Hey everyone! This is my first fan fic so I'd appreciate if you'd review with some suggestions. Thanks my peeps!
"Girls! Time to get up!" Kurenai shouted up the stairs. After receiving no answer, she sighed and walked up the stairs. Banging on each door as she passed, "C'mon get up! You were well aware that this school started early when you accepted their invitation!"
"All right, all right, we're up, we're up. You can hang your whip up now," yawned the girl with pink hair, Sakura, as she trudged down the hall to the bathroom.
"Ok, but if you guys are not up in 10 minutes, I'll be back with some ice water. I'll make good on my threat too, don't you worry." Kurenai said as she headed back downstairs.
At Kurenai's last comment, the other girls threw back their covers and started quickly pulling their stuff together.
20 minutes later after some clothing confusion and a few fights over rights to the bathroom, all four girls came trooping down stairs ready to go. Sakura was wearing a black skirt, a white button up shirt with a pink plaid tie hanging loosely around her neck, white ballet flats, a black headband holding back her shaggy pink hair, and a pink and black backpack slung over one shoulder with a small silver bracelet.
The girl with the long blond hair, Ino, was wearing a purple mini dress over black leggings, purple flip-flops, and a purple and green book bag; her hair was halfway back in a ponytail, she had a silver chain belt around her waist and was wearing a purple beaded necklace.
The girl with brown hair always up in two buns, TenTen, was wearing faded blue jeans, a green and black striped t-shirt, a pair of sneakers, a long silver necklace with a black rose on the end of it, and a green knapsack on her back.
The shy girl with dark purple hair, Hinata, was wearing a short gray skirt over black tights, with a light pink top that read "It's the quiet ones you have to be careful of", a hot pink choker with a black teardrop hanging off of it, and a bag similar in colors to Sakura's.
Sitting down around the table, the four girls were eating their cereal and speculating about what their new school was going to be like. They were all greatly surprised when they had received an invitation in the mail inviting them to enter the school. "The institution of tomorrow" the brochure said "catering to the best and the brightest, along with those who have special abilities" whatever that meant. They had all decided that, what the hey, they would give the school a shot and, who knew? Maybe it won't be so bad.
Piling into Sakura's car (they are all sixteen) they drove to school with the windows down blasting the stereo singing to their favorite songs.
I know it's not that long, but this is just the first chapter. I'm going to try to make the chapters longer. If no one reviews, I may not continue writing this story. So REVIEW!!