SI Fic. Self-Insertion. I have created a new Ultimate X Zoid, Gryfalcon9.
Equipped with multiple unit changes, The Chalfos (black armor), The
Rampager (red armor), and The Dragos (purple armor). The original unit has
Ranos like wings, and the body is basically like Liger0's, only the legs
are longer. The wing part can fold onto the main body and not get in the
way because of the grooves the wings fit in. The wings are deep blue, while
the body armor is a deeper green. It has a multitude of artillery and
artillery techniques, such as Strike Laser Claw, Aero's Cannon, Laser
Cannon, Rockets, Pivotal Gun, and Energy Shields, just to name the ones on
the original unit. The Gryfalcon9's pilot, Teken Vestivan, a 17-year-old
orphan girl, is a master at Zoids (in her opinion) and is a Class-S
warrior. She has long, brown hair, which she wears in a single ponytail,
and her bangs are dyed a deep blue at the ends, and grow lighter as they go
up. Her eyes are an emerald/purple color, and she has two silver earrings
in her left ear, and one gold earring in her right, and they are all hoop
earrings. She wears a light purple sleeveless midriff v-neck silk tank top,
a pair of black & gold shorts, and white boots. She can be a wisecrack
sometimes, but she is very pretty and smart. She is also very wealthy. But
I will reveal no more, so we can get on with the story.
CHAPTER 1: Teken meets the Blitz Team!
"BIT CLOUD! YOU'RE GONNA PAY!" Leena screamed. "What's the problem?" Brad asked. "THAT LITTLE WEASEL SWIPED MY PIE!" She yelled, grabbing a random object, (a heavy book) and hurling it at Bit, who just walked in. "YAAAA!!!" Bit fell over twitching. "YOU STOLE MY PIE SLICE YOU WEASEL!" she roared, a vein popping out of her forehead. "Hey, take it easy! I saw your dad eat it, so you can stop killing our team mate, ok?" "Hey guys!" Jamie said. "I just got the info for our next battle. Someone named…" He looked at the papers he was carrying. " Teken 'Nei Strike' Vestivan. "It seems she's interested in joining us. She already battled Harry, and the Fluggle and Lighting teams, and won. It says here she won't require share of any winnings for a long time, and can provide her own money for tune-ups and such. She does have an impressive battle record." Leena blinked. "I think we should let her join. I mean, it won't hurt anything, and she's gonna pay her own way, right?" "I don't know… Don't you think we should battle her first? See what she's made of?" Brad said, sitting down. Jamie shuffled through the papers. His jaw dropped. "What is it Jamie?" Bit asked, walking over. "SHE'S A CLASS-S WARRIOR?" Leena's eyes went wide. "Wow.." "And the battle is this afternoon…" Jamie sighed.
A White judge capsule shot into the ground. "This is an official Zoid battle. Any area within 8 miles is a Zoid battle area. The battle mode is 0996. The Blitz team versus the Gryfalcon9. Area scanned…Battlefield set up.. Ready… FIGHT!"
~Aboard the Snail/headquarters/storage snail thing~
"Ready to Mobilize Liger0 Jager."
"Ready to mobilize Weasel Unit."
"Ready to Mobilize Shadow Fox."
~Aboard a White Whale King~
"Oh jeez…" Teken grumbled. "You ready, Gryfalcon? Ready to Mobilize Gryfalcon9, unit Rampager. YEEHHHAAAAA!!!!" Grabbing her control units, she launched, only to find a Shadow Fox, Weasel Unit, and a strange blue Zoid. Teken's own Zoid had it's alternate unit, the Rampager, a red armor that had a hyper jump, enabling it to go at supersonic speed, and a special pivotal gun, and Buster Slash blades. This blue Zoid had a Hyper Jump too. A message screen appeared, showing a long-brown haired young man. "My names Brad. So you want to join us, eh? You'll have to at least beat two of us, and show your dodging abilities. You might want to show your aim, too. Ready?" Teken blinked. "Well, if that's all you want to see…this isn't Gryfalcon9's usual armor though…" The longhaired guy vanished and was replaced by a girl. "ARE WE TALKING OR FIGHTING???" "Sorry." Teken said. The pictures vanished. "Let's go Gryfalcon. Hyper Jump!" Teken swerved to avoid an attack from the Weasel Unit. She fired a round of shot's from the Pivotal gun, and hit Leena head-on. A smoke screen appeared out of nowhere, and shots were fired, hitting Gryfalcon. Ticked off, she sent a message screen to Brad. "THAT WAS DIRTY! Time for a taste of your own MEDICINE. Pity you didn't mobilize the Ranos… You would have had a better chance." She shut off the message screen and pressed a bright purple button. "Activating flight unit. Preparing Bithblade weaponry. Flight activation confirmed. Let's fly Gryfalcon!" Two wings started to emerge from the back of Gryfalcon, unfolding like a Ranos's. They straightened, just as two large blades emerged from the sides of the red armor, glowing with a fierce light, blowing away the smoke. Gryfalcon charged, jumping into the air.
Bit had watched as Brad's Shadow Fox had released a smoke barrier, shrouding Teken in a cloud of black smoke. But now, two blades on Teken's Gryfalcon9 had appeared and blown away the smoke, only to reveal a pair of wings much like Jamie's Ranos. Then the red armored Zoid had practically leaped into the air, taking flight. "What kinda Zoid is that thing?" Bit asked Liger0, not really expecting Liger to respond. But respond it did, showing Bit a detailed picture of all the information on the Gryfalcon9, and that included the rumor of it being a legendary Ultimate X. "An Ultimate X? Liger, are you serious-" Bit never finished, because the Gryfalcon had just taken down Leena, totally wiping all the weaponry off. A message screen appeared on Bit's screen. "Hey, Aren't YOU going to attempt to shoot me down? You have done nothing but SIT there, watching. GET WITH THE PROGRAM WILL YOU????" The message screen vanished. Bit shook his head. "Let's go Liger."
