A/N this is my first ever thing written on this website. I've been reading for ages so I thought I'd try it out. I want to be a journalist not a creative writer but I gave it a go. Also I'm top of my class in English. It's properly not very good and it's only a one-shot. But could you review telling me what's wrong with it please
Katie x
Double L
"It the double L"
Chloe turned round puzzled. "Lois, what the hell are you on about?"
Lois swung round looking worried "Lang Lang, Lois Lane. See he wants me to be the new Lana"
Chloe sighed "Not this again Lo. Come on we have been through this like ten times. Clark loves you, for you."
Lois nodded "I know but it seems too good to be true. I love him so much, which is VERY scary. But he's a flipping alien for god sake. He's superman, literally-"
"Lois" Chloe cut of her incessant rambling raising her voice. "How long have you been with Clark? Two and a half years. You live in the same apartment. You share a bloody bed.
The door opened. A handsome man stuck his head around the doorway.
"Why are you shouting, Chloe? My super hearing is trying to block you out. But you're louder than Lois when you wake her up before ten o'clock on a weekend. That's loud!"
Lois laughed and turned to Chloe "Why was I worried again? This man knows me inside out."
Completely confused Clarks eyes widened. Lois bounded to the door engulfing Clark in kiss. Chloe giggled "See!" she shouted.
Clark flinched, his hands flying up to his ears. Lois laughed again.
"Chloe, staying for dinner or what?"