Author's : Ok I know that the first time I wrote this it really sucked but I was being home schooled and my mom wasn't teaching me anything at all, well last year my parents got divorced and I went to public school and have been in a English class, so I hope that my writing has improved at least some, so I am updating this story fixing the many mistakes in it, and I would like to personally thank Kizoku Seishin for being so much of a critic because if you hadn't I wouldn't have tried to update this story so thank you from the bottom of my heart Kizoku for helping me,

Thank you for reading my note, enjoy the story. The pairing is going to be Naruto/Tayuya and their will be major Sasuke, Sukura, and Kakashi bashing , so here we go!

Edited 3-26-10

"PUNY HUMAN!!"...demon speaks

"I'm the puny human"...humans speak

Sono Akuma Inai sono Akuma

Just outside Konoha the hidden village of the leaves, we find a young boy, bloody, beaten, broken, and crying, the boy was Uzumaki-Namikaze Naruto holder of the Nine Tailed Fox demon lord Kyuubi.

'Why do they hate me?...I have done everything for them! They still hate me, I bring their almighty Uchiha back hurt but still alive, but no!! The "demon child" is trying to finish off the Uchiha clan!!' thought Naruto

Flashback

As Naruto came closer to the gates of Konoha grin grew wider when he saw Sakura, with Sasuke on his back he ran a little faster till he was right in front of her, however his face grew into a look of confusion as he saw her clenched fist.

"Hi Sakura-chan look I brought Sasuke ba-" however he never got to continue as her clenched fist connected with the side of his jaw knocking him to the ground.

"You...you...demon piece of shit!, look what you did to Sasuke-kun!!, I told you to bring him back to me alive look, he's almost dead!!" said Sakura as she kicked him.

"Yeah!! kick the demon filth!" yelled a store owner with a leg missing, he was a active shinobi during the Kyuubi attack, but instead of chasing after the demon like a hero, he ran into his family's butcher shop which was prominently crushed by one of Kyuubi's tails.

"Lets kill him like we should have done when it was a baby!" said another man with so much venom you could taste it.

"No...Sakura-chan, it's not what you think he atta-"he again was interrupted when she took out a kunai and plunged it into his chest over and over again, blood splattered on the ground, as he let the darkness take him he asked one thing, " Why Sakura-chan?" as he said this a lone tear rolled down his cheek and fell to the ground.

Sakura was thrown on her back from a wave of red evil chakra, heads rolled on the ground beside her, the recently decapitated mob fell to the ground. Naruto said one thing, "Sakura Haruno you and your pathetic village shall pay for what you have done this day." he said demonically as she screamed out, "No, no leave me alone you monster!" she had her arms in front of her face to protect herself, the last thing she heard before she was knocked out was Naruto whispering in her ear, "You wanted a monster?, You got one." Then he vanished from the hidden village of the leaves never to be seen again, until the time for the leaves of the village to burn.

END OF CHAPTER 1