Authers note - This is my first story so don't be harsh and flame i can do with constructive critisism but i can't handle idiots who are just pissy on a side note of that please point out spelling errors because they will be there so yea. One last thing um yea i dont know what the pairing is going to be right now but expect a harem maybe mediem sized so with that let us begin
"normal people dont exist"
'Fuck normal people'
"Stupid puny humans"
'still stupid meat sacks'
Jutsu names
Disclaimer: I DONT OWN ANYTHING NARUTO SO yea
Date: October 10th 9:30 pm
Somewhere inside Konohagakure
Running thats all he can think of, he had been running for what seemed like days. His legs were on fire or was that the torches the villagers where holding he didnt know. How could he know he didn't even know why they hated him but it must have been bad if they did this to him chaseing him in and out off alleys down the long streets of Konohagakure. 'why do they all hate me?' was all the young 6 your old blonde could think of before his fell clenching his leg in plain. Looking down he saw a kunai knife sticking half way into it. He screamed in agony hoping that his jiji's guards would save him. He was wrong this was not going to be a good day. Looking up he saw a man in a tori mask looking down on him it was ANBU he knew that but now he was scared the last thing he thought was 'I'm going to die this time' then a fist landed in his face knocking him unconsious.
He didnt know whether it had been hours or days, but when he awoke he felt pain running though his body and the smell. Where was he that the area would smell so... sterile so unblievably sterile. 'god i must be in a hospital or dead but' "wait" was all he said before falling back onto the hospital bed hearing a familiar voice yell "NARUTO!" and then his mind sliped back into the blackness of the abyss.
flashback 12 hours earlier
The blonde now known as Naruto was awakened to the feeling of... warm liquids dripping down his arms and legs. 'What is it blood?' Yes it was and with that he screamed. "AHHH WHAT DID I DO PLEASE TELL ME!" His please fell on deaf ears as the villagers and shinobi continued to beat the 6 year old boy screaming that he deserved it. "Demon brat you know what you did!" or "You killed my wife demon scum!" after many hours of being beaten, stabbed, burned, and various other forms of torture his mind finally caved in and his eyes hazed the last thing he herd was a whisper in his ear. "Today we finish what the Yondaime started six years ago." and whith that he faded to black and then SPLASH!
flashback end
Narutos mindscape
"A sewer...couldn't they have just left me where i was?" Looking around he walked towards the sounds of what could only be discribed as tails thrashing about trying to fight someone...or some thing 'where am i?' Again with the running, he was running but there was no pain. In this place that looked like a sewer he saw a giant gate and inside this gate was where he saw it the face that filled his nightmares but how did it get here. How did it find him "Who are you and where am i?" The light of this place seemed to fade lightly as the being on the other side of the gate thrashed about. "Well this is the irony only on deaths door do you appear to ask who i am?" The being did not seem to even acknolage his questions at all this anouyed him greatly. "Listen here you damn..." Then it sank in IT had said deaths door 'what did it mean by that?' "I am the Great Kyubi no Kitsume! Be glad that i even allowed you into my pressance!" "k-k-kyubi! your THE REASON THEY HATE ME!" In a state half way between fear and loathing the blonde looked into Kyubi's eyes as menacing as they seemed. "yes." A simple sad answer to him showed him all he needed to see it was in its eyes two solom emotions only two. Anguish at what they put him though because of her and one other anger that she couldnt protect him.
Then it happened a new voice just as menacing sounding but with less emotiong "It is time for you to pass into the next life young one." And there she stood looking at him pale white skin wraped in a white kimono and an oni mask adorning her face. Black hair falling down her back as her mask came off she was beautiful her DDD sized breasts shown only though the tightness of her kimono along with the curves of her body. 'you have one chance dont screw up' not wanting to admit who this must be he denied it "w-who are you?" His words meek as he seemed he knew this was death and apperantly she was beautiful. "I think you full well know who i am and you" She looked at Kyubi "Why is it we always meet like this little sister?" Kyubi looked at her ghostly figure and with a plumb of smoke the large beast was no langer in the cage. In its place stood a 5'3" woman with red and orange hair and a pair of fox like ears flattened sadly looking down. "Because i have failed again sister" Sadness poured out of her voice as if it was the only thing she knew. "wait what is going on... i can't die yet!" 'His voice not filled with horor or sadness or even fear anymore but what was it...dermination?' The two women looked at eachother Kyubi was first to speak.
"Naruto i can not heal you.. not this time the villagers have done to much to you this time." She sadly looked at her sister her DD sided breasts above her arms as she crossed them her nine tails swishing behind her her face pleading her sister to help "Kyubi you know there is only one way for than and do you really think he can handle the responcibilitys that come with being MY summoner?" The boy looked at the women confused for a moment and then spoke "I can't die yet i have people to protect people i can't let down!" Both women's necks looked like they would have snaped if they had turned their heads any faster in shock at how a boy so young could understand a consept most adults did not this time the shinigami spoke calmly and assertively. "Little one you don't even know what those responcibilitys are yet you would forsake the life as you know it now for breath?" The blonde looked down as his face was shadowed by his hair.
"If it means protecting those who have cared about me than...i would do anything." His determinationg shocked both women the elder looking to her sister "Kyubi..." Kyubi nodded and looked at her sister solomly. "yes sister i do think that as he grows he will be able to...i will train him until you deem it is time for him to start your training if you will take him." To say she was shocked would be saying that life didn't have to end one day it would be untrue. "Then it is settled" With these words she drew her sword from her side and looked calmly at the boy. "This will hurt and when you awaken from this you will feel a burning in your arms do not show anyone the seals unless Kyubi tells you it is ok" With that she thrust her sword into his shoulder and he screamed in agony falling and waking slowly seeing he was in the hospital still seeing a vague figure infront of him. "Jiji?"
Side note:Tell me what you think because this is my first story so yea hope to see at least someones comments
