edited as of 1/13/13
Apparently, when you do copy-n-paste for a story, all quotation marks disappear. Huh.
Anyway, I found these mistakes when reviewer pointed them out. Thank you by the way. I also found some other errors that I fixed.
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People say that love is like a hurricane...
I think they didn't mean it literally.
As I was changing into my cute sky blue hoodie/shirt/skirt outfit, Usopp yelled out over the den den mushi system "Nami!" I rushed outside to see what was going on, when my heart dropped. A hurricane, the size of Sandy, (Where the hell did that name come from? Who's Sandy?) was on a direct collision course with the ship. I yelled at the crew to get the sails furled before the ship capsizes. It didn't help when it was 5 in the morning and the boys just defeated the navy and some pirates the entire night.
I went down there and personally slapped each of them as hard as I could since I couldn't give them doubles. As they grumbled and came on deck, they saw what was going on and they rushed to follow my every direction to make sure the ship didn't flip over right there and then. God I hate this weather, makes me want to kill God. Even though Luffy already beaten him. I looked at the hurricane to see it s direction of rotation and how wide it was. I told Franky to prepare some cola and get Coup De Burst ready in case we needed it cause shit likes to go down every time we think we are safe.
After I told Franky what to do, I had Usopp turn the ship to match the rotation of the water so we can go around it instead of through it. Bad idea, I thought as the ship got buffered by waves 60 yards high. As the crew was trying to batten down the hatches and tie themselves down, I was blown off the ship by a sudden gust.
As I went overboard, I yelled my clothes off, literally since my hoodie/skirt/blouse got unzipped and fell, leaving me with my bra and panties. I started to shiver when I hit the water. The water wasn't cold, in fact it was pleasantly warm, but I shivered at the contact. As I surfaced, I saw the ship right next to me since we are both stuck in the same slipstream. I yelled to get someone to rescue me when a hand flew and grabbed me around the midsection.
Luffy reeled me in, and pushed me next to him, while having his arm staying around my belly, making it look like he was hugging me.
"Are you okay?" Luffy said.
"Yeah, you can let go now." I quietly told him.
He looked down and saw that I was more naked than not and blushed. I looked down and saw what he saw. I was wearing a regular cotton bra and panties and they were soaked through, showing my assets . I blushed when I noticed that and tried to cover myself. I quickly looked around to see if the crew could see me and Luffy, yet at that time, a fog rolled in obscuring everything that's not 3 feet in front of me. My blush crept across my face and chest when I heard what he said and even more so when I felt what he did.
He kissed me.
"I love you, Nami."