Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters.
From me: This is the first part of the story hopefully ill post a new chapter every other day.
But only with feedback otherwise I wont know if anyone's reading it will I? Tell me what u
think, as this is my first fic. All you other writers keep up the good work. (Sorry bout the
summary ill try and change it when I have a better idea of where I'm going!)
You could use a good kiss…
A fierce wind swept through the desert of Egypt. No one felt it because no one was
around. A piercing scream rose from the ground. No one heard it because no one was around. The ground
shifted and a great chasm opened up. From the earth came a man or what was once a man a rotting
corpse now. From this chasm followed another rotting corpse just as alive as the previous.
These two men watched as the chasm closed up behind them. Together they turned and walked deeper
into the desert.
She walked through the dark, dusty corridor to the room at the back. A banging noise was coming
from the crate in the corner of the room. Well you couldn't really call it a crate it was more
of a very large box. As she got closer to the box the banging noise got louder and louder. She
reached forward but quickly snatched her hand back. She didn't know what was in the box. Past
mistakes had opened her eyes to future dangers. She scolded herself inwardly. 'No harm ever
came from opening a box' She reached forward again toward the padlock. The key had been left
in the lock. 'Rather clumsy' she thought to her self. She turned the key slowly and pulled the
lock off. No sooner had she done that then the lid burst open. She let out a high pitch squeal,
which was then accompanied by a more masculine screech.
"Evie, oh thank god its you. I thought I was going to be stuck in here forever." Evelyn looked
down at in the box and let out an exasperated sigh.
"Oh Jonathan, what on earth are you doing in there?" Jonathan looked back up at her with a
purely innocent smile.
"Oh you know old mum, me and O'Connell, just a bit of fun." Evie crossed her arms over her
chest and gave him an Evie death glare mark 1. Jonathan swallowed and smiled sweetly at her.
"Okay, okay me and O'Connell were playing poker and well I lost. And seeing as you said no
more gambling with money we gambled with…."
"Yes!"
"We were playing forfeits, Before you say it I know that it sounds childish and I'm very sorry
for playing in the boxes…" Jonathan stopped talking and looked down at himself. 'What am I
doing, I'm a grown man. I don't need to be explaining myself top here. I sound like a child.'
One look at Evie changed everything. "Sorry old mum."
"Oh Jonathan what am I going to do with you two. I can't leave you alone for two minutes.
Speaking of which, where is O'Connell?"
"Oh you talking 'bout me. I hope its nothing bad!"
"Oh Rick there you are. Why was Jonathan in a box? Now don't tell me it's because of some stupid
forfeit." Rick looked at her and smiled his guilty as sin grin. "Oh why do I bother." She
smiled and gave him a kiss. "Come on you two lets go home, its late" The three left together
and walked back to the Carnahans house. They were unaware however that they were being watched. Two men in dark cloaks stood silently in the shadows.
From me: This is the first part of the story hopefully ill post a new chapter every other day.
But only with feedback otherwise I wont know if anyone's reading it will I? Tell me what u
think, as this is my first fic. All you other writers keep up the good work. (Sorry bout the
summary ill try and change it when I have a better idea of where I'm going!)
You could use a good kiss…
A fierce wind swept through the desert of Egypt. No one felt it because no one was
around. A piercing scream rose from the ground. No one heard it because no one was around. The ground
shifted and a great chasm opened up. From the earth came a man or what was once a man a rotting
corpse now. From this chasm followed another rotting corpse just as alive as the previous.
These two men watched as the chasm closed up behind them. Together they turned and walked deeper
into the desert.
She walked through the dark, dusty corridor to the room at the back. A banging noise was coming
from the crate in the corner of the room. Well you couldn't really call it a crate it was more
of a very large box. As she got closer to the box the banging noise got louder and louder. She
reached forward but quickly snatched her hand back. She didn't know what was in the box. Past
mistakes had opened her eyes to future dangers. She scolded herself inwardly. 'No harm ever
came from opening a box' She reached forward again toward the padlock. The key had been left
in the lock. 'Rather clumsy' she thought to her self. She turned the key slowly and pulled the
lock off. No sooner had she done that then the lid burst open. She let out a high pitch squeal,
which was then accompanied by a more masculine screech.
"Evie, oh thank god its you. I thought I was going to be stuck in here forever." Evelyn looked
down at in the box and let out an exasperated sigh.
"Oh Jonathan, what on earth are you doing in there?" Jonathan looked back up at her with a
purely innocent smile.
"Oh you know old mum, me and O'Connell, just a bit of fun." Evie crossed her arms over her
chest and gave him an Evie death glare mark 1. Jonathan swallowed and smiled sweetly at her.
"Okay, okay me and O'Connell were playing poker and well I lost. And seeing as you said no
more gambling with money we gambled with…."
"Yes!"
"We were playing forfeits, Before you say it I know that it sounds childish and I'm very sorry
for playing in the boxes…" Jonathan stopped talking and looked down at himself. 'What am I
doing, I'm a grown man. I don't need to be explaining myself top here. I sound like a child.'
One look at Evie changed everything. "Sorry old mum."
"Oh Jonathan what am I going to do with you two. I can't leave you alone for two minutes.
Speaking of which, where is O'Connell?"
"Oh you talking 'bout me. I hope its nothing bad!"
"Oh Rick there you are. Why was Jonathan in a box? Now don't tell me it's because of some stupid
forfeit." Rick looked at her and smiled his guilty as sin grin. "Oh why do I bother." She
smiled and gave him a kiss. "Come on you two lets go home, its late" The three left together
and walked back to the Carnahans house. They were unaware however that they were being watched. Two men in dark cloaks stood silently in the shadows.