!" " Fine!" Squidward shouts back. "We need water helmets for you guys." Sandy tells them. She runs into her tree and gets some water helmets. Filling them with water, she placed them on everyone's heads. Everyone but Kiara, I mean. Kiara opens the door and they walk out. " Let's get outta here!"
Jeez Laweez, this took me a while! Well, you probably notice a few changes from the old version, but I hope you still enjoyed it! It'd be so nice of you to review this so I can see how I'm doing. Until next time, Sayonara!
SpongeBob SquarepantZ
Chapter One: The Beginning
In the middle of nowhere, nothing but wasteland and piles of rubble , two children, both about 13 years of age, are approaching a gigantic fortress. The girl, Kiara and the boy, Tasku, are hiding behind a boulder. Tasku asks, "Kiara, should we be doing this?" Kiara replied, " We can't let this guy get away with destroying our homes! We need to take care of this guy before he destroys the entire earth!" Tasku nods, " I agree, but we're only kids!"
Kiara reminded Tasku that they can take this guy, and no one else will stop him if they don't. Two guards block the entrance to the fort. Kiara reaches into her bag and pulls out a dart shooter. She blows two darts at the guards, who then fall fast asleep. Kiara and Tasku sneak up to the doors.
"Wait," Tasku said. "It's too easy…" They look up to see two cameras looking around.
Tasku reaches into his pocket and pulls out a weird device. He turns it on, and the cameras are knocked out. Taking the keys from the guards, the two open the doors to find a long hallway with many different doors. "Great." Kiara said to Tasku. " Now where do we go?" Tasku thought to himself before saying, " Let's split up! I'll meet you back here in an hour." They do so. Their one hour of wandering the hall turns up nothing. " This is hopeless! Nothing is in these rooms but junk!" They both say with disappointment. Tasku turns to the other side of the hall, "We've gone through every door, but that one." He points to the door standing by itself. They go through the door to find just who they've looking for.
" Kuru!" They shout. Kuru turns around and grabs his latest weapon, which looks like a metal glove. He slips it on. " Who the heck are you?" he says with an irritated look on his face. Kiara steps up, "We are from the beloved town of Hiko! The town which you destroyed, along with twenty.." "Thirty." Tasku interrupted. Kiara continued her speech, " Thirty others! I am Kiara! And this is my friend Tasku!" Kuru laughed at them." Don't tell me. you came to ahem 'defeat' me?" "Yes we have!" Tasku said with confidence. Kuru laughed at them, thinking they're crazy. " Well, first, you must dodge this!" He then shoots at them with his glove-like weapon, which turned out to be a laser gun. Tasku dodges the blast and pulls out his ordinary gun from Kiara's bag. " Kiara!" Tasku yells. " Take this!" He throws a cell phone to her. Tasku gave Kiara a look and said, " You know what to do." Kiara runs out of the fortress and dials the phone. Tasku manages to shoot Kuru in the arm, the arm that Kuru shoots with. Kuru screams and angrily fires lasers everywhere! " He's still using his shooting arm?!" Tasku says as he takes cover behind an overthrown table and fires back a few more times. "Oh, man! I gotta check my ammo!" He looks to find he has one bullet left.
" Darn it!" "There will come a time, Tasku, where you'll wish you never met me." Kuru said as he walks close to the table, quietly. He knows that Tasku's is there behind the table, and just as he's about to shoot through it…..BAM!! Went Tasku's gun! Striking Kuru right in the chest! "Argh!!" Kuru yelled as he fell to the ground. " I'm already there." Tasku said with a grin. Sirens wailed outside, The police had arrived, along with a few government officers. Kuru looked at Tasku with an evil look, " I'll….be…back.." The fort was blown up and Kuru was taken away, never to be seen again. Or so they thought…..
Five Years Later…..
-Ahh, it is a beautiful morning here in Bikini Bottom. All is well, peace and quiet…….-
"HONK!!! HONK!!!" went SpongeBob's alarm. Spongebob turns it off and gets out of bed. "Ahh....Good morning, Gary." SpongeBob says with a normal smile. Getting out of bed, Gary meows as usual, for no one knows what will happen on this very day. Squidward is playing his clarinet badly as soon as SpongeBob walks out of his pineapple. Patrick comes out of his rock with his usual "Good Morning!" and once again, falls off his rock. Squidward sighs and walks out the door.
"Ahh, good morning world, and all who inhabit it!" SpongeBob says while walking down the street. "I'm READY!"
" Hey, SpongeBob, wanna go jelly fishing?" Patrick asked. " I can't Patrick. I have work today, remember?"
"You work?" SpongeBob sighed and explains to Patrick that he can't go jelly fishing while working. Squidward walks past them saying to himself, " Barnacle heads". "Squidward, you forgot your hat!" SpongeBob reminded Squidward. " Hmph." Squidward said as he went back to get his hat.
