hey it is .33 this is a remake for my story that i made i personally didnt like it so i am going to make a better version of it oh and thankyou Danielsi for putting what you realy thought about this story so that is another reason and disclaimer i do not own phineas and ferb
phineas pov
It was the perfect day in the Tri-state area, it was about seven in the morning when I woke up due to my alarm clock so i climbed out of my bed and woke Ferb up.(This is a normal morning for the flinn Household)Phineashas been acting strange latelyunfortuneally ferb saw this and asked him this:
"hey phineas are you ok you have been acting realy strange lately?"asked ferb worriedly
(sighs)"im ok...realy" I replied quitely and scratching his ear
"i know your liying to me you allways scratch your ear when your liying" said ferb
"well ok, im starting to feel wierd around isabella and im getting this warm feeling inside of me when im around her, what is it? i asked in desperation
all of a sudden i saw a grin form on ferbs mouth then he said "this thing you are feeling is called love phineas" whispered ferb
"in other words you are in love with isabella" ferb shouted with glee
i was shocked i didnt know what to do so i just froze for a couple of seconds until i herd my mum shout us to come downstairs for breckfast so i opend the bedroom door and walked down the stairs to see five bowls full of cereal so i sat next to my brother and started to only thing i could think about was isabella now that i liked her all i wanted to say were those three words I LOVE YOU so when we all finished we walked down the hallway to get to the back yard. But then i herd a knock at the door so i ran to open the door but then i saw iasbella at the door saying her familliar catch phrase.
"whatcha doin"isabella asked
"we dont know yet, do you have any sudgestions?" i replied with a blush
"well you could make a transporter" she sudgested with a gigle
"ok,Ferb i know what were gonna do today"i shouted "hey were is parry" i said in unision
Time skip four hours later
it was raining quite heverly outside
"hey guys" i shouted
mensioning for them to come over they all looked at the transporter and stayed silent, but then phineas realised that isabella was staring at him whitch made him blush
but he carried on and talked about what the transporter could do but then Bulford said:
"can you test it out for me phineas" he said in his gruff voice
"ok I said"
then i put my thumb up to tell Ferb to turn it on but when Ferb pressed the button an electric bolt fired at isabell unfortunally she was frozen with fear and saw her crush dive right infront off her to take it instead of her but then the sight horrified her she saw phineas on the floor unconscious on the floor coverd in blood on the floor.
phineas pov
the last thing i herd was isabella shout "no phineas not you"he knew thier was more exept he could not hear the rest of it.
hey guys what do you think of the remake of this story please tell me in reveiws if this version is better than the past one if it is ill continue with the story pleas review :)