Soooooo, this is my first FanFiction. This story is short right now because I'm trying to see if it even worth building on.
But I might continue it anyway maybe a short fanfic like a couple chapters or so, you never know with me.
The girl is starring out the window, her wavy brown hair a cascading waterfall down her back. The sun illuminates her milk-n-honey colored skin as her crystal blue eyes scanned the trees. She is waiting for someone, but who? A rustle in the trees, her head snapped towards it. A boy is crouched in the branches of an oak his black hair wild around his head ,his olive tone skin a compliment to his deep brown almost black eyes. He raises one eyebrow in a questioning way. She smiles showing a mouthful of perfect white teeth.
The girl runs into the yard holding a back-pack in one hand. She stares up at the boy, he stares back. She looks back at the house an old white Victorian in the country surrounded by farmland, cows graze lazily as she made the biggest decision of her life. A look of determination crosses her face as she turns back to the boy. She nods and in one powerful, graceful movement her wings snap out, they are a pale sandy color freckled with light brown heavier on the top lighter on the bottom. She takes a running start then leaps into the air and takes off. The boy snaps out his own set of wings, black as midnight, and takes off after her. They fly in till they are tiny dots in the forget-me-not blue sky.
Some comments and helpful criticism would be nice. Thank you.