Ok dudes, this is my first ever story, so try not to be too critical. It's very short, and I made it up when Twilight became the craze. Please review to tell me how awful it is, and how I should remove it immediately.
Jacob's point of view
I was standing hear, at the edge of this cliff, when I first saw her.
I just couldn't see point to life anymore, since Bella went off with that bloodsucker. Even after he hurt her, she still went running back to him. Jumping off this cliff was the only thing that I could think of that might just kill me. Either that, or break all the bones in my body to cause enough excruciating pain my pack would put me out of my misery.
But then I saw her. Her pale skin, glistening in the sunlight, she could only be one of them. A leech. But that didn't matter. Her bright, red, startling hair, flowing down her back like a cascade of, funnily enough, blood. Her high pitched, girly voice, even the sound of her name sent a chill running down my spine.
Victoria.