Hey! I'm back and with a new idea that I've been dying to write for the past year c: I'm on summer break with nothing better to do so I thought I'd finally do something about it. Here's the first chapter, which is kind of short, but this is just to set the story off. Anyways, hope you enjoy. - SW
Before I forget, I dont own the characters! Just my idea for the plot c:
Fang POV
I took a deep breath in, not being able to stop myself from grinning. I was surrounded by losers who thought they could beat me at my own game. They thought that on their shiny motorcycles they could beat me. They thought that they had skills to bypass me on the two laps that made up the race. They thought that tonight was their night. Well they were dead wrong. After all, they were nothing compared to me and my friends. It really was unfair that I was racing against them.
I chuckled, straddling my motorcycle, I felt the wind blow slightly, and man did I love this feeling. Over to my right, some guy called out my name. I knew it wasn't any of my friends, none of them were here tonight, still I nodded in the guy's general direction. A few minutes later some girl came to collect the bidding money, I handed it to her. She smiled and curled her hair around her finger but I just ignored her, I wasn't in the mood to take any of them home tonight.
Thinking about home made me remember my dad. My surroundings were everything my dad wouldn't approve of, they weren't what he deemed good enough quality. Yet the activities that we did, illegal street racing, wasn't something he'd be proud of either. I knew he questioned where I was, yet I never told him. It wasn't like I was a coward. I just knew that some things were better left unknown. This was one of those things. Besides, deep down inside, he didn't want to know. They say ignorance is bliss.
We were behind some factories, in downtown. There was a connection of alleys that made it perfect for the racing. The pavement had holes; there were broken pipes, which explained the puddles and slick road. Somewhere off to the side, there was vapor coming off from one of the tubings of a building. This made for a perfect secluded area for us to enjoy. Sure, cops would come, but only when they were having a slow night and wanted to show to the media that they had caught illegal street racers, that they weren't slacking on their promise of keeping the city safe. Safe my ass.
A girl started walking in front of us, stopping right at the middle. In her hand was a red bandana. She looked at all of us, seizing us up, trying to guess who would be the winner. Then her eyes fell on me. She put a hand on her hip, and the other near her mouth, where she bit on a nail, trying to act coy. I just moved my head from side to side, wanting to pop my neck and release some of the tension I got from just waiting there. Seeing that I wasn't paying attention, she flipped her hair over her shoulder, and tried to bust out her chest, a last attempt to flirt with me. Someone wolf whistled off in the distance.
"I got places to be so get on with it," I snapped. She gasped, giving me a look of indignation. I just stared back through half lidded eyes.
With a pout, she lifted the red bandana and then instantly brought her arms down. Thanks to super fast reflexes, I was past the starting line before the others even had time to process the fact that the race had started. Running through a huge puddle, I wet the girl that had started the race. Whoo-oops! I laughed continuing in first place, and before I knew it, I had passed finish line with no problem whatsoever, all the other racers had some serious catching up to do. Of course, no good racers had been involved today. Those weren't usually until the end of the month. Yet, I still got cash from winning these races.
Without getting off my bike, I made my way over to collect my prize from that one wet girl. I scolded her for getting wet then blew a kiss at her before speeding off home. I felt like nothing more than a nice hot shower and then passing out on my bed.
So what'd you think? Do you think it had potential? I'd love to hear your guy's thoughts, so please, hit the lovely review button and tell me what you think. - SW
