IMPORTANT!: Hello :) This is my first fanfic so please don't be gentle. I want to know exactly I did wrong (or right) and how I could improve. This story is in two parts. This is, obviously, the first set in Hinata's point of view. The second half is the same story but in Sasuke's POV. Before I post the second part I'd like to know if I did good on the first part. Also, the sections that are italicized are past memories. If anyone needs help understanding then please let me know and I will be more than happy to assist you :)
Also, I do NOT own Naruto :( ENJOY!
I was six. He was seven.
"Sasuke-kun?"
We had known each other forever.
"Sasuke-kun?" I called out, voice shaky.
Together until the end. That's what we had promised.
"Sasuke-kun! Where are you?" panic in every word.
Who would have known that "forever" actually meant "forever?"
*gasp* There in his brother's room was my Sasuke-kun. Only something was different…something was wrong.
Who would have known that an "us" could, and would still exist?
He was covered in blood. So much blood. The air was filled with the smell of the foul liquid, and his sobs. "S-S-Sasuke-k-kun?" I moved closer trying my hardest to see what was at his feet.
Time goes by slowly. The world, ever changing. We move from place to place so no one gets suspicious. It can be hard, but I would do anything for him.
"Sasuke-kun, p-please. Y-You're scaring m-me." As I moved closer the clouds outside made way for a light that rivaled that of the sun. The glow from the moon illuminated everything in the room and instantly I was sent into a state of shock.
He's stopped aging now. He's 20 and I'm 19. We both attend the same college. All of the girls lusting after him, the guys after me. We each have our few shares of dates. Mine end in laughs while his end in blood.
As the milky white rays of the moon shone off the blood I could see his parents at his feet….dead. He was on his knees, crying. "Sasuke-kun. P-Please….w-what happened?"
I see it in his eyes, the hunger. It doesn't surprise me. We've been together since birth it would seem. I've brought the subject up numerous times and he always goes silent. Maybe I'll ask after my date tonight….
He slowly turned to me. As our eyes locked, I was met with ruby red eyes. "Sasuke-kun! Your e-eyes! They're not black!" He opened his mouth to say something but before he could I let out a scream. He had fangs! Each dripping with a sticky red substance. I could see the hurt in his eyes as I cringed away, too afraid to do anything helpful or comforting.
"Leave."
As I came in the door, a little later than I had planned, I knew he would still be up. "Sasuke-kun?" Out of the shadows and into the moon light he appeared. "Hn." I smiled gently at the man in front of me. Shoulder length hair, black like his eyes. Pale pristine skin that seemed to shine in the moon light.
"You didn't eat tonight did you?" I asked shocked.
"What do you care?" he looked out the balcony window at the city. Beautiful lights twinkling, like a Christmas tree and the moon the star on top. I stepped closer and touched my hand to his face, making him look me in the eye, "I know why you haven't eaten, and it's alright. Normal is over rated anyway. Please." I gave him one of my smiles held only for him. I could see the slight blush and I thought back to that night….
His body stiffened. He was cold and wet with blood.
"You know I can't do that." I said sternly hugging myself closer to him.
"I'm nothing but a monster now Hina-chan! I'll only hurt you!" He attempted to push me away but I refused to let go. I grabbed his face and stared him deeply in the eyes which were slowly fading back to black. "Sasuke-kun, I love you and I will always be with you!" He took my tiny hand into his equally small hands and blushed before saying, "I love you too, Hinata- chan."
He moved his mouth to my neck. I could feel his breath tickle me ever so slightly. One hand gripped the back of my head securely. Before he did anything else he whispered, "Hina, a-are you sure? You know yo-?
"Sasuke, when I said 'always'…I meant it."
"…hn."
As the ghost of a smile graced my face his fangs punctured my skin and the first few drops of blood fell. After that everything went black. I woke up, what seemed to be days, maybe YEARS, late. My head humming and I had the most insatiable hunger.
I opened my eyes and the world around me looked new. Colors were more vibrant, sounds more distinct, and I could smell the purple orchid I kept next to bed… MY BED? My eyes moved to the right of me and I saw him lying there, on his back beside me, eyes closed.
"Glad you're awake. I was actually starting to worry."
"Oh really now?" He looked at me and gave me a rare smile. "Really, Hime." He cupped my face in his hand and with his thumb stroked my cheek. The sight of his wrist was driving me wild and when I tuned all other noises out, I could hear the rush of his blood. His, hardly-ever-heard, chuckle snapped me out of my trance and I focused on his face. His eyes were that deathly beautiful red again.
"Don't worry you'll get used to that." He moved us so that I was now sitting on top of him. He turned his head to the right exposing his neck. His pale beautiful neck. I guess on instinct, my head dipped into the curve of his neck. He smelled of night and blood and it turned me on and intensified my huger even more. As my fangs grew a little longer and I finally broke skin, right when the first few precious red rubies made their way down his neck, Sasuke wrapped his arms around me in a securing hug and told me, "Welcome to the life of a vampire, Hime. I'm sorry but I'm a selfish lover."
I was 19. He was 20. Together, forever. Always by your side.
