The Sequel
Author: Anne O. Nimus
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Prologue ***
author's Note" Hey
people! I'm back with the sequel. I know that Chapter 6 sucks that's why I'll
make this better! (Kei12 and Inot I hope that you're both going to review
this!) Anyway, enjoy!
"Hitomi… Hitomi… Hitomi…"
"Van? Is that you Van? Where are you?"
"Hitomi… I need your help…"
"My help? What can I do? Tell me Van!"
"There's not much time… I have to go…"
"Van!" Hitomi screamed. She woke up. "It was a vision. I
have to know what's happening there!"
"Hitomi! Make it fast we're leaving in an hour!" Her mom
told her.
"Oh no! I forgot! We're going to leave for… what country was
that? Aaaah! Just dress up Hitomi!" She told herself.
"Hitomi!"
"Coming mom! Hey, where are my bags?"
"Hitomi, if you're looking for your bags they're right down
here already! Now get moving! We might miss our trip!"
"Yes mom!" She hurried downstairs.
"Well, it's about time you showed up Hitomi. Ready to go?"
"Yes mom, I'm ready to go."
"Come here sweetheart, we're going now." Hitomi's mom
addressed to Hitomi's brother.
"China! China! Sisbumba!" Hitomi's brother joyously said.
"China?" Hitomi said questioningly.
"Ya! We go China!" Her brother told her inside the car.
"We are?"
"Hitomi, did you forget? We're going to China for your
vacation for school. We're staying there for two weeks." Her mom answered.
"Two weeks?!"
"Don't worry Hitomi, I will make sure that after the two
week vacation from school, you will be in one piece."
"But that's not the problem!"
"Well what is?"
"Fa-- Oh, nothing mom."
"Hitomi, you're stressed out. Take a break first okay? This
vacation will do you good."
***In the airplane***
"Well, how can I help Van if I'm inside an airplane going to
China?" Hitomi thought.
"Hitomi?" Her brother asked her.
"Want peanuts?"
Hitomi smiled and looked at her brother. "No thank you."
"You think of that guy again? Van?" Her brother asked her
while chewing.
Hitomi kept silent for a while and then said, "Why do you
ask?"
"Is he your boyfriend? Is he nice? Can I meet him? Is he
older that you? Is he the king of Papaya?!"
"What?! What are you
talking about? No he's not my boyfriend… why are you suddenly interested in
knowing these things?"
"You were shouting his name the other day." His brother said
almost whispering.
"Oh that. Just forget that incident okay?"
"Okie!" His bother said and continued eating peacefully.
"Not my boyfriend… why did that hurt my feelings? I mean… he… didn't
propose to me and all but we did… kiss… Ahh this is getting on my nerves!"
***At the Chinese hotel***
"Miss Kanzaki, this is your room. I will be your personal
bellboy. My name is Hwang Ho."
"Hwang Ho?" Hitomi asked.
"It sounds familiar to you? I never saw such a pretty face
before."
Hitomi blushed. "No, I mean, isn't that a name of a river
here in China?"
"Yes, my mother named me after that river. She named my
other siblings after the names of some of the oceans and seas and waterfalls
here in China. She has a weird taste I should say." Hwang Ho laughed.
Hitomi smiled. "Well, I guess I'll go inside now. Please put
the bags inside later in one corner."
"Yes miss, as you wish."
"Call me Hitomi."
"Yes miss Hitomi."
Hwang Ho then left after bowing politely to her.
"He seemed like a nice guy. I guess we'll get along just
fine!" She went inside unaware of the danger that lurks behind her.
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Author's Note #2 Sorry
if this part sucks. I happen to hate all my fanfics. I'm not so good at
writing. Besides what do you expect from me? I'm no expert! Okay, I'm going;
chapter 1 will be done after this. Wait for it! Thank you! Oh, I forgot to tell
you, "Review this please! I beg of you! I'm in desperate need of reviews!" J
