First attempt at writing ANYTHING, Comments and reviews welcomed and helpful(:
Fionna woke up to the tree house door slamming shut. The sun peeked its way around the curtain into the room. She sat up and stretched, the natural moan escaping her lips. She got up and went downstairs finding that Cake wasn't home. There was a note on the kitchen counter reading: 'Hey baby, went to Lochro's house for a while. Be back soon. Luv ya!'.
Fionna sighed, she hated being home alone, with no one to adventure with. She thought of going to the Candy Kingdom, and instantly changed her mind. Prince Gumball has been out-of-town for who knows how long, hopefully he's okay. Fionna pondered a bit, 'maybe Marshall can adventure!' she thought. She excitedly hurried back up stairs to get ready. She threw her pajamas on the floor and pulled on her light blue shirt, and dark blue skirt. She ran into the bathroom and stared into the mirror.
Realizing her messy hair, she grabbed her brush and tried unsuccessfully to comb out the tangles. After about 5 minutes of brushing, she gave up and pulled her bunny hat over her head. She ran downstairs and flew out the door.
Fionna arrived and knocked on Marshall's door, no one answered. She impatiently knocked again. Marshall opened the door, hiding in the shadow so he couldn't get hurt by the suns powerful rays. Fionna walked in and turned around. Marshall was wearing an old band shirt and boxers, hair messy and eyes droopy.
"Oh glob! Did I wake you up?" Fionna said, feeling guilty."Yeah, but its cool dude." Marshall smiled and rubbed his eyes. Fionna returned his smile, "I was wondering if you wanted to go adventure with me? We could go slay some gross monsters!" "Yeah! Let me go get dressed" And at that Marshall floated to his bedroom.
Fionna's tummy growled, and she realized she hasn't had any breakfast. She wandered into the kitchen and grabbed an apple, taking a big bite. Marshall floated back downstairs, hair still messy, but with his black skinnies, soft grey sweater to protect him from the sun, and his red converse. Fionna tossed him an apple. Marshall smiled and sunk his teeth in, sucking all the juicy red color out. He tossed the soggy grey thing into the trash and grabbed his umbrella.
"You ready?" He asked. "Of course! Lets go!"
They wandered into the forest searching for any signs of distress or needed help. As they were walking, Fionnas hand brushed Marshalls "Sorry!" Fionna said as she blushed and looked away. Marshall glanced down at his hand then looked at her. He smirked and flew up close to her. "What? You afraid of touching a vampire?" He winked and showed his fangs. "Dont make me kick your butt dude!" Fionna said annoyed. She reached into her pack looking for her sword. When she couldn't find it, Marhsall pulled it out from behind his back. "Are you looking for this?" He smirked and waved in front of her face.
Fionna pouted "Give that back!" She yelled. "No way!" He said then she punched him in the arm and yanked it out his arms. She looked back at him and stuck her tongue out. "You better keep that in your mouth, or I just might have to take it." He said as he floated away. Fionna giggled and blushed, and then followed after him.
Tell me what you guys think! Should I continue?