Author's note: Just like summary says, this is a rewritten version of one of my older fics I 'am Sorry! The reason why decided to rewrite this is, if you had not seen the older one before, I think that it sucked, especially compared to what I can do now.
Warring, I might make the ending deviate from the old story. Also, I would like it if you give me your opinions on this first page of the rewrite; like what you like about it or what you didn't like about and what could I do to improve on it, stuff like that. I want to improve my writing and not be stuck at same level forever.
"Now that everyone's here, let's start the meeting" Keroro said to his platoon members.
As the others paid attention or at least three of them Giroro, Tamama, and their ally Angol Mois did, the other one Kururu seemed he like didn't give a crap and did his own thing, which knowing him that was probably what his intent, they heard a voice, whined "You guys started the meeting without me?!" They soon heard something dropped from the ceiling. It was their other platoon member and ally, Dororo. Though he always worn a mask covering his mouth, they could tell what his expressions was through his eyes.
"Oh, hey Dororo. When did you get here?"
"You always do this! Everyday it's the same thing! You act like I 'am not even here!"
At that moment, the others noticed their platoon member was about to go into another one of his Trauma modes. Thinking fast, Keroro spoke up "We didn't forget about you" sending the others into a shock.
"R-really?!"
"Yeah, beside we were just getting through with all the boring stuff anyways"
"Oh, okay?" Dororo said, as he went back to his usual self, which caused his allies to take silent sigh of relief. He then take his seat and listen in to what was being said.
As the time passed however, that task became difficult to do. Despite his Sargent's words about not forgetting him, they did, to the point he might as well be an empty space in a chair and it would not make any difference. What was it about him that made others forget about him? Was he too old fashion, was it that he was too quiet, or was it something else that he was unaware of? He could never figure it out, no matter how hard he tried, though he wished did.
Before he knew, it was lunch time. Keroro soon brought out some snacks and passed them out to everyone; everyone that is, but him. He tried to get Keroro's attention and he did, but only just a little, before the Sargent ignore him completely. At that moment, he gotten back into his Trauma mode. This time his teammates did not seem to noticed, they kept on eating, before finishing and going back to the meeting. After a while of not being noticed and getting back to normal, he got up and walked out the room. It's not like anyone would notice or even care, or would they?
Not long after that, Keroro said "Alright, let's call it quits for today"
At that moment, Tamama raised his hand and asked "Hey, Sarge! Why are you ending the meeting early today?"
"Isn't oblivious Private? I wanted to give my platoon a break from those nasty meetings, besides isn't leaders supposed to give a break to his subordinates, every now and then?"
Just then, Giroro grunted a little before saying "Nice try Sarge, but you only ended the meeting early, so you could be the first in line for the new Gundam model sale, that starts today!"
"You could say, the early bird gets the worm?" Angol Mois interrupted.
Keroro squeaked out "Gero?" as he was at a loss for words.
At that moment, Kururu chuckled slightly before Tamama gave the Sargent a disgusted look saying "That's low Mr. Sarge"
"How did you find out?" Keroro asked in a surprised tone.
Giroro made another grunt, before replying "I've heard you talking loudly about it from my tent all week" Keroro didn't answered lost for words, for the second time that day.
At that moment, the Tadpole had gotten bored and looked over to his right side and unintentionally interrupted them. "Huh; It looks like Dororo already, left?" Almost everyone in the room, turn the attention at the now empty seat, expect for Kururu who just chuckled for a bit.
"He left, a few minutes, after turning off his trauma switch that Keroro caused"
"You could say, a speedy recovery?" Angol Mois asked, before the attention shifted towards the Sargent, who was at lost for words, yet again.
Giroro soon took a sigh, got up, walked to the front of the door, and asked himself "How did he put up with you for so long?!" before walking out of the room.
After he left, Kururu said "Well, I 'am out!" before getting and going through a trap door. It was not long before Tamama, saying that he had something to do with Momoka and Angol Mois, saying that she had something to do Natsumi, and left; leaving the Sargent all alone.
Meanwhile, some distanced away in a clearing in a forest, where an alien space craft lie, an alien life from was talking to an unknown person on an intergalactic communication device. "So, have gotten to earth yet?" asked the unknown person.
"Yes and I hear there are several Kerorains living here."
"Good; now capture, at least one of them, bring them to me, and you'll get your pay."
"Consider it done!"
An hour away, Dororo was jumping on the roof tops, deep in thought about the events that happen a while ago, until he heard something odd happening in an alley. Curious, he went to investigate. He soon spotted a Viper standing, looking through an opening.
"Perfect;" Muttered the Viper.
Meanwhile, Keroro waited, standing at the back of a line to a toy store; ticked about getting their at the worst time and the line going so slow, but excited all the same to get in. Just then, he heard someone calling out, too him. "Psst! I hear, you're in searched of some Gundam models?"
"Damn It! How dose everybody knows about that?" Keroro asked himself, as he turn his head towards the direction of the voice.
Suddenly, at that moment an elderly woman appeared in front of him, saying "I have a son that has some rare limited edition models lying around, he doesn't use them and is looking to give them a good home to put them; if you want you can have them for free?"
"Gero! No joke?! Thank you!"
"We just have to go to my son's house, so I can give them to you"
Keroro soon accepted the lady's offer before she then led him down some streets and into an ally way, when all the sudden, someone landed in front woman."Dororo, what are doing here?"
"Keroro, get away from her!" commanded Dororo, as pulled his katana up and gotten into defensive stance.
"What?!" Was all Keroro could uttered, before the woman immediately removed her garb, reviling to be a Viper in disguised, grabbed him, taking out a Taser, and shocking him from behind. His legs became like jelly, making him fall down to the ground with a loud thump. The last thing he heard was teammate calling his name, before the darkness engulf his sight and silence flowed over.