Hi everybody I'm still a rookie so please don't flame

It was July 16. 2988. Everyone was having a picnic outside cappytown when suddenly; a dark cloud started forming in the sky. King Dedede quickly pulled out his new toy, a titanium umbrella, and started showing it off. "I'm ready rain, whether it is raining cats and dogs,

Elephants, lions or anything! Even metaknight was ready by wearing a waterproof cape.

Suddenly a loud crack was heard in the air! Bolts of lightning came down from the sky and rain poured down… hard...Escargon got hit in the butt with a thunderbolt! Ouch, my poor shell, cried Escargon.

Everyone was in a state of panic! Suddenly, Kirby flew up into the dark sky and started sucking all the dark clouds. Hooray, that should do it, shouted Tiff. Even King Dedede was applauding Kirby for he was scared as a penguin! The mayor then told all the townspeople to stay in the town hall for the night.

When Kirby finished sucking all the dark clouds, he became Lightning Kirby. Kirby then used his powers to strike lightning bolts at the remaining clouds. YAY cried Tiff and Tuff celebrating. That night they held a party for Kirby. Everyone was happy that night. Or so they thought...

How was that chapter? Sorry it was short special thanks to metawarpstargal for helping me