-Well, it is an ordinary day, isn't it……Hmm.. What is happening up on the land? -
Kuru was floating over the Pacific Ocean, holding out his hand over it. " Finally, after all these years. I shall succeed in taking over the world!" He said with an evil laugh. " First, I will test my new power on this underwater city I detected with my radar." A small ball of energy comes from his fingers as he points it in the air. " Hahahahaha!" Kuru laughed as he made the ball bigger and sent it down the ocean.
In Bikini Bottom…….
There is a giant earthquake shaking the entire city. Buildings are crumbling, cars are crashing and roads are splitting. SpongeBob and Squidward run through the panicking crowd of citizens to find Sandy. Sandy is in her Tree Dome at the time of this earthquake. " WHAT IN TARNATION?!" she screams. "I'd better check on SpongeBob!" She runs to the phone, but the phones are down. " I guess, I'll have to…" She was just about to open her door, when she saw it was locked from the outside by a weird liquid-like substance. " What?!" She shouted in surprise as she tries to open the door. SpongeBob and Squidward are still trying to squeeze through the crowd of terrified people when A nearby building collapses right next to them. A huge piece of the building is about to crush them, when all of a sudden, the screams stop, and everything goes black…….
SpongeBob wakes up to find a tall girl stare at him. " Oooh… What happened?" " You must have fainted." The girl replied. SpongeBob looks around him. It's hard to see, but he still manages to figure out where he is. " Sandy's Tree Dome?!" He said in shock. He looked outside. It was black as night, no. Even blacker. It was as black as coal. "No.."
"I'm afraid so." The girl said sadly. " Who are you?!" SpongeBob screamed. " I am Kiara." " Get away from me!" SpongeBob said, still freaked out. Then again, I'm sure you would be too. " Calm down! I'm not gonna hurt you!" Squidward wakes up, looks around, but although absolutely horrified, doesn't freak out. " Who are.." "Kiara." Sandy looks at them. " Kairi, did you lock my door from the outside?" she asked Kiara. "It's Kiara. And yes. I had too so you wouldn't run outside and get yourself killed." "It'll open now though, the effect of the liquid I put on it wore off." Squidward sits up and asks, " Would you please explain what's going on, and how we all got here?!"
Kiara looked at everybody and said, " All right. I am from the land. Five years ago my town, along with thirty others were destroyed by an evil man named Kuru. My best friend Tasku, and I used a tracking device that was given to us to locate Kuru's hideout. We snuck into the hideout and destroyed it. Kuru was, of course, arrested. He escaped from prison a few months ago and now is testing his newly discovered power to destroy humanity with! Why? He wants nothing but world domination! He gets his entertainment by destroying cities like this one! He must be stopped before he destroys more! As for how you got here, I rushed in between you two before that building crushed you . You see, I too have the same power, but I am no match for Kuru." Everyone was speechless. Patrick walks behind Sandy. " So, this guy did this to Bikini Bottom?" He asks. "Patrick, you're alive!" SpongeBob says. " I am?"
Kiara looked at the pink starfish. " How'd you get here?" "Well, I wanted to go to Sandy's, so I went to the Tree Dome after SpongeBob left."
"So, what now?" Squidward asks. SpongeBob quickly gets an idea. " Let's introduce ourselves!" "I'm Squidward."
"The name's Sandy." "Uh…." "That's Patrick. And I'm SpongeBob!" Kiara looked at them all for a sec. " You mean, THE SpongeBob?" "Well, I'm the only SpongeBob I know, so yeah." "Wow! It's an honor to meet you! And all your friends!" "Wow, thanks!" SpongeBob said, not knowing why it was an honor. Kiara looked at him, "I came here knowing that something was going to happen. There's only one way to fix this mess." Everybody looked at her. "How?" they all ask. "On the land are three crystals. Each are a fiery red color. When the crystals are put together, it is said that we get a wish." Everyone looked at her like she was stupid. "How do you know it's not just a fairytale?" Sandy asked. "Because my best friend did this, I saw him." Everyone looked surprised. "If we find all three crystals, we can use the wish to make sure none of this ever happened! But first, we'll need to get rid of Kuru! Who's with me?" Everyone but Squidward raises their hand. SpongeBob says to Squidward, "Aw come on, Squidward. There will be…um…no clarinet if you don't!" " Fine!" Squidward shouts back. "We need water helmets for you guys." Sandy tells them. She runs into her tree and gets some water helmets. Filling them with water, she placed them on everyone's heads. Everyone but Kiara, I mean. Kiara opens the door and they walk out. " Let's get outta here!"
Jeez Laweez, this took me a while! Well, you probably notice a few changes from the old version, but I hope you still enjoyed it! It'd be so nice of you to review this so I can see how I'm doing. Until next time, Sayonara!