A/N This is my first fanfiction that I've let go beyond paper. Reveiws
would be much appreciated, though no "i liked it. it was good :)" and the
like. Please use proper English and do a proper critique.
Hermione's Beginning
"Hm hm hmmm..." Hermione hummed as she watered the plants in her window sill box. She was very proud of herself for keeping them alive. It had been a very harsh winter, but when spring came and all of the snow melted, her miniature garded got along very well. Hermione glanced at her watch. The tiny hands pointed to 7:16.
"I'm glad I got up so early," she thought. "This gives me time to read a bit before work."
She happily sauntered across her living room and sat down in her special reading chair. She loved everything about her chair. It was very soft and squishy so that she sank a bit when she sat in it. Her living room was full of windows and Hermione had purposefully placed the chair in a position where it would be right in the way of the sunbeams that streamed through the windows on either side of it at any time of the day. Hermione picked up her book from the side table and became totally immersed in it for quite a long time..
Hermione's Beginning
"Hm hm hmmm..." Hermione hummed as she watered the plants in her window sill box. She was very proud of herself for keeping them alive. It had been a very harsh winter, but when spring came and all of the snow melted, her miniature garded got along very well. Hermione glanced at her watch. The tiny hands pointed to 7:16.
"I'm glad I got up so early," she thought. "This gives me time to read a bit before work."
She happily sauntered across her living room and sat down in her special reading chair. She loved everything about her chair. It was very soft and squishy so that she sank a bit when she sat in it. Her living room was full of windows and Hermione had purposefully placed the chair in a position where it would be right in the way of the sunbeams that streamed through the windows on either side of it at any time of the day. Hermione picked up her book from the side table and became totally immersed in it for quite a long time..