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Hi hi! Kiki here! This is my first story so be easy on me! I hope you enjoy! No hating, now. Constructive criticism is always welcome!
"talking"
'Thinking'
Now! Ready, set, GO!
Chapter 1- Big Mistakes
Hinamori Amu's life was always boring. She had no friends, and people were afraid to approach her because she was "cool and spicy." She even had this fan club that all the boys made up about her. Rumors about her often start there.
The only reason she came to school was to see her favorite face. Hotori Tadase. He was so adorable that she just wanted to kiss him all over! But she knew she would never be able to. She was too "cool and spicy" I wish I could just change!
At the thought of this, an idea popped into her head.
'I'll just ask him out and see what he says. If he says yes, then that's awesome! If he says no I'll change schools! I'll use the "everybody hated me because I was too quiet" excuse!' It was perfect.
She then rushed off to find Tadase-kun
"I'm sorry, but I already have a girl I love."
As expected, he said no.
"I understand. I'll just be getting out of your hair now," Amu replyed, still having her "cool and spicy" character up.
She left. Thank god she couldn't find him until school was over. Now she can leave immediately after asking him.
As she walked home, she ran over what she would say to her parents at home.
'I could run in "crying" and stomp up to my room, slam the door, and make crying sounds until mama comes in and asks me what's wrong and then I'll tell her. Or I can just tell her that everybody hates me and hope she lets me transfer. Let's go with the first one.
.:Mama's POV:.
Slam! The front door.
What was that? Oh my Goodness! My poor baby is crying! Hmm… that's strange, Amu almost never cries.
Slam! Her bedroom door.
I better go see what the matter is.
As I made my way upstairs, I could hear loud sobbing. I knocked on Amu-chan's door but there wasn't an answer. So I knocked again.
"Mom?" I heard her squeak.
"Yes dear, I'm here. Can I come in?"
"Yes" I opened the door to find her sprawled out on her bed with tears in her eyes.
.:Amu's POV:.
I used a water bottle.
.:Mama's POV:.
"What's wrong, sweetie?"
Before she answered, she bursted out crying.
"Everybody hates me mama! I don't know what I did! I just want to get out of that stupid school!"
"Why do you think that?"
"I heard what the boys were saying behind my back. sniff. They said i was too quiet, and i tryed to act all cool, and, and... sniff"
"Okay, Okay. If is makes you feel better, Amu-chan, we can always transfer you to that elite academy down the road." Good she stopped crying and started to wipe away tears. Good call Mama! I'll have to tell Papa later.
"I'd like too start over, thanks Mama," She said with a nod.
"No problem, Honey. You'll most likely start school Monday. Good thing it's Friday." I cheered to keep her happy.
Chapter End!
Hey guys! I really hope you like it! I'll probably have the second chapter up tomorrow or the day after! keep checkin'! Love ya lots!
This is Amuto btw. AND! I have a question. would you guys rather longer chapters and longer updates or shorter chapters (like this one) and shorter updates! Do tell.