"YEEHHAAAA! This is great Gryfalcon! Strike Laser Claw that Shadow Fox!" The two front claws on both forelegs began glowing golden, and Gryfalcon rammed into the Shadow Fox claw first, freezing the black Zoid's command system and ripping off the gun. Gryfalcon landed, and folded the wings back into the carefully hidden grooves.
Well? Please R&R. More Chapters to come.
CHAPTER 1: Teken meets the Blitz Team!
"BIT CLOUD! YOU'RE GONNA PAY!" Leena screamed. "What's the problem?" Brad asked. "THAT LITTLE WEASEL SWIPED MY PIE!" She yelled, grabbing a random object, (a heavy book) and hurling it at Bit, who just walked in. "YAAAA!!!" Bit fell over twitching. "YOU STOLE MY PIE SLICE YOU WEASEL!" she roared, a vein popping out of her forehead. "Hey, take it easy! I saw your dad eat it, so you can stop killing our team mate, ok?" "Hey guys!" Jamie said. "I just got the info for our next battle. Someone named…" He looked at the papers he was carrying. " Teken 'Nei Strike' Vestivan. "It seems she's interested in joining us. She already battled Harry, and the Fluggle and Lighting teams, and won. It says here she won't require share of any winnings for a long time, and can provide her own money for tune-ups and such. She does have an impressive battle record." Leena blinked. "I think we should let her join. I mean, it won't hurt anything, and she's gonna pay her own way, right?" "I don't know… Don't you think we should battle her first? See what she's made of?" Brad said, sitting down. Jamie shuffled through the papers. His jaw dropped. "What is it Jamie?" Bit asked, walking over. "SHE'S A CLASS-S WARRIOR?" Leena's eyes went wide. "Wow.." "And the battle is this afternoon…" Jamie sighed.
A White judge capsule shot into the ground. "This is an official Zoid battle. Any area within 8 miles is a Zoid battle area. The battle mode is 0996. The Blitz team versus the Gryfalcon9. Area scanned…Battlefield set up.. Ready… FIGHT!"
~Aboard the Snail/headquarters/storage snail thing~
"Ready to Mobilize Liger0 Jager."
"Ready to mobilize Weasel Unit."
"Ready to Mobilize Shadow Fox."
~Aboard a White Whale King~
"Oh jeez…" Teken grumbled. "You ready, Gryfalcon? Ready to Mobilize Gryfalcon9, unit Rampager. YEEHHHAAAAA!!!!" Grabbing her control units, she launched, only to find a Shadow Fox, Weasel Unit, and a strange blue Zoid. Teken's own Zoid had it's alternate unit, the Rampager, a red armor that had a hyper jump, enabling it to go at supersonic speed, and a special pivotal gun, and Buster Slash blades. This blue Zoid had a Hyper Jump too. A message screen appeared, showing a long-brown haired young man. "My names Brad. So you want to join us, eh? You'll have to at least beat two of us, and show your dodging abilities. You might want to show your aim, too. Ready?" Teken blinked. "Well, if that's all you want to see…this isn't Gryfalcon9's usual armor though…" The longhaired guy vanished and was replaced by a girl. "ARE WE TALKING OR FIGHTING???" "Sorry." Teken said. The pictures vanished. "Let's go Gryfalcon. Hyper Jump!" Teken swerved to avoid an attack from the Weasel Unit. She fired a round of shot's from the Pivotal gun, and hit Leena head-on. A smoke screen appeared out of nowhere, and shots were fired, hitting Gryfalcon. Ticked off, she sent a message screen to Brad. "THAT WAS DIRTY! Time for a taste of your own MEDICINE. Pity you didn't mobilize the Ranos… You would have had a better chance." She shut off the message screen and pressed a bright purple button. "Activating flight unit. Preparing Bithblade weaponry. Flight activation confirmed. Let's fly Gryfalcon!" Two wings started to emerge from the back of Gryfalcon, unfolding like a Ranos's. They straightened, just as two large blades emerged from the sides of the red armor, glowing with a fierce light, blowing away the smoke. Gryfalcon charged, jumping into the air.
Bit had watched as Brad's Shadow Fox had released a smoke barrier, shrouding Teken in a cloud of black smoke. But now, two blades on Teken's Gryfalcon9 had appeared and blown away the smoke, only to reveal a pair of wings much like Jamie's Ranos. Then the red armored Zoid had practically leaped into the air, taking flight. "What kinda Zoid is that thing?" Bit asked Liger0, not really expecting Liger to respond. But respond it did, showing Bit a detailed picture of all the information on the Gryfalcon9, and that included the rumor of it being a legendary Ultimate X. "An Ultimate X? Liger, are you serious-" Bit never finished, because the Gryfalcon had just taken down Leena, totally wiping all the weaponry off. A message screen appeared on Bit's screen. "Hey, Aren't YOU going to attempt to shoot me down? You have done nothing but SIT there, watching. GET WITH THE PROGRAM WILL YOU????" The message screen vanished. Bit shook his head. "Let's go Liger."
"YEEHHAAAA! This is great Gryfalcon! Strike Laser Claw that Shadow Fox!" The two front claws on both forelegs began glowing golden, and Gryfalcon rammed into the Shadow Fox claw first, freezing the black Zoid's command system and ripping off the gun. Gryfalcon landed, and folded the wings back into the carefully hidden grooves.
Well? Please R&R. More Chapters to come.