Hello people! please stick with this story
And now, the character ages.
Keitaro:20
Naru:18
Shinobu:17
Motoko:19
Kitsune:21
Sarah:15
Su:18
Mutsumi:21
Haruka:28
Seta:28
Tsuruko:28
Ranma:20
Akane:20
I know those aren't the real ages, bear with them.
I don't own Love Hina because Ken Akamatsu does.
What would happen if Keitaro had practiced some techniques? What would happen if Keitaro was the best in using those techniques? What were to happen then?
Chapter 1: welcome to the Hinata
Keitaro's POV
"Wow! Look at that! It looks so beautiful! It's changed so much over the 15 years I wasn't here!" I said as I walked up the stairs to the Hinata.
*KNOCK! KNOCK!*
*SILENCE*
*KNOCK! KNOCK!*
*SILENCE*
"Hello? Anyone here?"
I opened the front door. I walked around the Hinata until I found the Hot springs.
"I haven't had a good bath in a while." I said as I put on a towel and went into the hot springs.
A girl suddenly comes up to me and says
"Oh hey Kitsune! I want you to look at these, do you think they got bigger?"
"I'm sorry miss but you have the wrong person." I said calmly.
"HELP! THERE'S A PERVERT IN THE HOT SPRINGS!" the girl yelled for help.
'Damn! I must have walked into the women's bath instead!' "I'm sorry!" I said as I started running but I bumped into another girl "sorry!" and kept running.
Another girl with a sword runs over to the girl I met in the springs and asks her "What happened Naru?" 'so her name's Naru!'
"A pervert was in the bath just a few seconds ago." the girl named Naru said.
I kept running but I was quickly trapped by them on the rooftop.
"Why are you here!?" the girl with the sword asked
"I don't know why!" I said honestly.
"LIAR! SECRET TECHNIQUE: ROCK SPLITTING SWORD!" the girl with the sword yelled.
Once she used that technique, I used a counter technique
"Secret technique: reversal! I then made a ball of ki that I threw at the ki attack. It dragged the other ki attack with it.
The girl with the sword dodged the attack"Wha- Where did you learn that?"
"I'll tell you if you tell me how you know the Shinmei-ryu's school techniques."
"I am an Aoyama, that's how I know those techniques. How about you?"
"I am the best student in my school and the best fighter in my family. My name is Kaitaro Urashima!"
"Oh. In that case, I am sorry for doing this Mr. Urashima. Please accept my apologies." the Aoyama said bowing very deeply.
"Motoko! Why are you apologizing to this loser?" Naru asked.
"I am apologizing to this 'loser' because he is the most respected and powerful fighter in the Shinmei-ryu dojo and also the best fighter in the Urashima family, who, I will remind you, owns this building." the girl named Motoko said to the one named Naru.
"Well I don't care because he is a peeping tom and a pervert!" Naru said starting to run at me preparing to punch me. When she was about to punch me, again out of pure instinct, I grabbed her fist and dislocated her wrist for a bit.
"AAAAAAHHHHHH!"She screamed in pain as I countered her attack
"Naru! Don't be so disrespectful! This man can kill you in the blink of an eye! He's stronger then me! And he's-"
"The grandson of Hinata Urashima or as I call her, Granny Hina." I finished for her.
"That's not possible Motoko! This man is a liar and he's only cheating!" Naru tried to argue but when I appeared behind her with my katana pressed lightly to her neck but not enough to draaw blood.
"Believe me now Naru?" I said that last part very coldly. Scared near to death, the only response she could do was nod her head."Good." I sheathed my katana after that.
"What's going on here?" Haruka asked as she went to where we were
"Aunt Haruka! These girls tried to kill me!" I said
WHACK!"How many times do I have to tell you! Don't call me aunt! It makes me feel old" she muttered that last part to herself. She faced the girls.
"So tell me girls, why were you trying to kill Keitaro?" She asked the girls
"Because he was peeking on us in the baths!" Motoko said to Haruka.
Haruka then turned to me.
"I didn't know that that was the women's bath! I swear! Where's the men's bath because I really need a bath?" I asked.
"There's only one bath, this is a girls dorm after all." Haruka answered calmly
"See! I told you that he was peeking on us! He knew this was a girls dorm but he sneaked in and went to the baths." Naru tried to argue
"But I didn't know this became a girls dorm! I thought this was still an inn. Besides, how could I know? I was in training for the past 10 years!" I argued.
"See girls? He didn't even know that this wasn't an inn anymore." Haruka told them
"But-" Naru tried to argue again but was stopped when I started to unsheathe my katana(tenshi no hane). When she shut up, I sheathed tenshi no hane again.
"Why is he here?" Kitsune asked
"I don't know why I'm here actually. Granny just called me over." I replied
We started to walk back to the living room where Haruka just told us why I'm there.
"THE NEW MANAGER!?" Naru and Motoko said in unision
"Yes he will be our new manager."Haruka told them calmly.
"If it is Keitaro, then I'm okay with it, he is my friend after all."
"Wait a minute! You're my friend!? You must be Mo-chan! I missed you so much!" I said before I hugged her.
"I missed you too Kei-kun!" Motoko said to me after we separated.
"HOW CAN YOU BE OKAY WITH THIS MOTOKO!? HE'S A MAN AND A PERVERT" Naru yelled.
"Naru, do you want to take a closer look at Tenshi no Hane?" I asked her
"Who's that?" She asked.
"Tenshi no Hane? He's Kei-kun's katana." Motoko answered for me.
Once Motoko said that, I started to get closer to Naru threateningly.
"GET BACK YOU PERVERT!" She yells and catches me off-guard with one of her punches
"How dare you hurt Kei-kun!" Mo-chan says. Mo-chan then goes into a fighting stance going against Naru
"Why are you defending that pervert?" Naru said.
"He's not a pervert! He's also my best friend! My only male best-friend! Then only person in this place who knows how I feel! He's one of the only people who I can trust!" Mo-chan defended me and Naru started to back off.
"Mo-chan, don't kill her." I said.
"But Kei-kun."
"I said don't KILL her. You can do what you want as long as you don't kill her."
"Okay!" She said enthusiastically.
"Motoko!" Haruka said threateningly.
"Fine." Motoko relented. Too afraid of Haruka to do anything.
"I am not going to let that pervert be manager"
"Naru, it's either me being manager, you on the streets, or Tenshi no Hane being close to your heart. Which one?" I asked her.
"Me being on the streets." Naru said, being stubborn.
"Okay then, here's your eviction notice, your lease is terminated Naru, you have 1 day to pack up and go home."
"What!?"
"I said, Get out! your lease is terminated so your not welcome here anymore, You will be evicted by force if you stay any longer"
"I was- please don't!"
"Fine, but now I'm the manager so get used to it!"
"Fine!."
After that, each person at the table left, one by one. They came back a while later for dinner. After the days events everyone was silent. After they ate dinner, they went to their rooms to think about what happened. Eventually everyone became tired and went to sleep.
I hope you liked it! Please stay tuned for the next chapter.