Hello this is My first Giripan fanfic. Please review and give me tips please.
Axis Powers Hetalia isn't mine but the fanfic is.
Japan looked at the clock on the wall. 8:00p.m.
Japan: 8 o'clock, Greece should be in the chat room right now. I can't what to tell him about the stray cat that visited me.
He turned to the computer and opened up the chat room.
JapanisMe has entered
JapanisMe: Hello. Greece?
Japan turned away form the computer.
Japan: Strange Greece is always in the chat room at 8. Where is he?
Greece : Right here Japan.
Japan:.....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
20 minutes of screaming later.
Japan: Sorry I wasn't expecting you Greece. What brings you here?
Greece:.......I had a nightmare.
Japan: Really?
Greece : About you.
Japan: Me?
Greece started to tear up. As he sat down next to Japan.
Greece: You were hurt.......really bad. You were dieing. Right in my arms. You told me not to worry......Your body was broken everywhere with blood all over and your organs spilling out. I was very worried when I woke up so I ran to you house.
Japan hugged Greece and kissed the top of his head. Wiping away Greece's tears and rocking him.
Japan: Greece. I'm not going to leave you like that. I love you.
Greece smiled as japan said I love you.
Greece: Japan can I sleep here?
Japan: Of course Greece